AvNeil FF :'A Millionaire's First Love!' (Upto Chap 24)

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Heya Readers.!


So i have recently Got this plot and the story can be long enough so decided to start writing this FF.
Hope u guys will show ur interest and will like it.


Its a very different story from show so it'l will come under the tag "Alternate Universe" story.


So here i am presenting


A MILLIONAIERS FIRST LOVE





Pic Credits - .Avengers.




CHARACTER SKETCH



Avni Pareikh - A sweet simple joyous beautiful nerdy girl who is Doctor by profession. She is kind and empathetic who lives in Present and is honest in servicing mankind. She has a heart of gold and a smile worth million. Presently doing her Masters In Surgery(M.S) From Jaipur Medical College. She has a different take on Love(will be explained in detail later)


Neil Khanna - A flawless and succesful Buissness Tycon of Mumbai. Inspite of being on top he never left his ground roots. He is caring, understanding compassionate, sweet, kind, always smilling, well mannered and a Man of Principle. He believes in Love and waiting for it to enter in his life.


Neela Pareikh - Avni's Single Mother. A sorted and generous Women who runs A child welfare NGO and belongs to a decent(not so rich) family.


The Khanna Family Remains the same except that they are extraordinarily Rich.


Rhea - Avni's long Time Best friend who belongs to Mumbai. They have shared a fairly long time of life together and is like a family to her.


Ali , DD , Aakash , Anjali are all Avni's College Buddies and are also Doctors who are posted in same Unit. Anjali is her Roommate too.


There will be some random Characters who will be introduced acc to story.



A Quick Insight




The story is about a sweet kind hearted girl Avni who is engrossed in serving Mankind through her knowledge. Her life revolves around helping and curing people. She never had big dreams in her life. For her Love exist in only one form and that is her Mother, The SRK wala Love happens in Movies only.


Nothing always goes as per our wish as GOD is writing the script of our life. And as they say Love comes, when least expected.


What will happen When Her Life Crosses path with a Millionaire.?


What will happen when A certain Neil Khanna will show intrest in her?


How will she react to a sudden Marriage Proposal.?


Will her perception Towards Love Change?


Tune in To know.

P.S. The credit for the title goes to A brilliant Korean Movie but the plot is Completely fictional and is not related to Movie at all.




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Posted: 7 years ago
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TEASER 1




"But Maa Mai Abhi Shadi ke Lie Tayar Nahi hu, Aapko pata hai Na Mera pura focus meri Studies or Hospital me hai"


" Baccha lekin Ek baar Mil lene me Harz hi kya hai? Aaj nahi to Kal Shadi to karni hi hai na?"


"Maa plz Now dont start Again. My patients are waiting for me, i'l have to go."


*****


A charming handsome guy steps out of his luxury Car. He removes his Shades and tug it in front pocket of his Shirt. He looks around the Gate of Pareikh Mansion Quizzically.


"Tillu, Le Aaa Gai Teri Manzil"


Edited by docritu99 - 7 years ago
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A very interesting and different concept. I'm intrigued! ❤️
I would like to witness this journey of love. So I'm reserving my seat for the travel. Waiting to board this love-ship. Update soon..😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ooo another FF from you...yay!!
The teaser has piqued my interest...update soon!!

M eagerly waiting for the next installment of 50 shades of Neil Khanna as well😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yay,new story.doctpr avni and business tycoon neil.
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I know why you made her doctor 😆 Please don't use medical terms . Whenever I think of alternative profession for Avni I ended up in doctor after detective/hacking expert .
At least in your story Neil has money . In show he is bankrupt by financing Rat's needs .
I'm intrigued .

Waiting for your update of different shades of Neil Khanna.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting :) do update soon... can't wait to see my dashing Neil and ravishing Avni fall for for each other ;)
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HEY just saw This you're title made me want to read This... I loved the character sketch and the teaser awesome. How Neil was outside the parikh mansion probably coming to ask for Avni hand...really cant wait for the 1st chapter please update soon
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Originally posted by: Ashi3

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">A very interesting and different concept. I'm intrigued!❤️</font>

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I would like to witness this journey of love. So I'm reserving my seat for the travel. Waiting to board this love-ship. Update soon..😛</font>


Aww. Such a sweet comment.!
Ur seat is reserved.!
Will be updating soon.!
Love will be knocking Avni's door soon.!

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