FF:Meri Dulhan(July 30th/ Pg 70)

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Meri Dulhann?

Hello everybody!!! As you all may know my name is Ayesha... A person who loves to type or write fan fictions? Now my brain had plotted a new story which I wish to share with you all?I would also like to dedicate this to my friend Dimple and Rabiah appi?

Sixteen years back?

In Banaras where devotees from far and near came to visit the pure Ganga river and the temples of lord Shiv in the surrounding?Also nearby stood two mansions opposite of each other, owned by two wealthy Takurs of the town?

One mansion was owned by Raggav Pratap Singh, who lived with his five children and a wife?Sindoora, Mahua, and Chandra were his three daughters?.Sagar was the only son and the heir of the whole property.. Also they adopted Chinmay?Uma,Raggav?s only wife?s sisters son?

The other mansion was owned by Inderjeet Singh, who lived with his only daughter Vidya, and wife khusaliya?

Both Takurs were close friends , also their wives too?But Sagar and Vidya were bestfriends?They couldn?t live without seeing each other a day?Seeing the friendship among the two their parents had fixed their marriage when Sagar would turn twenty four and Vidya would turn twenty two they?ll get them married as soon as possible ,and that was a promise?

Unfortunately Raggav Pratap Singh and his family had to shift into the city as all there business was settled in Dehli?But Inderjeet Singh who was no less wealthy did not agree on moving away from his hometown?He ran all his business from Banaras?Sagar and Vidya were really sad by the decision, But what could they do? Before leaving Sagar promised Vidya that she is the only one who will become his bride?

Scene switches?

A beautiful young lady who looked no less then twenty one entered a huge living room?She wore light purple salwaar kameez and let her hair loose and wore small diamond earrings?She carried a arti plate in one hand and walked over to where the sofa set was placed?There sat two people which were the girls parents?She offered them Prasad and took their blessings?A servant took the arti plate and the girl walked towards the staircase when a phone rings?A servant receives it?The girl was now half way through the staircase when the servant stopped her and called her back down because the call was for her?

V-Hello?

Shalu-Vidya!!!

Vidya quickly recognizes the person on the line..

V-Shalu tum?Kasi ho or chacha chachi??(happily)

Shalu-mai bhi or mamma papa bhi thik hain or tum sonaho kya kur rahin thi?

V-Hum bus abhi abhi mandir say lotain hain or tori dher mai collage janay wallay hain?

Shalu-Same old Vidya?Acha pouchay gi nahi kiyou phone kiya ?

V-Oh haan kiyou phone kiya?

Shalu-(blushes) Meri shaadi honay wali hai or tum subko Dehli ana puray ga?Kiyou kay kaal meri sagahi hai or phir doh din baad shaadi?

V-Wow shalu!!!Tumhari itni juldi Shaadi...Per congratulations?Hum sub zaroor ahain gay?

Shalu-You better?

V-Haan baba baysuk maa ya pitaji na ahain per hum zaroora ahain gay?Per ub hum rukthay hain kaal ki tiyaari kurni hai na..Acha toh phir take care?

S-Take care bye?

They hang up and Vidya?s parents inquire who was on the phone?Vidya explains everything and Vidya?s dad lets Vidya and his wife go to the wedding as he couldn?t make it he asked for forgiveness from his brother?That evening Vidya and Khusliya took the train to Dheli and arrived in the early morning?They reached Shalu?s house which was also a big one?Chachi greeted b them inside and Vidya sees that all the preparations are being down for the engagement that is going to take place in the evening?

Scene switches?

In a big wide room ,on a round bed lay a young man on his stomach?Another person walked inside the room who was well known as Chinu?He walked to the bed and sat on it beside the guy who lay?

Chinu pets him on the back?

Chinu-Dadda othay na dhekay ajj meri engagement hai or app he istra so rahin hain?..Phirsay raat ko disco say dher say ahain thay kya app?

The person yawns in his sleep?Chinu shakes him and with no more struggle sat up a handsome cute looking young man?He stretched his arms?

S-Yaar Chinu itna acha sapna dhek raha tha woh bhi tot gaya..

Chinu-Kiskay sapnay dhek rahay thay app?

S-Meri Dukhann kay?(sighs)

Chinu-Kya pata appko appki Dulhann ajj shaam ko mill jahay?

Sagar smiles?

S-I also hope the same?

Precap:Vidya and Sagar bumps into each other?

I hope you liked it?I would really appreciate your comments?If u have time to then please do comment, as if you want me to continue?Till them take care and good bye?

(ff) Index

1. pg 1

2. pg 3

3. pg 6

4. pg 10

5. pg 13

6. pg 15

7. pg 18

8. pg 24

9. pg 28

10. pg 32

11. pg 34

12. pg 39

13. pg 45

14.Pg 48

15. pg 52

16.pg 55

17.pg 57

18.pg 60

19.pg 64

20.pg 67

21.pg 70

22.pg 72

23.pg 75

24.pg 77

Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago

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chand pari thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome start Ayesha! πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you Sonali didiπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ayesha...........meri pyaari behan.... πŸ˜ƒ

how cute that u started a new FF....soo cute and great start...wnt to see whtz gonna happen.... 😳 πŸ˜‰

by the way...awesome start...keepit up... πŸ‘
waiting for ur next update...

ur Sweet Sister...Nandoo πŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nandoo

Ayesha...........meri pyaari behan.... πŸ˜ƒ

how cute that u started a new FF....soo cute and great start...wnt to see whtz gonna happen.... 😳 πŸ˜‰

by the way...awesome start...keepit up... πŸ‘
waiting for ur next update...

ur Sweet Sister...Nandoo πŸ˜›

Oh Thanx sooooo much Di...But Di I waiting for ur update impateintly plz update soon...And thanx for ur fab commentπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww that was soo sweeeet... you writing style excellent at your age... hope you continue soon it was fab πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Heena(you can call me appi aswel πŸ˜ƒ )
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooh you are so good, well done I think that you are very creatieve ,even I couldn't have done that good job πŸ‘
you should be a writter or something πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update .. i ll definitely remove time to read this ... πŸ‘ πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ayesha

awwww i loved it 😳😳

thanks so much..... hey awww i feel soooo happy to be a reason for ur ff

dehkna...yeh ff 100 pages se upar jaye ga... thik keh rahi hoon na

lolπŸ˜†

plz cont soon

i love ur ff

its the best

marna pare ga tum toh bohut hi acha writer ho... allah appko hamesha ase he lehkne de

lolπŸ˜†

okiez will wait for ur next part

ttill then alvida n khudafis

lots of luv...

-----rabiah appi

ps. cont. soon Ayesha behen...

Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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brilliant story keep it up cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE!!!! omg what a wicked story=)) cant wait to read more=)) πŸ‘

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