AvNeil FF :'A Millionaire's First Love!' (Upto Chap 24) - Page 44

Originally posted by: ...SA...

Res😳

Dhanya bhag humare, jo aapke darshan hue.!
Ab jaldi se unres bhi kar lijie.!

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u so much payal.!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

loved the update

Thank u so much dear.!

Originally posted by: paayaal

Well...I want a lot of things, but considering the fact that Avniz 100 paces behind Neil in feelings & about 1000 behind in confidence...I don't expect her to do much...not now! Exactly.! But u know sometimes some welcomed Accidents do occur, jinpe kisi ka koi bus nahi chalta 😉

But maybe, she can reveal a little of her fears to him...give him a little for so much that he has given her.. Hmmm.. sochne wali baat hai. Lemme ponder over it a bit

Also, I want Neil to take this opportunity to build Avni's trust...in him, his family, & their love for her! He is going to do that. Exactly that

I rem the scene from the movie Vivah...where Shahid shows Amrita framed pics of her family at his bedside! & then he talks abt creating space for her things & books...

This kind of scene is wat I visualize for your couple abhi...what do u say? I agree with u and lemme tell u i have already written something about framed pic but its very different from the movie. So dont have too much high hopes.! Well i can only say thats where our frequencies matched 😆

Thank u so very much payal for all ur inputs.!
Loved ur ideas and will try to justify them.

TEASER III



Heya My dear Readers slash Virtual Friends.!

I didnt even realise how and when we are this far in this Story. 12 chaps Down.!! Yayy.! It still feels like i started this Story Yesterday only. Maybe because of superfast speed of updates. 😆😆


Anway jokes apart, since the last teaser has already played out in story, so i thought why not to release another so as to increase ur Anticipations.!! So here i am with yet another teaser which will be playing out in coming 5-7 chaps or maybe more.




AvNeil were sitting In Neil's cabin and quiet evidently Neil was excited about the same. Its her first Visit to him in his Office and in his very own cabin. He didnt expect ever to have such a sweet gesture from her that is a surprise visit. Unbelievable.


His moment was ruthlessly broken by a feeble knock on the door.


Mr Sharma(Neil's PA) : Sir, Mr Mehta is here with all the informations u have asked for.


Avni turned to have a look on Mr Mehta and then to Neil with a devastated look of uncertainity. Her eyes throwing fire balls of accusations at him and Nose getting more red with each passing second.


"Inse Kya janna Chahte the Aap MR. KHANNA.? Mai khud aapko batati hu na." Avni roared with a heavy broken voice.


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"What.?? Avni Ghar Aai hai or Aap Mujhe Ab bata rahi hai Mom" Neil shrieked through his phone's speaker in a panick striken voice, immediately grabing on his car keys and rushing out of his office.


"Mom, Listen to Me very carefully. Chahe kuch bhi hojae Avni Mere Room me nahi Jani chahie. Mai bus thodi der me pahuch raha hu"


"But Tillu meri baat toh sun..."


Avni was slowly forwarding towards Neil's room while talking to someone on her phone. She pushed open the door and was completely shocked to see what presented to her eyes.


Is Neil Khanna trying to Dig out Avni's Past.?


Will Avni let him know Who exactly she is, what is her real Identity.?


What is Neil trying to hide from His To be Wife.?


Does Mr Millionaire has some Deep Dark Secret.?



Tune in to Know.

Follow the space

And Keep Reading "A Millionaire's First Love"



So thats it for now.! I dont exactly know in how many chaps it will be playing out. May be around 7-8.


I hope its good enough to build up your interests.


P.S Following NK's footsteps i am clearing it here, it may or may not play out exactly the way it is written but the essence wont be lost. Thats a promise.!



Lastly I wanna Take this opportunity to Thank each and every reader of my Story. Without u guyz this story wouldnt have been what it is now. It is your persistant Appreciations comments and Love and Support that kept me Motivating and pushing to write. So thank u so much guys from the bottom of my Heart. Each comment and each PM of yours is close to my heart.



The story is going to be more amazing and a complete rollarcoaster of so many deep emotions including Affection, Love, Anger, Admiration, Emotional, Heartwrenching and what not. So are u ready to Go through this Mysterious yet Beautiful Journey of our very Own AvNeil towards their Love and togetherness.?


Let me know in ur comments.!


Love
Riya

😲 yeh kya tha ri?😲 it's scared me😭 alag math Kardena meri cutiesKo plsss😭 yeh Neil Khanna Cid banke kyu ghoomre.🤓 I really want to know. Awesome teaser. It's really exciting. Pls update jaldi dedo.i know yeh play nahi karega ABI but yeh mujhe bhohath interesting lagre. Neil Khanna kya karrahi hai?😲 iam shocked'.

Originally posted by: avneil2

😲yeh kya tha ri?😲it's scared me😭 Hahaa. 😆 alag math Kardena meri cutiesKo plsss😭 Never ever. Dont worry yeh Neil Khanna Cid banke kyu ghoomre.🤓I really want to know. U'l know everything soon and trust me u are going to Love Neil more after all these. Have patience. Awesome teaser. It's really exciting. Thank u so much Pls update jaldi dedo.i know yeh play nahi karega ABI but yeh mujhe bhohath interesting lagre. Neil Khanna kya karrahi hai?😲iam shocked'. u will be more shocked in future epis. But Neil's character wont be butchered. Trust me.

Thank u saf for the comment.!
I am taking u in for the upcoming AvNeil ka Safar.!

Oh my gosh 😲

Originally posted by: docritu99

Thank u saf for the comment.!
I am taking u in for the upcoming AvNeil ka Safar.!

ri it was awesome.👏 humpe todi meherbaani karke jaldi update dedijiye.😳pls

Hey...Riya!! So happy u have completed 12 parts...!!
I really apologise for not reading and commenting..(only i know how much excited i always am to read and comment on this story of urs)!! Actually..I m a bit too consumed these days!! Well...i m still to read the recent two parts...so i quickly take a leave and come back to give my review...i shut my chatterbox till then..!!

Love,
Amayra..!!

P.S. Waiting for ur next shade too!!