Shiddat - IshRa Short Story (REPOST)

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I'd begun a story a few days ago which didn't receive the response I desired. I am about to repost in this thread all of the updates together and hope, that at least now I'll be appreciated. Please? 😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I'm trying to write a story that hasn't yet been attempted by writers here and I hope that I get your much needed support and motivation to encourage me to keep writing further. Without further ado, this story is the journey of a widowed Ishita who is a single mother to her five your old son Aditya.

Ishita who is scarred by the atrocities subjected to her by her ex mother in law and sister in law, fears accepting Raman's marriage proposal because she believes that history will repeat itself.

I sincerely hope that my readers give me a thumbs up because I LOVE writing and I really want to find my audience. Thank you ❤️
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Chapter One

Ishita went about running her regular errands as her thoughts lead her to think about what had lead her to where she was.

It had become unbearable for Ishita to stay a moment longer in a house where she was insulted day and night. It was only for the sake of her husband that she wouldn't speak up. Ishita knew that more than her, it was Karan who was breaking from within. Every day, Ishita would wear a fake smile on her face to reassure Karan that she was brave enough to tolerate the abuse of her step mother and sister in law.

There were so many moments when Ishita felt that Karan and she should just leave everything behind and begin a world of their own but all her hopes would come crushing down the moment she realised it was not possible. Karan was not the biological child of Santosh Sharma and she always reminded him that it was not out of love or even maternal instinct but sheer greed and selfishness to usurp Karan's father's wealth that she had to put up with him. Every week, since he had begun working Santosh Bhalla and Simmi took money from him merely to splurge.

Till Om Prakash was alive, Santosh Sharma posed as an ideal mother but the moment he passed away, the cruel woman took away all the money that Karan's father had saved up for his son's education and humiliated Karan for the meagre amount he would rarely spend on books and other necessities.

Santosh's hatred for Karan intensified the day he got married to Ishita and from then on everything went downhill.

Ishita was a middle class girl who studied at the same institute as Karan. The duo got to know each other as they were chosen by their lecturer to work on the same topic for a presentation. Other than discussing work, Karan and Ishita talked about their lives to each other and in Ishita, Karan found comfort and solace. It was then that he decided he would marry her. It was a decision that Karan took without realising that he is ought to tell Ishita about his demanding and obnoxious step mother and sister.

That's exactly what Ishita held against Karan and would never forgive him for.

Ishita snapped out of her thoughts as her little son ran to her asking to do his tie and quickly give his breakfast.

Ishita dropped Aditya, her five years old to school and drove off to work. She walked into her cabin as her Secretary told her about a woman whose mother in law tried to get her son to divorce her because she only gave birth to daughters. Ishita rolled her eyes at the matter and went ahead to discuss the case with the client. She assured Narmada, a seemingly educated and modern woman that she would get her justice.

It was soon time for her to collect Adi from school so she wrapped up her work and head out for school. Adi was standing at the gate impatiently waiting for his mother but faked anger as he finally saw her coming to him. ishita picked up her tiny tot in her arms and gave him a kiss on his cheek. She felt so much solace as she held her little one close to her heart. His anger melted in seconds and he was quick to ask his Mama out on a ice cream date. Ishita doted on Adi and never refused him any material pleasure because she just couldn't see the only person in her life unhappy. It especially didn't matter if his teeth would get cavities on them! What were the dentists for after all? 😉
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Chapter One (b)

Ishita took Aditya to an ice cream parlour to treat me to his favourite chocolate flavored ice cream but within no time the little one began to cry with toothache. Ishita felt so guilty for causing pain to her son that she instantly whisked him away in her arms and rushed to the nearest dentist clinic.

The concerned mother genuinely lost all her senses and literally barged into the dental clinic as Aditya clung on to her. Ishita rubbed her son's back to ease his pain and spoke lovingly to him trying to make him feel at ease. A gentleman had been seated in the waiting area along with his sister and niece and kept peeping over at the mother-son duo. He kept smiling looking at them when his sister nudged him. He then told his irritated sister it was Ishita and excused himself.

"Ishita"

Ishita was standing in front of the receptionists' desk waiting for her turn, growing more impatient with each passing second. At first she didn't even hear Raman's voice but it was only when she felt Aditya wriggling out of her hold did she turn around to see her neighbour cum friend Raman, behind her!

"Hi Raman"

Aditya reached his arms out for Raman to pick him up but Ishita felt uneasy. Raman sensed her discomfort and assured her that he could handle Aditya well.

"Ishita there's no need for you to feel uncomfortable. Tumhe toh pata hi hai ke Adi mere saath kitna khush rehta hai! Hai naa champ?" Raman said tickling Adi as the little one giggled.

"Thank you Raman" Ishita expressed her gratitude to Raman with a weak smile

"You're welcome Ishita and don't worry Adi bilkul theek ho jaiyega!" Raman assured Ishita as he pacified Adi.

It was just then that the receptionist called out to Ishita and then the next half an hour was spent in getting Adi's check up done with Raman insisting to stay by Adi's side the whole time. Habitually, Ishita thanked Raman whilst he just smiled and drove Adi and Ishita home.

Ishita requested Raman to stay back for coffee as he'd been incredibly helpful today. The duo enjoyed their coffee and Raman returned home to find his sister sitting on the sofa giving him angry stares. Raman decided to retreat into his room just to be stopped by his furious sister Simmi.

"Bahut acha lagta hai naa tujhe uss widhwa ke saath waqt guzarna, uski madat karna, uske bache ko pyaar karna? Arre aaj toh hadh kardi isne Mumma" Simmi spat out to Raman, inviting her mother to add fuel to the already spread fire.

"Simmi Di bas karo!"

Simmi glared at Raman and smirked at his words "Kamaal hai beta aaj se pehle toh tune kabhi mujh se aise baat nahi ki thi toh ab kya hogaya?"

Raman felt really angry hearing such crass words from his sister's mouth and if that wasn't enough, his mother also pounced at the opportunity

"Dekh Raman, tu uss ladki se dur hi raha kar. Ek toh uske pati ko marre saalon beet gaye aur upar se uska beta. Tu aisi aurat se dur hi reh toh acha warna kal ko kya pata tujh pe dore daalne lagge aur apne bacho ko baap dene ke chakkar mein teri bali chadwa de"

Raman was disgusted would be an understatement. As though something was pulling him along, he walked out of that house and spat at the threshold.

Raman was a lost man today.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story
Ishita is widow and single mother Aditya is her son toshiji is step mother of Karan who died toshiji and Simmi touchers ishita always poor ishita felt bad for her raman likes ishita I think Aditya is connected to raman
Pls continue soon

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