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Posted: 7 years ago
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The Family Business

When Tara returned home, she was a bit tired with today's events. First knowing about Mrityunjay's real identity, then that small fire and now a formal introduction of Mrityunjay to her Mom, which was not a complete introduction. By that it meant not mentioning his real identity. But yes it was a bit too much in a single day.

Tara smiled remembering how after the fire took place, Mrityunjay said it was her jealousy which caused the fire. She thought to herself how good it would be if by just thinking or moving her fingers or snapping them would keep all things in place or maybe just move them a little. She laughed at her thoughts and started to do her work of arranging the utensils with her actual hands, but the thought of snapping her fingers to move them didn't leave her. When she was done, she thought to snap a finger for fun and she did. Before she could see what happened, her mother called her and she left, unknowingly moving the pot at which she had snapped her finger.


In the bedroom, Aradhana was sitting with a wedding dress in her hand.
"Wow!!" said Tara looking at the wedding dress.
"Is this yours?" she inquired. Aradhana nodded her head in a yes.

"I was keeping things away when I found this and thought you might like to see this," said Aradhana with sad eyes, remembering her husband whom she had missed all these years and today she missed him a lot.

Tara took the wedding dress from her and folded it carefully seeing it was bringing more of past memories to her mother. When she was keeping it in her mother's cupboard, she saw a book.

She grabbed the book and asked her mother, "What's this?"
Aradhana took a deep breath after seeing what Tara possessed and said, "That's more like a lore which is passed in my family from one generation to the other."

Tara opened the book and read, "A book of magic." She raised her head and looked curiously towards her mother.

Aradhana smiled and said, "Many many centuries ago it is said that my lineage possessed magic. But eventually we lost it and I don't know why. After the family lost magic this book was passed from one generation to next in the hope that if magic returns, the person possessing it might require this.


Tara processed this very fast and said, "You mean your forefathers performed witchcraft?"

"Yes, the lore says so but that was a long time ago. Since 100 years or more there hasn't been anyone in the family who possessed magic," said Aradhana making her bed.

Tara was enchanted by the new information about her family and said, "Mom would you mind if I keep this book with me?"

"Why would I mind? That book is more like a fairy tale having no existence in reality. And above all, in a few months it will be yours when you will get married to the man you brought today," said Aradhana smiling.

Tara blushed at the mention of her marriage to Mrityunjay and left the room with the book.



After her mother had gone to sleep, Tara was flipping the pages of the book to see what was in that book. The book was old, written in some ancient language which people no longer use now. But to her surprise, Tara was able to read it. She, like a curious kid, was trying to read every line and finish the book at once. She then stopped at a page where a magic spell to move things was written. Tara thought how her great forefathers would have done this and tried to mimic them. She said the spell and snapped her finger towards the glass kept in front of her. Nothing happened. She concentrated more this time and moved her fingers as instructed and this time too nothing happened. She laughed at her thought and continued to explore the book. She slept with the book open in her hand.


*****

When Mrityunjay returned to his house, he informed Guruji about meeting Tara's mother, skipping the part about why he met her.

"Soon Mrityunjay will be with his family and I with mine," thought Guruji and left Mrityunjay with Maria.

Mrityunjay was rewinding all the events of that day and smiled thinking soon he would be with his family.


*****


When Tara got up the next morning, she found herself still holding the book. She started reading it from where she had left it. The book had a chapter about witches. It said they can just perform magic like controlling earth, air and water, conjuring up fire or they can heal a person by just their touch. Suddenly the thought of the wounded bird crossed her mind.


"No, no, no this can't be true. This can't be happening. This is impossible." She was shouting and screaming at top of her lungs.

Hearing her shouting, Aradhana rushed to her from the kitchen.
"What happened? Why are you shouting? You had a bad dream?" Aradhana asked Tara rubbing her warm hand on her daughter's back to console her.

"Mom, mom..." Tara tried to say between her cries.

"Tell me my love, I am listening," said Aradhana hugging her daughter.

"I think I am a witch.
As soon as Tara said this, there was complete silence in the room. No sound was made for a moment.

Then Aradhana held Tara at arm's length and said, "I know you are. Otherwise how would you have got a man like Mrityunjay?" She winked.

"No mom, it's not like that." She said grabbing the book.

"Look here it says a witch can possess a power to heal. Yesterday I held a wounded bird and it healed instantly and flew off," said Tara in one breath.

Aradhana grabbed the book and said, "I believe I told you this book is more like a fairy tale. Why are you reading this? And about that bird, it might have healed already and your touch was just a warning for it to fly off. Don't think too much about it." Saying this she caressed her cheeks.


But Tara didn't seem to be convinced and tried to say something then stopped.

Seeing her daughter in dilemma Aradhana said, "I think you should talk about this with Mrityunjay's Guruji. He seems to be a wise man." And she kissed on Tara's forehead.

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Thanks Shaina_b for making it readable😃
Thanks for reading😊

Thanks to all woderful reader out there who still read this story👏
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
It was indeed a long day for Tara and Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

So Tara did move the pot by her power!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Aradhana showing Tara her wedding dress was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

She misses Govind so much and had to live without him all these years!!!!

So Aradhana's ancestors did possess magic!!!!

