Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17 - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: NasreenAyesha

Wow. You related them greatly


Thanks dear😃
Glad that you liked it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

Beautiful OS Manisha 😳
Well written 👏
I loved how you showed Samaina relationship through the element of water
Eagerly waiting for the next OS
Thanks for the PM


Thanks dear...I'm happy that you liked the correlation with the element of water...will soon be updating the next OS.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc


It's ok Nida 😊
I was never angry with you or anyone😊
I'm not that type of a person... trust me 😃
Take care Nida 😃



Thanks
And once again srry dear..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Earth

Image result for earth as an element of nature

The basis and foundation of all the elements is the Earth. The Earth is the object; subject and receptacle of all celestial rays and influences and in it are the seeds of all things. It is made fruitful by the other elements and the heavens, and brings forth all things of itself.

Earth is the element of stability, foundations and of the body. The Earth is the realm of wisdom, knowledge, strength, growth and prosperity.

The Earth is the womb from which all things spring, pressing your hand against fresh soil, you can feel its vitality, stability and earthiness. In its fertile soil, we've grown the food that provides life, on its surface we live out our lives, and when the time to return to the Goddess and God comes, we are interred in the earth.

We couldn't exist in this form without the Earth. This Earth energy not only exists within ourselves but also throughout the universe at large.

OS: Earth

This OS is starting in a time when Sameer is still into his bet but has started to develop a liking for Naina. Its based on an imaginary situation in which Kamya sees Sameer waiting for Naina outside a temple.

She notices him up and awake so early in the morning and waiting for someone desperately. She was forced by her mother to go and buy milk today as her father was out of town. She saw him and decides to wait and see whom is he waiting for so early in the morning. After few minutes, she sees Naina coming there and Sameer greeting her and then both of them going inside the temple. She is astonished to see Naina and Sameer together and her heart is full of anger as she has been liking him right from the day he entered the school. She decides to teach this behenji Naina a lesson today.

Naina enters the class and sees Kamya and Hema with other girls and all of them are looking towards her angrily. Being unaware of the situation she goes and tries to sit on her seat. Kamya stops her from sitting and she keeps her own bag there.

Naina (confused): kya baat hai Kamya? Yeh to meri seat hai na...

Kamya: haan pata hai...lekin aaj se yeh meri seat hai...

Naina: par kyun?

Kamya: wo isliye kyunki main nahi chahti ki tu Sameer ke saamne wali seat pe baithe...wahan main hi baithungi...samjhi...

Swati enters the class that very moment and sees this argument going on for the seat. She goes and asks Naina whats the matter?

Naina: dekh na Swati...yeh mujhe meri seat pe baithne nahi de rahi hai...keh rahi hai ki wo yahan baithegi...

Swati: kyun Kamya teri problem kya hai? yeh Naina aur meri seat hai aur yahan hum hi baithenge...

Kamya: tu jaanti nahi Swati yeh Naina sabse chhupke kya kya kar rahi hai...humare saamne to badi sanskari banke dikhati hai aur waise...

Swati: waise kya...bol...

Kamya: waise yeh akele mein Sameer se chhup chhup ke milti hai...

Naina and Swati were shocked to know that she was aware of their temple meeting (Swati and Naina had patched up and she had accepted that Naina likes Sameer).

Swati: yeh tu kaise keh sakti hai? aisa kuchh nahi hai...

Kamya: Swati yeh Naina tujhse bhi sab sach chhupa rahi hai...maine apni aankhon se ise Sameer se mandir mein milte huye dekha hai...ab bhi tu kahegi ki main jhooth bol rahi hu... Yeh Naina humare saamne kuchh aur hai aur peeche se kuchh aur...iske jaisi ladki mein pata nahi Sameer ko kya pasand aa gaya?

Swati: iske jaisi ladki se kya matlab hai tera?

Naina: Kamya bas karo... aisa kuchh nahi hai jaisa tum soch rahi ho...

Kamya: achha to main jhooth bol rahi hu...bata na sabko ki tu kya kar rahi thi Sameer ke saath aaj subah mandir mein?

Naina: wo Sameer ne mujhe kuchh notes wapas karne the...isliye wo aaya tha...

Kamya: to wo tujhe class mein bhi to de sakta tha...uske liye mandir mein kyun?

Swati: Naina tu ise kyun explanation de rahi hai? tu jaanti hai na ki tere aur Sameer ke beech mein kuchh galat nahi hai...fir koi zaroorat nahi hai ise explain karne ki... aur yeh humari seat hai yahan hum hi baithenge...

Swati kept Kamya's bag on her previous seat and sat down and pulled Naina too on the seat. Kamya became furious to see this and she started abusing Naina.

Kamya: wah bhai...kya dosti hai in Seeta aur Geeta ki... Pata hai ki wo galat hai...tab bhi usi ka saath de rahi hai... dekh lena ek din yeh Naina Swati ko bhi dhokha degi...aisi ladkiyan na... apne parivar ka naam kharab karti hain...

