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Roseline

@Moonstique

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Posted: 7 years ago

Rang De tu laal mohe...

Plot of the Ts :

Deepika a crazy dancer gets invited by her twin sister to the palace to dance. Deepika was tired and she wanted to rest. But her deep love for her sister forced her to accept the invitation. So at last she decided to go.

After going there, she found that her sister wanted to prove that she was better than Deepika by dancing.

Deepika wouldn't do anything accept dancing and follow the instructions.

One day , her sister gave her mehendi (homemade) . In that mehendi she had put some drops of acid.

Deepika without knowing this put on her hands . Soon her palm burnt .

By that red and burned hands she danced . The king was happy by this and decided to marry Deepika .

The story ends ..

Specialty

It gives nothing special message but just shows how a sister hates her twin sister and wanted to burn her palms. And Deepika proves that your burnt or hurted things can't make u looser until u feel being a looser. Their face is one but heart is different

Thank you

Please buddy for updates

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

lovely Plot.. With the Passion of dancing & love of one sis, , and Jealousy of another sister.. thanks fr pm !

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GorgeousSmile

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Posted: 7 years ago

Nice plot dear.

Now update a big update!! As you told most things in the plot.

Update soon as if it's your last one.

But don't give up writing...Do write😊

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Roseline

@Moonstique

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Posted: 7 years ago

Update 1

I was sleeping suddenly I got a knock on the door. I went to see who stupid was at the door disturbing me!

It was the post man came to give a letter . I heard that it was from Rajasthan ( Rajput region)

"Yes . What happened? Any letter for me?

Yes madam .

Stop mocking . Just give the letter and have a travel to the person to give letter

Sure madam . Here is a letter from Rajasthan by Padmavat...

U nonsense, you have worn big glasses and still u can't see its Padmavati.

Sorry madam, well madam who is she?

U don't need to know that.

I saw the letter and it has a busy letter by my sister to me

" Hey sister, how are u , sorry to disturb u

U always disturb me ,

" I have a good deal with u

U , and deal! Never!

"I have parcelled u the ticket come rajasthan

Why she wants me to go there?

"We want see your amazing dance.

U and see my dance ? What's happening today ... The times have changed

"So please do come

If I don't come u can be upset

And what after that ? I had to pack my clothes

Just then another one

Yes , maya my dear friend.. how come?

Happy new year deepz. I got a message that u are going to Rajasthan

Ya . I am forced to go there . For my sister's happiness

U don't know mocking . I know u love your sister

u know me very well.

Yes. Listen a good news but may be bad for you.

BAD?

Yes . We are going to have a ex-school meting party today night.

U said true . But I have to sleep. As fast as because tomorrow I have to move

Okays. Bye , see u soon

Soon I got the bus and moved to the train . But I was wondering about my party that I missed.

And at last I reached Home. My sister welcomed me. She gave me a room to rest.

Just I was taking out my clothes , someone was near my door

Precap : I heard them talking about some strange dancing competition.

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for pm dear

Concept was very nice

Superb update

Thanks for pm...

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 7 years ago

awesome update..
thanks fr pm..

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aanchal

@Loving_life

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Posted: 7 years ago

hey!!!
firstly Happy new year and thanks for the pm
now coming to the story, beautiful concept
it was awesome, sisters rivalry and all loved it
so she is going to rajasthan unaware of what's waiting for her
will be eagerly looking forward to see how her sister will trap her
so padmavati, padmavat all you mentioned and the FL name is deepika, is it deepika padukone because I imagined her all the while reading it, also maybe I'm her biggest fan lol
do update soon
loved the concept
will be waiting to read more
do pm me😃

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

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Posted: 7 years ago

Loved reading it

Continue more like this

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Roseline

@Moonstique

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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks u all for your likes and comments

Part 2:

Precap : I heard them talking about some strange dancing competition.

As soon as I possible I was taking out my clothes so that I can sleep . Just then I heard the guards talking about a dancing competition. I thought to ask them

Hey guys, what dancing competition u are talking Of?

Mam, actually there is a dancing competition between u and Your sister,

I think u should drink a glass of cool water and wash your face. I can guarantee you that my sister will never do like this.

But u can make the truth lie.

They both left. Then lei (a English women who was padmavati assistant ) .

Yes, what happened

I think deepz u should put some home hand mehendi made by your sister,

Not now, I am tired. I shall put when I am free.

Are compietion tonight. We don't have much time

Okay, so put it on.

Just when she kept that mehendi. Something unsual happened. Her palms seemed to. Be burn and when she washed she saw her hand burnt

Who gave u this mehendi?

Mam , padmavati gave me this..

This means she really wants to fight with me ? I thought.

What stupid is this, my palms are burnt how will I dance with this burnt hands ?

I will call the Raj Vadhya?

No, this is my fight let me fight . Anyways u go.

And mam dress?

I have selected. White colour.

Promo : (last part ) she comes and dances and the king selectes her

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Awesome update dear

Thanks for the pm...

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