I am sure Tara also does!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It is cute how Tara blushed when Aradhana mentioned about her upcoming wedding!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Tara is so excitedly reading that book!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both Mrityunjay and Guruji are looking forward to being with their families!!!!

Tara now thinks she is a witch and starts screaming!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Aradhana's remark about otherwise how she would have got Mrityunjay was the best!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Aradhana is thinking logically and saying it didn't happen like how Tara is thinking!!!!

She rightly adviced Tara to ask Guruji!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The chapter was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏




Edited by Shaina_b - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

It was indeed a long day for Tara and Mrityunjay!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
It was😊
So Tara did move the pot by her power!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛
She did😊

Aradhana showing Tara her wedding dress was very emotional!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭
It was close to Aradhana's heart😊

She misses Govind so much and had to live without him all these years!!!!
She misses him very badly😭 but at least we know her pain will be gone once everything is over😊

So Aradhana's ancestors did possess magic!!!!
They did😊

I am sure Tara also does!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Let's see 😉

It is cute how Tara blushed when Aradhana mentioned about her upcoming wedding!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
yeah, it was😊

Tara is so excitedly reading that book!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
It was new thing for her😊

Both Mrityunjay and Guruji are looking forward to being with their families!!!!
Both are away from their families for way long time😊

Tara now thinks she is a witch and starts screaming!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
I guess anyone would react the same😊

Aradhana's remark about otherwise how she would have got Mrityunjay was the best!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Thank you😳

Aradhana is thinking logically and saying it didn't happen like how Tara is thinking!!!!
Someone has to act logically😊

She rightly adviced Tara to ask Guruji!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
She did😊

The chapter was awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏






Thanks for loving it😃
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shaina suggested me this story😃
Awesome Update Writer👏😊
This is a different story than many people write
Even if you have less readers does not means you are any less
Because just like many underrated shows are awesome
In the same way a story with less readers also turns out be awesome😊
Coming to the story, its very sad to see a mother losing her baby to a witch
Is Kalavati a man or woman or beech ka?
Good that the baby is safe in a couple's hands who too have a baby
Both the babies are destined to be together😃

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Both the babies have grown up
Tara's father gone missing but alive
Tara and Mrityunjay meets while Tara loses her way
Its good to see them meeting in a normal way instead of cliched fighting on meeting
Kalavati is drinking women's blood to get young...Ewww🤢
Unfortunately Kalavati saw Tara and tells Vampire Nandini to find her😲
MJ finds Tara's scarf and wants to return to her😊

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 7 years ago
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Awesome Part Dear👏😊
Tara visits the palace with her mother
Tara makes friends with King and Queen's daughter and daughter-in-law😃
The King would have married Tara to his son if he was alive unaware that he is actually alive
The Queen is so helpless to reveal anything😭
Tara meets MJ again to get her scarf but she forgets due to her lost in him
Tara will have to to go to visit MJ again to get her scarf
In this story, a vamp is having eyes on hero's bro instead of the hero😆
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
for MOTHER chapter:
sorry for being too much late !!!!!!!!!

from where the fire came !!!!

mritunjay asked the same question and answer was expected from tara 😆😆

thank god guru ji came otherwise again fire

guruji smells somthing fishy about fire but again tara answer is hilaarious👏

so finally mritunjay going to meet mother in law👏

so many questions tara have in her mind ...but mj calms her down😊

aradhna opened the door with smile and welcomed them...she is so sweet as mother👏👏

this was good when mj thought that tara got talkitive nature from her mom😆😆😆

then she thanked him for saving aditya👏

best moment when aradhana told mj to call her mom and mj reply was good as well👏👏👏

overall this chapter was fabolous👏
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it was actually a long day for tara and mrityunjay!!!!
tara is thinking about how fire catches and if she poses something like this😆

her mom told about their ancestors who poses magic and guess tara will be the one who posses magic👏

she read book like every chidl did out of curiosity😆

she thought she is witch but aradhana makes understand him that its not happend thats how she thought😆

aradhna remark for how she got mritunjy was bset👏👏

so tara now ask these things to guruji and he must have answers😊😊

it was worthy chapter to read👏👏👏


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Posted: 7 years ago
I finally caught up with all the chapters !!!!!!

And i am eagerly waiting for more !!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for keeping me updated !!!!!!!

Write soon Archu and thanks once again for an amazing fiction ❤️

PS - that if snapping fingers in important then yes i did !!!!🤣

That dialouge was awesome !!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_juhi04

Shaina suggested me this story😃
She really brings people here 😛 Thsnk you Shaina 👏


Awesome Update Writer👏😊
Thank you😃

This is a different story than many people write
Glad to know that😃

Even if you have less readers does not means you are any less
Because just like many underrated shows are awesome
I agree with you😳 😃

In the same way a story with less readers also turns out be awesome😊
Thank you😳

Coming to the story, its very sad to see a mother losing her baby to a witch
It was sad

Is Kalavati a man or woman or beech ka?
Let's keep it woman😛😉

Good that the baby is safe in a couple's hands who too have a baby
Both the babies are destined to be together😃
They are 😃


Thanks for giving it a chance 😃
I hope you will enjoy the story😃
Edited by Archi21 - 7 years ago

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