30 Days To Make You Love Me (Day 5 Updated) ON HOLD - Page 2

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-Rehanna- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Day 4: Kiss Me, Kiss Me, Before You Miss Me-

Adhiraj awoke to something heavy over his body
Opening his eyes, he blinked fast

"Chori" he muttered
Devi smiled up at him
"Hello" she purred

She sat up so she was straddling him
"What are you"
Her hand covered his mouth, leaning forward she bit into his neck

"What , what was that" Adhiraj put his hand on his neck
"A love bite" Devi smirked

Adhiraj shook his head "Why would you do that, I dont want a Chauhan mark on my body"
"It is a mark of my love Adhiraj, all is fair, you can give me one to"

Adhiraj furrowed his brow
Devi waited patiently

Adhiraj pushed her down, before suckling onto her neck
Devi arched her back as she gasped

"Adhiraj, my god" she moaned
Adhiraj's eyes glinted dangerously
"Again" he groaned

Moaning his name again, his hand stroked her waist gently
All at once Devi pushed back, kissing his lips she pushed him down

Jumping up she ran away, her tinkling laughter making Adhiraj smile


Later on the next morning Adhiraj awoke, had it all been a dream or was Devi really here?

4 steps closer, 26 more to go!
Do you guys think it was a dream? Or did Devi pay Adhiraj a visit?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Beats me!!
You are the writer😆
Adhiraj should check his neck to make sure😳
And hers too...mauke PR chauka😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Day 2
Awesome. Seen falls many times but loved dialogue between em

Day 3
She's driving him nuts with her ogling, lovely. Adhiraj smiling is always a treat

Day 4
Hickey wow pretty modern Devi, nice!

Thanks for the updates, too good.
Edited by Pagalpinky - 7 years ago
-Rehanna- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Beats me!!

You are the writer😆
Adhiraj should check his neck to make sure😳
And hers too...mauke PR chauka😆

😆, I will ensure he checks😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Day 2
Awesome. Seen falls many times but loved dialogue between em

Day 3
She's driving him nuts with her ogling, lovely. Adhiraj smiling is always a treat

Day 4
Hickey wow pretty modern Devi, nice!

Thanks for the updates, too good.


Thank you! Im glad you're enjoying it, I will update soon!
I thought it was time for a change
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Day 5-
Day 5: Secrets, Suspicions And Seduction-

Devi laughed at the foundation bottle in her hand
"Adhiraj, its time for you to make your dream a reality"

Adhiraj stood up, checking his neck, there was no mark, yanking Devi forward he checked her neck, nothing

She raised her brow
He shook his head

"I thought" he muttered shaking his head
"You thought what"
"Nothing chori "

Devi smirked
"You're blushing like a girl with a crush, there something youre not telling me" she asked
Adhiraj pushed her away

"Of course not, you think to much of yourself chori"
"So im the first girl you think of when you hear the word crush"

Without thinking he replied
"Well you are my wife"

Devi paused, she had waited so long for Adhiraj to accept her as his wife
Tears glistened in her eyes as she looked up at him

Adhiraj stopped to, looking her in the eye
Just like that, the world had stopped

For this moment, she had waited forever
To just hear those words meant everything

Adhiraj was in two minds, caught up in his hate for the Chauhan family but his feelings for Devi seemed to make all sane thought go away

Adhiraj was suspicious of her
Why didnt she just leave him after all he did?
Why was she trying to make him fall for her?

Nothing made sense
Devi walked closer to him

"About last night"
Adhiraj glared at her
He knew he wasnt going to dream about Devi in such an intimate way

Her hand was suddenly on the back of his hair, tugging him down
"Im really good at making dream realities "

With that she walked away
Adhiraj effectively pining for her

But she was going to ensure, he came to her

Do let me know what you think!
Pagalpinky thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Too short
need more
Need more
Please
Thanks
-Rehanna- thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Pagalpinky

Too short
need more
Need more
Please
Thanks

Hey, thanks Ill ensure chapter 6 is longer!

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