Rang De Tu Laal Mohe #Part3#Page3 completed - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
It was awesome dear!!
Loved reading it!
Pleasee update soon! Honestly really can't wait!!
And sorry for late reply. Stuck with exams. :(
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Last part

Part 3 (last part)

Some members come inside depika 's room. They ask her to go and perform the dance.

Mam , so shall we start the competition? Asked the judges

Competition should have some rules and I don't know them so before starting , I want to know them and I also want to see the PRIZE " depika says knowingly.

Prize is the one who wins will marry the king and will be his.

Okay , I will be happy to perform 1st... music please (depika says )

Music is Nagada sang dhol baje.

She stops dancing and says a thank you and leaves the stage. It's turn of padmavati now . She was glad to show the king her Ghoomar. While dancing suddenly her leg slips and when she was about to fall down , deepika runs to her and saves her from falling down.

The king orders "Stop , Stop, over Deepika wins".

Padmavati argues "But how?"
The king says "helping others is the biggest Dharam. And a good queen should have the quality."

The king moves to her and asks "will you marry me?" Deepika sees all the audience and says boldly "No , I don't wan to be queen. But I will be happy if you gift my sister by proposing her for marriage. I love someone else more special then you.."

The whole audience gets annoyed they all ask in a chorus "whom? " . She says "MYSELF. I AM GREAT AND SPECIAL TO MYSELF"

*Jiya jiya re song is played*

Thank you...
I completed this ts..

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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Nice story...short but cute!!
Liked the way things turned and took place at the last!!
It was a different ending I guess!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice One :D
Loved thesong selection :D

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