MB+ZY: Mehbeer And Zaya lovestory (continuation) [completed] - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thankfully mehbeer are fine.mehbeer hospital scene was emotional and beautiful. missed zaya scenes.mehbeer and meher's mother's scene was nice.happy that mehbeer zaya for married and meher's mother became fine.abhimanyu and mukti's track could have been explored. nice ending but I found it a bit rushed


I think I should have written a little longer but I got no ideas
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Posted: 7 years ago
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did the original version end like this?

Originally posted by: salley145


I think I should have written a little longer but I got no ideas

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

did the original version end like this?

Yes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update...so Mehbeer became well...Meher asked her mother for permission of marrying Abeer to which she agreed...they both got married...Zaya too got married...loved it...thank u 4 pm...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update!!
Loved it.
Thanks for d pm:)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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so beautiful update thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful story...
nice picture edits...
good ending
thanks for the pm
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