Major editing and screenplay flaws..

Unfortunately I m not able to keep up with some amazing posts since past few days, busy schedule makes it difficult to watch the show even once. But must say all of us were eagerly waiting for the break-up part(though it is sad) and finally it is here. And all of you are discussing great things on the forum.

But why are makers not taking this part seriously? Why are there so many flaws suddenly happening in the show. From forced scenes, to flawed editing and even not-so-great screenplay. The makers gave us some amazingly dreamy episodes till last Wednesday, but after that I felt as if they have shot some scenes beforehand and now the editor is arranging them like a jigsaw.

I feel the sweater scene should have happened before Safari suit's entry in Mt Abu, that scene required some more depth and better dialogues by Naina when she gifted it to Sameer. But it turned out to be rather plain and oddly placed after the whole drama by Safari suit

And in today's episode, in one Sameer has a camera in his pocket, and within the next shot it's gone, and then again back. Owing to this, Sameer avoiding Naina scene was clumsily written and though they wanted to show that Naina understood that he was not able to explain some confusion of his mind, it somehow I felt didn't come out to be that convincing.

And Swati should now stop with the Timepass wala pyaar thing. Sameer got some really bad beatings from Safari suit for Naina, now what else will convince you?
And Swati-Munna need some new dialogues, Shakal Dekhi hai and Mahaul badal raha is way too many times spoken.

And now the fillers, okay understand they are for extending the break-up part for a week, but place it in such a way that it helps the story somehow, if not Naina-Sameer's then at least other characters. Dhumrapaan se kark rog was lol today.

One thing is for sure, the makers of this show have the potential to show us something amazing, and they have done it aptly since so many months, but suddenly these flaws hope get rectified soon. I don't expect them to show us every time perfect things, but as a viewer my expectations have always risen from the first episode because of its amazing concept and execution.

Anyway enjoy.

Agreed... quite some errors are being noticed now and then...this should improve from the makers...the editing should be slick...it needs improvement here

It does seem like something is a bit off for the past couple episodes for sure. Didnt it occur to Swati Sameer said he pulled the chudail prank before she ranted about him and in that case maybe there is more to his explanation of being in their bathroom?😕

The gifting of the sweater was not handled as well is my opinion too.

I have been (mostly) a silent member on the forum, but wanted to give my thoughts on today's episode and this topic seemed apt:)

As for me, I believe CVs actually forget about sweater and then later they realized that they need to add such an important link. If you see the spoiler you'll realize that sweater episode was shot almost towards the end. They forget story and thought of taking advantage of technolog but forgot that it' human who created this technoloy and can find mistakes easily😳

Agree to all the points here...sweater was knitted for the cold, it should have been given asap...at least the night Sameer had fallen ill...he has no warm clothes, he took the medicine from u, what more confirmation u need that he would wear the sweater...n yes, after all the beating by Safari suit, Swati can't just assume Sameer is doing timepass...Sameer's confession of the bhoot prank...even I was surprised why didn't it ring a bell with Swati...yesterday's episode was a let down for me too...Arjun n shefali scene was completely out of place yesterday...Sameer ignoring Naina did not seem convincing...n Naina has the guts to talk to Sameer while planting trees...an hour or two back, her dad almost killed him...n yes Sameer might get thrown out of school is on no one's mind...why God ..it's a big deal for them...n Naina doesn't say it once? N I agree 100 percent with Swati n Munna scene portrayal n dialogues...they need to give that a thought too.

agree with all the posts in this thread..

Yes scenes felt disjointed.