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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jasbirkaur85197

Thanks for pm nd update dear. ..This part of story is beautiful. ...maan lost in sweet memories of his geet. ..I luv this update


THANKYOU dear, will update today
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

<font color="#660099" size="3">Parts 2-3</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">Lovely Chapters</font>

<font color="#660099" size="3">So Maan knows about Geet and he has named her Misty thats cool</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">Maan used to enjoy his time with his Daadima and with his Angel but now keeping them away</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">from him is there any danger lurking around ?</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">so its Geet's giggles and her voice that makes Maan restless and it seems he craves to hear this voice</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">Geet wanting to know what the matter could be that Annie is not living at her home while Pinky tries and convince Geet that it maybe for security reasons</font>
<font color="#660099" size="3">Geet calling Maan as Dusht Danav but he seems pleased</font>


yes maan named geet as misty because of her sweet voice.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi my dears, thank you so much for your likes and comments.. i want to post reply to all your comments but whenever i type either it get erased or network problem or groupie cant post more than 20 post appears on screen... love you all and here comes part 4 of wrong number... read and enjoy...

PART 4:
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Maan starts the car both maan and adi reached Khurana Outhouse, Both dont want to discuss about the mission today and spoil their mood.. adi can feel maan being happy after a whole 3 and half months.
DELHI UNIVERSITY HOSTEL:
Next day morninh Geet annie and pinky gets ready to go to college they have only two class scheduled its Friday. The class was going cool with usual masti of the gang. Geet was busy in taking notes when she saw poen coming with register in hand.. she immediately asked pinky and annie
Geet: do we have any national holidays apporching
ANNIE: always expecting holidays but no holiday in nearby, why u ask
GEET: pointing towards peon, i guess some holiday with a smile
Seeing the peon all three gets excited thinking about holidays... and geet gave hi5 to both and planning what to do on holiday... but all her excitement vanished when the prof. Readout the content.."YOUR SEMESTER TIMETABLE IS ON NOTICE BOARD TAKE A NOTE OF IT AND ALSO SCHEDULE ON FINAL GROUP PROJECT NAMES WILL BE DECIDED BY PROF. 5MEMBERS IN EACH GROUP," the teacher finished reading it out all three are looking at prof. As she is speaking in french..
pinky: yaar just now semester got over na? Y it has to come this soon.
Annie: its not just now its 4months before we finished our semester
The class gets over all come out but geet is fuming in anger as sasha tasha pinky annie and geet names came as a group for project. On top of that geet is head of the group all responsibility falls on her head... she knows both chudail will not cooperate in the project..
Annie and pinky goes to collect timetable for exams... the exam is scheduled after 3weeks..

After the class all 3 reach hostel... after a short nap.. all sit together to plan for exam and project.. annie: we dont have much time our exams are near so we have to pack our masti and be serious in studies
Pinky: we have to start studying but can we start on Monday and enjoy this weekend
Geet: yes annie this sunday we enjoy we start studying from Monday... on top of it the project for final semester also we have to start.
ANNIE: yeah geetu, its going to be hectic, so what plan for tomorrow
pinky: Annie u said you are going to meet dadi tomorrow
annie: yes pinku but now i dont know how to meet her.
GEET: Even i have to meet bhai before exams later i wont get time geet calls arjun but get to know he is going to hustinapur today night so plan to meet him gets cancelled. NO DEAR BHAI IS LEAVING TO HUSTINAPUR dada called him it seems
All become upset as no plan is working out... atlast geet looks at annie with a smile.
geet: annie its long time me and pinku meet dadi why can't we go their tomorrow spend weekend with dadi and comeback on Sunday evening all three gets happy annie called dadi to inform about their plan dadi also is happy to meet them.

In the evening annie gets a call from someone so she goes away to speak but both devil seez this .. they already seeing annies excitement from past fewdays whenever she gets a call something about this call... so pinky and geet plans to hear what it is about so they hide behind pillar and listen to annies conversation..

Annie: hi, how are you, why dint you call me yesterday i was waiting for your call
Man: hi darling, am 5n how are you and your friends... i was little busy in work yesterday.
Annie: That two devils are getting doubt on my behaviour, why cant i tell them
Man: you very well know what is the issue... we will tell everyone when right time comes.
annie: when you are returning to delhi, am going to miss you
Man: i will return by Monday morning. I will also miss u, i cant call u this weekend so dont get worried... whats your plan for weekend.
annie: we are going to meet dadi and will return by Sunday evening.
Man: ok dear,atleast this weekend u meet her, i have to go bye love you and take care
annie: as you are not here am going to meet her this weekend, past 2 sundays i cant meet her because of you, LOV YOU TOO, TAKECARE BYE..

pinky and geet: love you
Annie turns back surprised to hear both the devils. Annie looked at them shocked geet and pinky gave a glare to annie and turns back to go..

