Sukor - an innocent Love (Last Part) - Page 9

Cute update 😊

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Cute update😊

Suraj isn't a good cook😆.

Ajay's remark about the salt is funny.

Suraj is too harsh on Ajay, he isn't Mr. problem.

Love Chakor's innocence and childishness play hiding and seek.

Can't believe she revealed Suraj's secret about peeing😆.

Chakor is a foodie, poor Ajay and Suraj.

Looking forward to the next update.

Thank u so much I'm very happy u liked it

Hi sorry foe the delay.

Recap; Ajay comes with food. Gud then Suraj had over salted the breakfast. Chakor is now alone with Ajay who had talked to Riya n Vivaan too.

Suraj left for work. Chakor was alone with Ajay.

Ajay was smiling at her but Chakor was missing Suraj... Her face expression changed. From a happy to a sad crying face.

Ajay was kinda shocked. What's going on?. Chakor y r u crying I am here na. Chakor cries holding her hands on her eyes... . Chakor sniffs Suraj...

Suraj finally arrived at the hospital. He sees Riya who was checking on some patients. But he was feeling restless maybe he should call home once. Haan.

Suraj took out his mobile but then he thought again. If I call now she will never learn to stay with the others more than this Ajay will blame it is all my fault... As I am responsible for his... He is using Chakor for his stupid Idea to get back with Riya!.

Riya comes. Suraj don't u have to go on ur round. Suraj; yeah... Ajay is at my place with Chakor. When will u be there. Riya; after my shift. Suraj; which will end...? Riya; it will end at in 2 hours. Suraj; thank u. He left praying oh God please let him suffer...

God does listen to gud people .

Ajay; Chakor I'm bhai right?. Please don't cry. Chakor Ajay; uffo Chakor he shouts at her. Just then he understood what he did. Chakor cries even louder.

Ajay; ok I'm sorry. Look he holds his ear. Chakor looks at him... . Ajay; Please Chakor . Chakor; murghi!. {punishment he has to stand like a Chicken}. Ajay; Chakor it will hurt I can't. Chakor . Ajay; ok wait. She stopped crying n Ajay become a chicken. He had to put his hands through his legs middle from the back n hold his ears.

Ajay; ok happy. Chakor nod. N runs away. Ajay was helpless he falls backwards as his hands weren't that fast than his legs which wanted to follow Chakor. Ajay was looking everywhere but he couldn't find her. Even not after 2 hours when the door bell rings.

Chakor was happy she felt like Suraj come back home. She runs out from her hideout. To open the door. Ajay again shocked to see her. Chakor where were u? Chakor . My Suraj... She was waiting but it wasn't Suraj it was Riya. Chakor lowered her head with a sad expression.

Riya saw that. Chakor look what I have for u?



Chakor made big eyes. Hi she waved to the teddy bear. Riya; that is urs. Chakor took it n vanished. Ajay who was trying ro get Riya back had decided not to take any chances of this situation no... he left. Bye beat if luck . Riya was angry n irritated but Ajay left.

Chakor was again hiding. Riya; Chakor?. Where r u? Chakor didn't answer she was playing with her teddy. She hugs it made swing in her arms n the placed on her lap like a baby n made it sleep.

Riya was in the kitchen n prepared soemthing to eat. Chakor smells the food hee stomach had started to speak it made weird noises.

Chakors out of her hideout. Riya; there u r come I made food. Chakor nod. She comes closer to the table n sit on her chair. Riya was abt to sit on Suraj chair. Chakor screams NO!. Suraj place. Riya; ok I will sit here. Chakor nod.

Chakor runs away again without eating a bit Riya where she gone?.

Riya searched her but couldn't find her but the door bell rings. Again Chakor comea out n opens the door to see Suraj... but it was Vivaan. She pout again.

Vivaan; Chakor how r u? Chakor; sad. Vivaan; really but y?. Chakor; Suraj?. Vivaan rolls his eyes. Oh u r missing Suraj. Chakor nod. Riya; Chakor come n eat. Chakor; No.

She banished again n they searched for her.

Ajay arrived at the hospital. Suraj saw him. What r u doing here? Ajay; I am also very happy to see u.

