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Posted: 20 years ago
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Well I have always been more inclined to compose my own songs so I'm gonna do just that. It's from an old book of mine, in which I had written all my wild imaginations. I hope my twisted sense of poetry makes sense to everybody.

If time has to be so magical   ;   ;   ;   ;   ;   ;   ; Can we make it work for the both of us? &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; Will it stop if we just asked it to? &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; Can we hold these moments in our hearts?   ;   ;   ;   ; It's been so long, you've moved along & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; I'm still standing where I used to be. &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; You've gone away in an unknown world & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; My time is still waiting beside me.

Are you still the same, the handsome insane?   ;   ;   ;   ; Do you still drink coffee in your tea? &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; Do you wait for the night like we always did? &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; And when it rains hard are you pleased? &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; &nbs p; Do you still leave the chocolate in your ice-cream, &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; Hoping I'd come around for the treat? Do you take long showers before jumping into bed? &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp; Do you feel that empty space where I once used to be?

Is it true or am I just imagining things?   ;   ;   ;   ;   ; Do you really remember anything? &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; Am I still the one who comes in your dreams,   ;   ;   ;   ; Or am I just a faded memory?

I'm still standing where I used to be, &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; Waiting for you to appear Is that some distant noise out in the rain? & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; & nbsp; Or the voice I so want to hear?

PS this song is from an imagination. please don't misinterpret it to be part of my real life. I'm way different than that.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#12

Damn damn damn Spike... I cudn't resist.. this is really cute but quite unreadable, so I took the liberty of formatting it a bit... I hope you don't mind...plzzzz !!!!! 😊


SPIKE'S ORIGINAL SONG....


If time has to be so magical
Can we make it work for the both of us?

Will it stop if we just asked it to?
Can we hold these moments in our hearts?

It's been so long, you've moved along
I'm still standing where I used to be.

You've gone away in an unknown world
My time is still waiting beside me.

Are you still the same, the handsome insane?
Do you still drink coffee in your tea?

Do you wait for the night like we always did?
And when it rains hard are you pleased?

Do you still leave the chocolate in your ice-cream,
Hoping I'd come around for the treat?

Do you take long showers before jumping into bed?
Do you feel that empty space where I once used to be?

Is it true or am I just imagining things?
Do you really remember anything?

Am I still the one who comes in your dreams,
Or am I just a faded memory?

I'm still standing where I used to be,
Waiting for you to appear

Is that some distant noise out in the rain?
Or the voice I so want to hear?

ides thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
👏👏Spike....I'm impressed......and thnx for reformatting queenbee....
Deli thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14

I agree. Spike, that was fantastic, great job. <3

And queenbee, thank you too!

Deli thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#15

After watching yesterday's episode, I feel that this song fits perfectly for what Armaan is feeling and what might be going through his mind (toward Jassi).

Try analyzing it, most of the lines fit so perfectly for him:

Linkin Park - Faint

I am a little bit of loneliness, a little bit of disregard
Handful of complaints but I can't help the fact
That everybody can see these scars
I am what I want you to want, what I want you to feel
But it's like no matter what I do, I can't convince you
To just believe this is real
So I, let go watching you turn your back like you always do
Face away and pretend that I'm not
But I'll be here cause you're all that I've got

I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored

I am, a little bit insecure, a little unconfident
Cuz you don't understand I do what I can
Sometimes I don't make sense
I am, what you never wanna say, but I've never had a doubt
It's like no matter what I do I can't convince you for once just to hear me out
So I, let go watching you turn your back like you always do
You face away and pretend that I'm not
But I'll be here cause you're all that I've got

I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored

Hear me out now
You're gonna listen to me like it or not
Right now, hear me out now
You're gonna listen to me like it or not
Right now

I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored

I can't feel the way I did before
Don't turn your back on me
I won't be ignored
Time won't heal this damage anymore
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored
I can't feel
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored
Time won't tell
Don't turn your back on me I won't be ignored

However, this line can be seen from two perspectives:

So I, let go watching you turn your back like you always do..

1) Jassi isn't really turning her back on him; she's just skeptical as to whether he loves her or whether he's using her to make the false balance sheets. Plus, she feels betrayed about what he did to her before, so it's hard for her to believe him so easily now (very understandable).

2) In Armaan's mind, he may feel that Jassi is turning her back because she won't accept his love for her and she's pushing him away.

So yea, you can find a lot of relations in the lyrics. Enjoy!



Edited by Deli - 20 years ago
spike thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#16

DAMN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😡😡

bee, thanks so much for formatting my song, i hadn't read back after i posted it. i didn't know it looked THAT baaad until right now! thanks a lot.

deli, i love linkin park. they're always on my discman! 😃

u know, it's a funny thing, but i actually wanted to sell my lyrics to people who were interested 😆...i have around six books stuffed with poems and songs but nowadays i've lost my knack to write.

Deli thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: spike

deli, i love linkin park. they're always on my discman! 😃

Hehe, I love them too, definitely one of my favourite bands. <3

Originally posted by: spike

u know, it's a funny thing, but i actually wanted to sell my lyrics to people who were interested 😆...i have around six books stuffed with poems and songs but nowadays i've lost my knack to write.

Omg, get some inspiration and write write write. And you should try selling your lyrics, maybe at a mall or something. :O

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Posted: 20 years ago
#18
spike that was amazing!! very beautiful.👏
thanks guys for the great lyrics.

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