Annie after few minutes enters the room to see both mummers.On seeing annie pinky stands up from bed pulls a chair in front of bed...

Annie know's what that meant call for enquiry commission annie sit on the chair with her face looking the floor
Geet: who is that you are speaking to? How you know him, From when this is going on
pinky: love do you love him? Why did you hide it from us?
annie: geet pinky, woh that is after taking a deep breath she continued YES AM IN LOVE, I KNOW HIM FOR PAST FEW YEARS HE PROPOSED ME 5 MONTHS BACK AND I ACCEPTED... YOU BOTH ONLY KNOW ABOUT THIS BUT I CANT SAY WHO HE IS NOW she finished and looked at each other... the enquiry commission was going on for past 30min annie answered everything but dint reveal who he is..
GEET: ok we accept and respect your decision but no more outing without informing us

Annie knows its geets concern and care on her so she accepted and cried with happiness atleast she got someone to support her love.. annie went to washroom to wash her face when she closed the door. Both devils took her phone and click the call log and took the last number in hurry before annie comes out.. after having dinner both geet and pinky went out saying some reason and annie to pack her bags to leave for her house tomorrow...
pinky: so geet whats the planwe have to know whether he is correct for our annie or not, i have a plan follow me

KHURANA CONSTRUCTION(6pm):

MAAN'S day went as usual nothing different but today he had a busy schedule 2meeting, and he also gone for site visit for that Mehra project near university and just now returned to his cabin. His day was totally hectic... but today fully unknowingly he carried a small smile on his face...

Once he enters his cabin he connects his phone with earplugs and plays yesterday's recording relaxing himself.

Adi knocks on Maan's cabin to discuss about some projects but even after few minutes he dint get any response so he enters the cabin worried for maan but what he saw is a shock for him.. maan relaxing on chair with earplugs and a huge smile on his face adi knows what it is he silently goes near him and pulls the plugs out.
ADI: Again lost in your misty's world my dear friend that you cant even hear someone knocking the door. maan smiles embarrassed being caught. so what next now you are in delhi did you plan to meet her Suddenly maans gets upset thinking of uncertainty of mission.
Adi: dont worry maan, our mens are on mission we will get to know soon
MAAN: Am not worried about it right now. adi was shocked will be an under statement he even thought for a minute his hearing capacity is lostBut what and how she will react when she gets to know about me? I really like her a lot am seeing her for past 2 and half years.
Adi: why don't you say about it to her, may be
maan: Do you think she will accept me with my truth, she is a flower bud but iam?
adi: maan nothing will happen to us, i dont know whether she will accept or not but you can hide it from her until we find solution for our problem and mission is completed
maan: adi... do you want me to lie to her cheat her, what if the mission is a failure? I cant break her trust i can never
Adi: can you live without her maan maan jerks up from his chair pushing it a little back with the force maans eyes starts to fill up
maan: No adi i cant, i can never even dream a life without her. But i cant snatch her smile and happiness from her... we are counting our days adi dont forget it, the mission is a do or die matter for us
Adi: ok let us leave it to destiny, maan looks at him confused if you both are meant to be she will herself come to you... if in anyways she comes to you promise me you should not avoid her
Maan looks at adi ok promise
After that both maan and adi leaves to Khurana Outhouse... straight away maan leaves to his gym to takeout his helplessness.

PART 5 CONTINUED BELOW...
Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 5:

Geet and pinky went to nearby Pco and enter private cabin to speak... once inside geet explained her plan to pinky... pinky gave her full support and dialed the number she got from annies phone and the first ring goes but she cuts the call with fear... she again makes a call the phone rings for few seconds she signed geet no one is picking..

KHURANA OUTHOUSE(7.40pm):

Maan is keep on exerciseing for past 30min, he stops and gets a towel to wipe himself when he saw his phone ringing. When he was about to pickup the call gets cut.. his already bad temper suits high, he was checking who called him its from an unknown number
He is confused who will call him from unknown number at this time? He again gets a call from same number he first thought to reject but somewhere he want to know who it is so he attend the call after few rings.

Maan: Hello... no words came from other side..