Suraj; tell me! Ajay; the DNA test results r out it is the same DNA. Suraj smiles in relief. Chakor will get justice. Ajay nod.

At was very late Riya had left n Vivaan was still searching for Chakor.
But no way to find her. Suraj shift was going to end. Y do I feel like something is wrong? Chakor?.

Chakor felt his calling. Suraj?.

Suraj comes home he had a key n he used it just to see the mess at his apartment.

Vivaan; sorry but I don't know where ahe ia hiding. Suraj walks n comes oit with Chakor. Vivaan; u found her.

Chakor waa hugging Suraj tight. He was the only one who could find her. She then kisses his cheek.

Chakor; don't go away. I don't like the others. Suraj; bur Chakor they r nice. Chakor; I don't care.

Vivaan. He left the apartment. Suraj; that wasn't nice. Chakor holds him. Suraj; what was this?. Chakor; Chakor!. Suraj; oh Chakors tummy?. Chakor nod .

Suraj looks at the dining table. Let's go have some food. Suraj made her sit n feeds her.

In the night she hold Suraj hand. she placed her head on his lap tries to sleep..

Suraj didn't moved n finally checked his mobile to see all the message he had ignored.

SHE HAS VANISHED!?.

Suraj was laughing - seems like someone had alot of fun -.

He caresses her head n slept there too.

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It was very cute update😛

Originally posted by: _Sukorian_

Hi sorry foe the delay.

Recap; Ajay comes with food. Gud then Suraj had over salted the breakfast. Chakor is now alone with Ajay who had talked to Riya n Vivaan too.

Suraj left for work. Chakor was alone with Ajay.

Ajay was smiling at her but Chakor was missing Suraj... Her face expression changed. From a happy to a sad crying face.

Ajay was kinda shocked. What's going on?. Chakor y r u crying I am here na. Chakor cries holding her hands on her eyes... . Chakor sniffs Suraj...

Suraj finally arrived at the hospital. He sees Riya who was checking on some patients. But he was feeling restless maybe he should call home once. Haan.

Suraj took out his mobile but then he thought again. If I call now she will never learn to stay with the others more than this Ajay will blame it is all my fault... As I am responsible for his... He is using Chakor for his stupid Idea to get back with Riya!.

Riya comes. Suraj don't u have to go on ur round. Suraj; yeah... Ajay is at my place with Chakor. When will u be there. Riya; after my shift. Suraj; which will end...? Riya; it will end at in 2 hours. Suraj; thank u. He left praying oh God please let him suffer...

God does listen to gud people .

Ajay; Chakor I'm bhai right?. Please don't cry. Chakor Ajay; uffo Chakor he shouts at her. Just then he understood what he did. Chakor cries even louder.

Ajay; ok I'm sorry. Look he holds his ear. Chakor looks at him... . Ajay; Please Chakor . Chakor; murghi!. {punishment he has to stand like a Chicken}. Ajay; Chakor it will hurt I can't. Chakor . Ajay; ok wait. She stopped crying n Ajay become a chicken. He had to put his hands through his legs middle from the back n hold his ears.

Ajay; ok happy. Chakor nod. N runs away. Ajay was helpless he falls backwards as his hands weren't that fast than his legs which wanted to follow Chakor. Ajay was looking everywhere but he couldn't find her. Even not after 2 hours when the door bell rings.

Chakor was happy she felt like Suraj come back home. She runs out from her hideout. To open the door. Ajay again shocked to see her. Chakor where were u? Chakor . My Suraj... She was waiting but it wasn't Suraj it was Riya. Chakor lowered her head with a sad expression.

Riya saw that. Chakor look what I have for u?



Chakor made big eyes. Hi she waved to the teddy bear. Riya; that is urs. Chakor took it n vanished. Ajay who was trying ro get Riya back had decided not to take any chances of this situation no... he left. Bye beat if luck . Riya was angry n irritated but Ajay left.

Chakor was again hiding. Riya; Chakor?. Where r u? Chakor didn't answer she was playing with her teddy. She hugs it made swing in her arms n the placed on her lap like a baby n made it sleep.