Sameer had entered the class and watched this argument going on. He tries to figure out the reason for all this and just at the moment spoke about Naina...he spoke up.

Sameer: Kamya yeh kya bole ja rahi ho? Tumhe pata bhi hai kya bol rahi ho? Naina kaisi ladki hai yeh poora school jaanta hai...use kisi ke certificate ki zaroorat nahi hai...aur tum...tum kya ho yeh main bahut achhe se jaanta hu... Bataaun sabko ki tumne mere saath kya kiya tha? (referring to the incident at her house when they had all gone to watch the movie).

Kamya became apprehensive on hearing this and her eyes went down themselves feeling ashamed of what she did that day.

Sameer: Kamya aisi baatein chhupi rahen yeh hi achha hai...lekin agar tumne Naina ke baare mein kuchh bhi bura kaha to main sabko sab bata dunga...samjhi tum...aur main baaki sab ko bhi ek baat bata dena chahta hu...ki Naina meri achhi dost hai...aur kisi ne uske baare mein kuchh bhi bura kaha...to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga...aur Kamya tum isi samay Naina ko sorry bolo...

Naina and Swati both looked at each other and then towards Sameer... He had fury in his eyes and that was only for Naina...whom he considered as his friend and he couldn't bear anything being spoken against her. Kamya could never imagine that Sameer would react like this for Naina... she became scared of Sameer's anger as she knew he could do whatever he was saying. She also deciphered that the girl he was talking about at her house was none other than Naina. She was astonished as she never imagined a guy like Sameer falling for someone like Naina...these two were poles apart...then how is this possible. She decided to say sorry to her and end this argument otherwise she'll have to bear the brunt of his anger.

Munna and Pandit and the entire class saw this incident and both his friends were teasing Sameer during the lunch break for helping that behenji...they praised him for going great and that very soon she would say ILU to him in front of the entire class. He became upset to hear this and scolded both of them.

Sameer: tum dono ko har waqt bas bet hi yaad rehti hai kya...aur koi baat nahi hai kya karne ko?

Munna: tu to naraz ho gaya yaar...chal ab gussa mat kar...hum jaakar thandi thandi God spot lekar aate hain...

Both of them went away and Naina seeing him alone came up to him.

Naina: Sameer wo main tumhe thank you bolna chahti hu...aaj jo tumne mere liye kiya...thank you Sameer...

Sameer: bhool gayi Naina...dosti mein no sorry no thank you...tum to meri special friend ho na...aur Sameer Maheshwari kabhi apne doston ki insult nahi hone deta...to tumhari kaise hone deta...

Naina smiled to herself and went away with Swati...Munna and Pandit were noticing both of them and Munna commented to Pandit...yaar mujhe lagne laga hai ki humara Sameer badalne laga hai Pandit agreed to this and both of them went to Sameer with the cold drinks.

The End...

P.S I correlated this OS with the element of Earth as I took the qualities of stability and strength...the qualities that are very important in someone's character...here the character of Sameer is rock solid...he can not take a girl being abused because of him...although he is into his bet mode but when its about someone else ill treating her...he would stand for her.

I hope you all agree to my take on this element. Please don't forget to like and comment.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
I loved this piece- this kind of feels in-sync with the Sameer we are seeing now in the show- how he's been changing...and how deep down he's not really a bad guy. The one thing I really admire about Sameer was how he would put himself at stake but not let his friends get hurt. N Kamya spotting Sameer and Naina was a fresh twist. That was a great idea to show how slowly people might start getting to know the chemistry brewing between them. I hope Sameer snaps at Kamya in the show too. 🤣
Wonderful piece!!! Looking forward to more on these lines. 👏👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
First of all a big thank you for writing on nature's elements... Fire, Water and now Earth... You described these all in very beautifully...

About OS... It's lovely and fantastic...
And the most favourite part jab Kamaya ko Sammer ne daata... 😆 Sacchi maza aa gaya...
Very Well written Di... Keep writing like this...



Edited by misha.as - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it.👏 This element series of yours sometimes flashes through my mind and I keep thinking in the hostel dining hall how would you relate scratch that correlate the very vast in picture to a single episode in their lives.😃
But you excel in this feat.May be that's why you were able to conceive the idea and develop it to the beauty that it is.Trust me this is ''dil se bola gaya sach''.😳
Coming to the update,Earth! Earth and Partner (in love and life) possess one thing in common---they love unconditionally.❤️ No matter how much harm you cause they never budge in showering the love,care,protection and happiness.
And yes! as you have stated the strength and stability that exudes from earth...Love is the reason of world and world is reason of love.Sameer and Naina likewise are beginning of each other and end of each other.Period.
Kamya is just another external threat which would fizzle out.It takes strong heart to love and stronger heart to love unconditionally.That's how they are rock of each other and feather of each other.Deriving strength and weakness from each other.😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It got double posted.
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Unres...

Hahaha I am happy...
this time Maine jaldi padh liya.. ..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Luvly OS Doc
Sameer taking a stand for Naina..it feels so good to read it
Thank you for d PM

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