MAAN:HELLO HELLO IF YOU CANT SPEAK WHY DO U CALL

Geet gives a angry glare to her pinky standing next to her who handover phone to geet hearing maans rude angry voice

MAAN'S POV:

Geet: hello ...

i heared the melodies voice of a girl from other side that immediately suied away my temper and fracuation.. am i dreaming it to her voice, i shrugged it away and continued the call

Maan: yes
Geet: hi may i know who is this am speaking to?
Its totally insane someone calling him and asking who he is to MSK how dare they would it must be some prank call. So he raised his voice to show who they r dealing with.

Maan: its you who called first , have you forgot manners or you dont know manners of introducing yourself while you make a call.

I waiting to hear answer from otherside either to make sure its me dreaming her voice or to hear someone else voice

Geet: no its just i lost my manners yesterday in market.. and talking of manners you too dont know how to speak to a lady in scaristic tone

Again the same voice do voice also resemble someone else that too my misty's? But how dare someone speak like this to Me

Maan: ohh am really sorry about that but i don't have your manners, u should find it somewhere else... and r u a lady i dint recognise.. (sacritically) and if your bhak bhak is over am cutting the call.

Each second his temper raises the way someone is answering him back... at the sametime her voice smooth it... orelse he would have lost his control and yelled..

Geet: ok ok dont cut the call, am aliya

Maan: aliya? U mean aliya bhatt,

Geet: no no am just aliya. May i know Your name?

Maan: i wont say my name to just aliya without surname
[COLOR= RED]Geet: hello am a handa.[/COLOR]
I know geets surname is handa so want to know who is this anyone related to geet? Or someone randomly saying her surname.. 80% i know its my princess but i want to conform it. I just need a small clue.

Maan: are u sure if u want u can change i dont mind.

Geet: no why will i change, i said na am aliya handa now u say ur name mr.mannerful

Maan: Am did she know who am i,

Geet: what happened mr.. now you forgot your name(she giggles) do i need anymore clue to guess who it is... nothing more i need than her giggling to regognise its my princess.

Maan:now am sure its my misty, am in a playful mood so i thought to play with her a little.. how can i miss the chance... No miss.mannerless, i dint, its that you are so eager and curious to know my name

Geet: hello Mr.

Maan: balwant singh

Geet: what? Ohh mr.balwant singh

Maan:yes, now can i ask how you got this number or why u called

[COLOR=RED]Geet: for today its enough am done i will call u later


Maan: Later? When? will u call me tomorrow? What time? I got excited to speak to her daily

Geet: what? Y u are sounding excited and wont you be busy i heared you are a business man
I don't want to spoil the chance to speak to her with my over excitement. I got hold of my feelings

Maan: No,its just that i wont get a random call from a girl daily without knowing who i am or telling i will call tomorrow. And yes you heared right am a busy business man but not for you.

Geet: first of all am not a girl am a young lady.. then dont fly high, you are not Msk.. busy business man. Funny
what she meant by am not MSK, maybe she really dont know who she is speaking to...
ok ok now am leaving
Maan: atleast you can wish me goodnight na

Geet: hmm gudnight and bye MR.MANNERFUL

Maan: gudnight miss.handa,

They cut the call and left to hostel.

Precap: Geet in Khurana Mansion,


Edited by janumkrk - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 2
Awesome part
Maan is like a volcano hehe firing everyone
Adi tries to cntrl his temper but fails
Whom did he call that make Maan smile
Dadi wants Geet being her bahu ...
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
srry fr d late replies was too much held up
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 3 Awesome update
Annie is hesitant to talk to her brother
Geet learns about the meaning of DD from Pinky who is all starry eyed
Lol and she invents her meaning of the same
Maan is sad listening to his sister's hesitant voice
What is it that is making him keep away from his baby sis
Maan loves Geet and records her voice
He heard their convo
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 4
Awesome part
So Annie loves someone
And Geet and Pinky r determined to know more about the man
Maan is lost hearing Geet's recorded voice
So what mission r they talking bout
cont soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome
Finished reading all parts
Maan secretly admiring his mishty
Geet pi.ky visiting Annie's daadi
This weekend
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Posted: 7 years ago
aww maan in love with geet but afraid to tell her because of his job looks like...where he and adi are both in danger...
why is he away from his family what happened????

how will geet react when she knows it is her brother whom annie loves
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hie Dear
Sorry for not posting my comment for part 3. I had read it already and missed it somehow.

Will read part 4 as well and comment at at a time.

Sorry again dear 😳

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