Riya was in the kitchen n prepared soemthing to eat. Chakor smells the food hee stomach had started to speak it made weird noises.

Chakors out of her hideout. Riya; there u r come I made food. Chakor nod. She comes closer to the table n sit on her chair. Riya was abt to sit on Suraj chair. Chakor screams NO!. Suraj place. Riya; ok I will sit here. Chakor nod.

Chakor runs away again without eating a bit Riya where she gone?.

Riya searched her but couldn't find her but the door bell rings. Again Chakor comea out n opens the door to see Suraj... but it was Vivaan. She pout again.

Vivaan; Chakor how r u? Chakor; sad. Vivaan; really but y?. Chakor; Suraj?. Vivaan rolls his eyes. Oh u r missing Suraj. Chakor nod. Riya; Chakor come n eat. Chakor; No.

She banished again n they searched for her.

Ajay arrived at the hospital. Suraj saw him. What r u doing here? Ajay; I am also very happy to see u.

Suraj; tell me! Ajay; the DNA test results r out it is the same DNA. Suraj smiles in relief. Chakor will get justice. Ajay nod.

At was very late Riya had left n Vivaan was still searching for Chakor.
But no way to find her. Suraj shift was going to end. Y do I feel like something is wrong? Chakor?.

Chakor felt his calling. Suraj?.

Suraj comes home he had a key n he used it just to see the mess at his apartment.

Vivaan; sorry but I don't know where ahe ia hiding. Suraj walks n comes oit with Chakor. Vivaan; u found her.

Chakor waa hugging Suraj tight. He was the only one who could find her. She then kisses his cheek.

Chakor; don't go away. I don't like the others. Suraj; bur Chakor they r nice. Chakor; I don't care.

Vivaan. He left the apartment. Suraj; that wasn't nice. Chakor holds him. Suraj; what was this?. Chakor; Chakor!. Suraj; oh Chakors tummy?. Chakor nod .

Suraj looks at the dining table. Let's go have some food. Suraj made her sit n feeds her.

In the night she hold Suraj hand. she placed her head on his lap tries to sleep..

Suraj didn't moved n finally checked his mobile to see all the message he had ignored.

SHE HAS VANISHED!?.

Suraj was laughing - seems like someone had alot of fun -.

He caresses her head n slept there too.

...

Less Sukor but cute moments .


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Originally posted by: katheriene

It was very cute update😛

Chakor's friends had a tough day😆

Chakor was so cute😊

Loved the moment of Sukor😊

Waiting for next

Hehe Thank u

Originally posted by: Sweety7898

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Less Sukor but cute moments .


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Thank u haan but now he is back

Cute update

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Cute update

Chakor only wants Suraj with her. The way she kept expecting Suraj whenever the door rang was sweet.

Suraj has started to get attached to her too.

So only Suraj could find her, You're right, God listens to good people😆. The trio had a tough time with her.

Eagerly waiting for next part.

Thank U I'm very happy u likes it n u r right she is very much attracted to Suraj as much as he is to her

Hi I wasn't sure abt it but I decide to write it.

Recap; Chakor spend the day with Ajay, Riya n Vivaan but the only one she wanted was Suraj.

It's been a week now n Chakor can't live without Suraj around her. She adjust to be with the others but it's something she doesn't like but tolerate bcz of Suraj. He conviced her.

Chakor was sleeping in bed. When Suraj returned in the night. Ajay was sleeping in the hall. Suraj was on his tip toes walking to Ajay. He shakes him to wake him but Ajay was in a deep sleep. Suraj decided to let him sleep there putting a blanket on him.

Suraj walks into his bedroom he saw her sleeping with a sad face. She hates to sleep without seeing him or talking to him. Today it was very hard for her n him they couldn't talk to each other once.

Suraj checked on her. He puts the quilt on her n goes to the washroom with fresh clothes to change. But he was stunned in the washroom he found clothes to change for him.

He smiles on Chakor choice. She took a black shalwaar n a white shirt. Normally it is opposite but he took n wore it.

