rikara ss LOVE SONNETS (FTshivika)pt 3@pg3 16/3/18

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Finally I am coming with a rikara story... Wanted to dedicate this to all rikara writers
Out here... I writed this story for another couple... Now in rikara version...



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Part 1 @pg 1
Part 2 @pg 2
Part 3- pg 3


prologue

Like a breeze or like a rain he came and walk away like that... The love sonnets that I wrote lost somewhere in my dreams. Where is he...? The dreams are long forgotten... There is only one name in form of my love... I still remember the way your eyes spoke whenever you saw me... I will hold on to you still my last breath... After you came I forgot who I am really... The spell you cast on me is still there... The magic power that I want to sink in deeply... Even I forgot my existence... I felt the world stand still... The music that created by the nature have the same rhythm of our pure love... I don't know whether I can enjoy the calmness without you... I don't know if you are real or not... You promised me the moonlight but you give me the darkness... Where is our love sonnets?... Where is the magic we created together..? Why you let me leave if you loved me so much...? Why you walked away if you loved me so much...? Your love binds me to the same point where we parts... The darkness or emptiness,I don't know what is holding on to me... Or your non existing love ... You are the one, who wrote the love sonnets ... Yes, I am the one who give the music to it... But deep down in our hearts we are two in every means... What happened to that mist and rain drops that reflects our love... I don't need you in my life any longer...' Move on' is a word that you can use easily...but how can someone?... I am not sure about that... But I am sure if we are meant to be together... It will happened and you can't able to stop it from happening...



Plz comment and encourage me...
Ps: I am too nervous
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was beautiful😳...I can feel her confusion of why things happened the way it did if they were so in love...her questions were heartbreaking. But in the end she knew it was their destiny to be together so there was no need to worry ...ahhh...this tortuous game they call "love" ...Do continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AMIEO

It was beautiful😳...I can feel her confusion of why things happened the way it did if they were so in love...her questions were heartbreaking. But in the end she knew it was their destiny to be together so there was no need to worry...ahhh...this tortuous game they call "love" ...Do continue.




Thank u dear...
The first comment in this story...

Love is something written in destiny... It will happen when the right time comes...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it :D Beautifully written, the confusion is clearly visible , the pain and the questions that remained unanswered.
Despite all the pain and heartbreak and a wonderful start she knows that Destiny will find a way to reunite them. <3

Beautiful work dear.❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hope of her love is visible in her thoughts...
Pain that she is going through is still same until destiny wants good things to be happen...

Nice story ...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Guys so the first chapter is here...
I want to read your thoughts and suggestions tooo... So plz don't forget to comment


PART ONE


I kept my gaze outside the window... I liked the view... The perfect Indian village...anika is maybe waiting for my arrival...


The strong wind touched my face and take my unseen tears along with it... Before my eyes drifted into a sleep the contactor called me..




'next stop is yours ' I looked around for a single minute for recollecting myself... I arranged my messed up hair and my bags... I saw the bus stop from the distance...as said she is already there to pick me...


Her single view made me smile...

Finally the bus stopped and I get down from the bus... The fresh soft breeze touched my face along with her warm hug... I closed my eyes for a second to absorb the freshness ...


'gauru... After a long...' She said with happiness...




Anika is my childhood friend... When dad working in Bareilly urban bank we two studied together till tenth grade... And we shared a special bond...'A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND IN DEED.' We hold the friendship thought to our heart...it's too difficult to leave her when dad got transfer to Pune... But we kept our relationship to our heart... Our relation only grow with the years we were apart...


'how was your journey gauri?' She asked...


'great... Anika.,you changed a lot...' I said while looking at her deep brown eyes...


'you are still the same... No change but something is missing in your eyes... ' she looked into my eyes... I don't know why but my eyes turned into moist...


'gauri... What happened? Is everything alright... How was he?' She asked worriedly...


'it's over...' I said and walked past over her... I felt her gaze on my back... I stopped midway and looked at her...


'hey... I am hungry... Lets go ' I said smiling... She returned my smile and we walked through the roads cherishing our good old days...


'gauri... What are you doing now...? I never heard about after uncles death...'


'it is really difficult to live the same house anymore... One of my friend helped me to shift from there... And now I am working as an NGO in ooty...anika do you know how I enjoy my life there... But...' I stopped midway not able to speak my innermost thoughts...


'gauri... What happened...?'


'nothing... I am trying to forget everything... He and me is never meant to be together... But I never thought he walk away like that... ' I wiped my tears that starts to flow through my cheeks...


'hey..you didn't tell me about SSO... How is he?' I saw her cheeks coloured up...


'he is going to coming here.. Most probably next week... Then you can meet him...' She said shyly...


'don't you meet him yet...' I asked


'hmm yes we talked over phone and also meet each other through Skype...'


'oh!hi-tech love...' I teased her .


'ya we are not stuck in the generation where letters take the cupids' role... We are well developed...' She said while walking past me...


I remembered the memories that I trying to forget... The hundreds of letters we wrote each other... Anika you don't know how the feelings is conveyed through a letter... It has a deep connection between two hearts... Every letter was a love sonnets... We loved each other... But why? Something is always mystery in life... I felt the wind touches my face and my eyes like the way he do...deep down in my heart he is still there... My heart loving him again and again when I think about to hate him... But...


'gauri...where are you?...' I came back from my memories when I heard her voice...


'anika... I want your gagra choli ... You looks beautiful in it...'


'we will buy new one... Mine is too long for you... You are still choti ...' She laughed out... I hate someone call me like that...I like this height... With him it felt more intimate...when I kept my head to his chest... I can hear his heart beats... But ...


Again the damn tears make its way... I wiped it before she saw my face...

I decided to kept my thoughts aside and enjoying my limited days here... We two walked together through the village road while refreshing the special memories we two have...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Loved it :D Beautifully written, the confusion is clearly visible , the pain and the questions that remained unanswered.

Despite all the pain and heartbreak and a wonderful start she knows that Destiny will find a way to reunite them. <3

Beautiful work dear.❤️



Hi amel how are you?


Thank u for you words...
Keep reading and don't forget to comment
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: devildiva21

Very Interesting...
Continue Soon



Thank u dear
First part is up
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyadil

Hope of her love is visible in her thoughts...

Pain that she is going through is still same until destiny wants good things to be happen...

Nice story ...
Continue soon...



Good things will happen but only at the end... Until then the evil will play its game...

Thank u dear for ur words.. .

Ps: Between I loved your profile pic...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice. I really want to know if Gauri is talking about Om in here and if she is what happened for her to be so sad.😕 Continue soon.

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