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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part DearπŸ‘πŸ˜Š
Thanks 😳😳

Both the babies have grown up
Tara's father gone missing but alive
yes

Tara and Mrityunjay meets while Tara loses her way
Sometimes it's good to lose your wayπŸ˜‰

Its good to see them meeting in a normal way instead of cliched fighting on meeting
Thanks😳

Kalavati is drinking women's blood to get young...Ewww🀒
She is 🀒

Unfortunately Kalavati saw Tara and tells Vampire Nandini to find her😲
Kalavati don't want anything or anyone to ruin her work

MJ finds Tara's scarf and wants to return to her😊
He wants 😊 but does he?πŸ˜›


Thanks for reading and replying πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Awesome Part DearπŸ‘πŸ˜Š
Thanks 😳

Tara visits the palace with her mother
FinallyπŸ˜ƒ

Tara makes friends with King and Queen's daughter and daughter-in-lawπŸ˜ƒ
She has that charmπŸ˜ƒ

The King would have married Tara to his son if he was alive unaware that he is actually alive
yeah, so King can fullfill his wish when MJ is foundπŸ˜‰

The Queen is so helpless to reveal anything😭
Poor her

Tara meets MJ again to get her scarf but she forgets due to her lost in him
yeahπŸ˜‰

Tara will have to to go to visit MJ again to get her scarf
Again πŸ˜‰

In this story, a vamp is having eyes on hero's bro instead of the heroπŸ˜†
For a change πŸ˜†


Thanks for loving and replyingπŸ˜ƒ

I am a bit(ok more than bit) late in replying 😳😳😳😳
Sorry 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for commenting πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

for MOTHER chapter:

sorry for being too much late !!!!!!!!!
You are just on timeπŸ˜‰

from where the fire came !!!!
No ideaπŸ˜•

mritunjay asked the same question and answer was expected from tara πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Don't forget she is TaraπŸ˜†

thank god guru ji came otherwise again fire
hahahaπŸ˜†

guruji smells somthing fishy about fire but again tara answer is hilaariousπŸ‘
Our Tara rocks!!!⭐️

so finally mritunjay going to meet mother in lawπŸ‘
his future mother-in-lawπŸ˜ƒ

so many questions tara have in her mind ...but mj calms her down😊
He is such a gentlemen⭐️

aradhna opened the door with smile and welcomed them...she is so sweet as motherπŸ‘πŸ‘
She is πŸ˜ƒ

this was good when mj thought that tara got talkitive nature from her momπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
hahahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

then she thanked him for saving adityaπŸ‘
Everyone in Kingdom is grateful to MJ for saving AdityaπŸ˜ƒ

best moment when aradhana told mj to call her mom and mj reply was good as wellπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
It was πŸ˜ƒ
overall this chapter was fabolousπŸ‘



Thanks for reading, loving and replyingπŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

I am late in replying doesn't mean I don't read them😊

I just need time to think and reply to your lovely commentsπŸ˜ƒ

But I will try to be on time πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

it was actually a long day for tara and mrityunjay!!!!

tara is thinking about how fire catches and if she poses something like thisπŸ˜†
quite longπŸ˜†

her mom told about their ancestors who poses magic and guess tara will be the one who posses magicπŸ‘
What do u think? Does Tara poses magic?

she read book like every chidl did out of curiosityπŸ˜†
She is our curious childπŸ˜ƒ. Isn't sheπŸ˜‰

she thought she is witch but aradhana makes understand him that its not happend thats how she thoughtπŸ˜†
She is mother and like any other mother she is trying to calm Tara😊

aradhna remark for how she got mritunjy was bsetπŸ‘πŸ‘
heheheπŸ˜†

so tara now ask these things to guruji and he must have answers😊😊
He is wise man 😊
it was worthy chapter to readπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘



Thanks for reading, loving and replyingπŸ˜ƒ

Many new things are going to comeπŸ˜‰ So keep reading😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

I finally caught up with all the chapters !!!!!!
You are lucky to read all at onceπŸ˜†

And i am eagerly waiting for more !!!!!!!!!!!
More exciting things are comingπŸ˜ƒ

Thank you so much for keeping me updated !!!!!!!
WelcomeπŸ˜ƒ

Write soon Archu and thanks once again for an amazing fiction ❀️
I am trying to write as and when I am getting timeπŸ˜ƒ. This fic would not have reached here if there were no readers like you ⭐️ and specially like Shaina_b⭐️


PS - that if snapping fingers in important then yes i did !!!!🀣

That dialouge was awesome !!!

I didn't thought people will like this dialouge so much😲, but I am glad you liked it πŸ˜ƒ


thanks for coming back

Thanks for reading, loving and replying πŸ˜ƒ


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That Still Small Voice


In the palace, the Queen was in her chamber standing near the windows watching the bloodline trees when Aradhana entered her chamber.


"My Queen," she curtsied.


The Queen turned around to look at her. She felt the happiness in the tone of her voice today which was missing from so many days.


"It seems that you have some good news to share with me. Isn't it?" she said narrowing her eyes.


"You are right my Queen and it is all because of you," she said curtsying once more in front of her.


"So share the news," said the Queen in a happy voice.


"Following your suggestion my Queen of meeting the man who Tara loves once, I met him yesterday. Tara brought him home," said Aradhana and stopped.


"And?" asked the Queen in excitement. She was excited to know whether her son passed the test or not.


"And I liked her choice. He is the man that any mother would dream of for her daughter," she said.


The Queen took a deep breath, walked towards Aradhana and hugged her, "Congratulations Aradhana!


"Thank you, my Queen," she said parting from the hug.
"But why are you congratulating me?" Aradhana was surprised seeing the Queen so happy.

She didn't know that the queen's happiness was because her son was accepted by Aradhana for her daughter.