He comes out of the washroom n Chakor was sitting on the bed with a pout face. Suraj switch off the light of the washroom. Chakor saw him but Suraj didn't notice. He just look up to her. Suraj; Chakor? U awake? Chakor turned her face. She wasn't talking to him. Suraj took a pillow n a quilt he moved to the couch in the room. But Chakor didn't let him.

Suraj looks at her. Chakor I'm tired please let me sleep. Chakor; No... Suraj; but y?. Chakor; Suraj I miss. She stretches her hands for a hug. Suraj keeps smiling on her. One hug then u will sleep. Ok? Chakor cross her finger n nod innocently.

Suraj comes near her n hugs her. Chakor was happy. Story . Suraj; Chakor we said one hug n u r going to sleep. Chakor; No story... no sleep. Suraj; r u blackmailing me? Chakor; haan.

She rested her head on his chest. Story... She demanded n he gave in.

A story... He thought... he looks around the room but he just findout that he doesn't know much abt her. Her likes or dislikes. She doesn't have real clothes to wear.

Chakor made a fist n hits him on his chest. Story she pout.
Suraj; I don't have a story but I have something to offer instead of a story. Chakor was listening. Suraj; how abt to go for shopping tomorrow? Chakor claps . Haan. Suraj kisses her forehead. Gud Night. Chakor hold him she cupped his face n kisses his forehead too.

Suraj got goosebumps he wasn't sure what it could mean. But he knew Chakor won't let him go. She was holding his face. Soon she made him lie on the bed slept over him on hus chest. Suraj!. Suraj; Haan Chakor. Chakor Aiai...{we used to say at home aiai to it caressing}. Suraj; aiai. Chakor nod. He caresses her back n she fall asleep.

On the next morning

Suraj had a day off. Ajay had left with a note. If u need something call. Yes in this time he n Ajay become friends. Suraj made the breakfast he bought a cooking book .

Chakor woke up n was searching for her Suraj. She rubs her eyes to remove the sleep. She stretches her body n comes out. She smells food.
Chakor was happy not bcz of the fresh pancakes bcz os the present of Suraj. She jumped up n down with clapping hands.

Suraj; Chakor come have food we r going to spend who day bcz I have a day off. . Chakor wash her face n sat on her chair. Suraj feeds her she doesn't like if someone else feeds her but Suraj is allowed.

After getting ready Suraj took her out for shopping. Ajay; have u gone if someone sees her. Suraj; I don't think so. Ajay; what u mean? Suraj; what abt bhurka?. Ajay; oh wow not a bad idea but will she agree. Suraj; she already did. Ajay; ok fine.

Suraj drove with her to the mall in the car protest not to wear it anymore as it's to warm under the bhurka. Suraj gave her a hut n sunglasses to hide her face. She agrees.

Chakor n Suraj enters the mall. Chakor was holding Suraj hand n looking at him. At store Suraj was talking to the shopkeeper. Chakor felt jealouse. She stamps with her feets bcz all his attention was on that other woman Suraj tried to console her but she wasn't listening. Suraj; Chup! Shut up. Chakor we r here for u. Not for me. Go look if u like something I will buy u everything.

Chakor was hurt but calm voice made her happy she looked around n found many dresses. Suraj comes there. Chakor please take clothes u can wear alone or u just need less help. Chakor nod.

After the shopping of clothes which filled 3 shoppers the went to a toys store. Chakor was standing in front of the shop window. Her hands on the window with her face too.

Suraj walks in Chakor saw him n follows him. Suraj holds a doll. Chakor took the doll n smiled she got a bear family. A doll house n clothes n she got Ludo.

After the shopping the arrived home Chakor throw everything on the ground she wanted the shopper with the toys. Suraj gave it to her n she places her new friends on the bed.

Suraj saw her through the gap of the door. Suraj was mesmerized by her laughed n beauty. He doesn't know when but he knows he has fallen in fallen in love with her. But it is wrong... But he can't change this feeling he will keep her always save nothing n no one can harm her...

Chakor was playing after a while she fall asleep. This was Suraj real intention to change her habit n make her fall asleep by playing with toys. He wants n needs to keep the distance.

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So how was this?


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