New ARSHI FF: KHUDHA JAANE...!!! Chapter 1 - Pg: 5 - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Too early to tell what type of relationship will exist between Arnav and Khushi. Lets wait and see.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing start.. Khushi did right and she doesn't need to feel guilty.. it is ankit's problem that is not able to take rejection.. however Arnav's lifestyle is bit worrisome.. but lets see how things shape up ahead.. loved the start..

have great vacations.. thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loved the prologue. It seems to be a very unique concept about falling in love, falling out of it and then moving on. Moving on - the most difficult part but the most necessary. But even more difficult than it is to move on in the truest sense, that is, not to be affected by one's ex and being cordial with him/her. Please continue it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
I m not at all interested in Ranbir-Deepika-Ranvir story..

But I just loved the prologue..
It's about Arshi...

Khushi was justified in her decision..
Ankit must understand her pov..

Arnav's life style is very low..
Does Khushi deserve it in comparison with the love of a over possessive lover..
I can't say..

Pls update soon..
I m really waiting for it,dear !!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I didn't know that you had already updated. Loved it! this was an amazing first chapter. The relationship essence which you conveyed in the prologue has been depicted here through khushi's difficult break-up with her boyfriend and also arnav's casual no-strings attached affair with sheetal. Now, I think the one which you had discussed before will be about arnav and khushi, as I have a feeling that khushi will fall for arnav but he won't reciprocate and it might be something casual for him. Ankit mentioning about unreciprocated love made me guess this. Though ankit and khushi's relationship might have resembled ranbir and deepika's affair(I'm guessing here as I am not too sure), I think it will be arshi who will represent it, since they are the protagonists.

Ankit and arnav are poles apart in their relationship goals. Both are at the opposite ends of the line. Ankit is extremely possessive while arvav is too nonchalant. At this moment, I don't think khushi deserves either of them. Already waiting to read next chapter. Update as soon you come back from your vacations😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Ankit seems so possessive of khushi and can' seem to let her go
Glad khushi ended things instead of stretching it
Interesting concept
Arnav doesn't like his dad
Update soon

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