"Ohh..." said the Queen, thinking what to give as an excuse because she was happy for her son.

"I am happy for Tara, for you, for all of us. You know how much we all love Tara. Finding a good man for a daughter is difficult," she said in a sweet tone blinking her eyes.


"I wish her father would have been with us to meet the man that she has chosen," said Aradhana sadly.


"He already knows the man. He himself has trained him," said Nirmala in her mind. Her face lost the joy that had spread mere moments ago.


Seeing the Queen sad, Aradhana said, "Your Majesty, I should leave." She curtsied and walked away.


Seeing her leave, the Queen returned to the window from where the bloodline trees were visible. Mrityunjay's tree was glowing brighter than ever. After he had touched the Pearl and broken the spell, it was as if the tree was more connected to him now. There were many new leaves on it and most of the branches were filled with flowers. The beauty of the tree was breathtaking. The Queen smiled seeing it.




Two hands circled around her waist and hugged her from her back.
"When did you walk in?" she questioned, taken aback by this gesture of the King.


"I walked in when my wife was busy in her thoughts," he said chuckling. She turned to face him and hugged him closing her eyes, and curled herself in his arms.


"It's been a long time that we have had such peaceful time," she said taking a deep breath.


"Yes my love, after the Prince had returned, there has been time to relax a bit," he said rubbing her back. He was watching the trees from the window and remembered how before the birth of each child Nirmala had planted them.
"Although everything could never be the same again," he said watching the three trees standing tall, representing their three children.


Nirmala felt the sadness in his voice that he always had when he recalled the birth of their first son. She wanted to tell him everything starting from their son being alive to the breaking of the curse. But she thought to let the time decide for itself when to reveal the truth.


"The Prince is doing well. He has recovered very well under the Princess's observation," she said parting herself from the hug.


"Yes he is," said Jayraj tracing a circle on her palm.


"I think we should sit and talk rather than standing here the whole day," said the Queen chuckling.

She wanted the King to move away from the window because the longer he stood there, the greater were the chances that he would realize that his eldest son was alive and also she wanted her husband to smile. The King smiled and walked away from the window with his arm still wrapped around her and smiling.

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Tara walked as fast as possible towards Mrityunjay's cottage because the things which were happening with her and the things that she read in the book were making her insane. Soon she reached there, but there was no one in the house. She checked around the cottage for Mrityunjay and Guruji but no one was there.


"I think I need to wait here," she murmured to herself and sat near the main door with the book in her hand.

She saw hay lying here and there and thought to clean them up like she had done yesterday with Mrityunjay. She smiled at the thought and got up. She was about to touch the broom when she stopped.


"What if I touch it and it starts burning like it did yesterday?"

She was terrified with the thought of merely touching something as anything can happen after it. She went back to the spot where she was sitting, hugging her knees to her chest and rested her head on it looking here and there.

*****


Kalavati had located Mrityunjay in the forest by drinking more and more blood from young females in one day to strengthen her power. Also, there was nothing blocking her sight now. She was now ready to finish the work of killing Mrityunjay which she missed last time when she had him as a child. But this time she was not going to let that happen again. She wanted to finish him this time and prove the prophecy wrong.


"I am done with this game of cat and mice. I am going to finish this once and for all." She left her hiding place which was on the other side of the forest and started walking to go to Mrityunjay who was somewhere in the forest.



*****


Here in the cottage Tara was sitting in the same spot for a long time. She thought, "At least I can practice sword techniques," and went to get it from the armory leaving the book there.
She was about to touch the hilt of the sword when the sword flew up and came to her. She grabbed it instantly.

"No...No...No..." she screamed and dropped the sword.

"What is happening to me? This...this... is... insane." She ran back to the spot where she had left the book.

"I should go back home and lock myself in the room. I can't wait here for them to return from whatever work they are doing. I will lose my senses here alone. I am sure Mrityunjay will come to my house seeing I had not met him today." With this thought, she grabbed the book and started walking towards the exit of the cottage.


She was walking out when suddenly she froze when she saw an image. It was Mrityunjay standing near the lake and Kalavati behind him with a sword. Soon the image blurred and Tara drew in her breath sharply, dropping the book from her hand on the ground. She was confused. The image she saw was like it was happening just in front of her. She was now even more scared.

"Kalavati attacking Mrityunjay!!!" she murmured.

"That didn't happen. And it's not possible. Even if that was a manifestation of my weird state, I am going there to look for Mrityunjay." She convinced herself and ran towards the lake.


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Thanks Shaina_b for making it readableπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for reading😊

I am writing the end of this fic which is at least 8 chapters away πŸ˜†
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It is always great to see Nirmala and Aradhana talk!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Nirmala is so excited to know whether her son passed or not!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aradhana praised Mrityunjay and the Queen was really happy to know that she approved of Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aradhana is surprised to see Nirmala so happy and Nirmala smartly covers it up with her excuse that she is happy for Tara!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Little does Aradhana know that Govind watches Tara and Mrityunjay together almost daily!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Mrityunjay's tree is beautiful because he is so happy as he is in love and has Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

The scene between Jayraj and Nirmala was really cute and romantic and they are just adorable!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is still sad about his firstborn but Nirmala cannot tell him about their son yet!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara has gotten paranoid and is even afraid to touch things!!!!

Kalavati is now more powerful than ever and is out to get Mrityunjay!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

Now the sword is flying to Tara which proves she definitely has the powers which her ancestors had!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara is now even more worried and scared than ever!!!!

When Tara is with Mrityunjay nothing can happen to him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She already saw the upcoming attack on Mrityunjay!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

It seems like she can see the future and now she is going to save Mrityunjay!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

It surely ended on a cliffhanger!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The chapter was fantastic!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks for sharing with me ill read it

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