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Manu

@.scarlet.

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Heyy

This was beautiful Hinnie!

Really enjoyed reading it <3

Keep writing!!

Manu

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: .scarlet.
Heyy

This was beautiful Hinnie!
Really enjoyed reading it <3
Keep writing!!

Manu

Hi Manuuu

Thank you soo muchhh!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Next one will be posted up soon 😉

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

Awwh, thank you so much!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Hey Hinal, you nailed the separation track with such intense emotions, girl! Had this played on the television, I would have fallen all over AvNeil once again.

This is marvellous. The longing, the pain, the vulnerability was so evident. The emptiness that creeps up at the thought of being separated, even though if it's all a set up. Damn, it feels real. And magical.

I am just glad you wrote and shared this masterpiece.

Thanks for the PM :)

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Mrunmayi Naik

@-Mayu-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Hinal "Kameeni " 🤗

Reserve!

I am coming back with lamba comments

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basket_101

@basket_101

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Hey Hinal, you nailed the separation track with such intense emotions, girl! Had this played on the television, I would have fallen all over AvNeil once again.

This is marvellous. The longing, the pain, the vulnerability was so evident. The emptiness that creeps up at the thought of being separated, even though if it's all a set up. Damn, it feels real. And magical.

I am just glad you wrote and shared this masterpiece.

Thanks for the PM :)

Heyy!! Thank you so much!! That's a really big compliment 😳

I wish we got to see more of the longing phase in that fake separation, but I guess they wanted to get things moving at a brisk pace (if not faster). Regardless, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this!! 😃

I love this song and the way it molds itself so nicely around AvNeil

Thank you once again!!

And my pleasure for the PM 😳

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