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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 18-
Shiv ran up to Uma "Dadusa, I have gotten everyone but Suman and I out of the house for a few hours"
Uma smiled "You are a miracle worker, I have made some arrangements, you go and make sure Suman leads your Bhabisa to the right place"

Shiv saluted at Uma as he ran to find Suman.
Suman stuck her thumb up to assure Shiv that Kanak was blindfolded and ready.

Shiv and Suman looked in at Kanak about to remove the blindfold.
Suman grabbed Shiv's top "come on lets go"
Shiv stamped his foot "But i want to watch what happens"
Suman shook her head "No, come on they need their privacy, its adult time, lets go"
Shiv and Suman walked away.

Kanak pulled off her blindfold.
Looking down she noted the rose petals littered over the floor.
Candles lit up the room, spelling her name.

Kanak grasped her chest, did Uma do this?
She couldn't believe he could be so romantic!

Fingers slowly trailed up her arm, his hot breath hit her neck as he whispered lowly "This is my way of saying thank you"

Uma walked infront of Kanak after pushing the door shut and locking it.
Kanak's eyes remained closed as Uma brushed her hair back, pressing a soft kiss to her neck she shuddered as he tugged her arm slightly bringing her forward.

Her eyes opened, drawn into his dark brown eyes, twinkling with mischief.
Tracing her lips with his thumb he muttered under his breath "beautiful"

Moving closer to her he pressed a soft kiss to her forehead, then both of her cheeks.
Smiling as she closed her eyes he pressed another kiss to her lips.

She gasped, allowing his tounge entrance into her mouth.
Gripping her waist he pulled Kanak closer to him as his tounge slowly found its way to hers, her taste was both intoxicating and addictive.

As her feet swayed he pulled her closer to him as he pulled away and continued his sweet torture on her neck.
Kanak let out a groan of pleasure as Uma continued to nip at her neck, opening his mouth he suckled on her neck.

Kanak's nails dug into Uma's shoulders as she stood on her tiptoes.
"Say my name" Uma uttered against her neck.
Throwing her head back she opened her eyes "Uma" her voice was a caress of his name.

As her eyes rolled back in pleasure she moaned his name again.
Pulling back he rested his forehead against hers, their heavy breaths mingling.
Any longer and he would have lost all control.

"Look at me"
Kanak opened her eyes to look into his "Thank you"
Kanak gulped at the way his eyes traced her every curve, they were so close she couldn't tell whos heartbeat was who's.

"Thank you Kanak"
Breathless, "for what"
"Being you"

Brushing his nose against hers he stepped back and walked out of the room.
Kanak sat on the bed with a bounce, lying down she rested her hand on her heart.

Not even fireworks could explain that feeling!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 19-
A dark chapter ahead, not necessary to read. Everything gets better in the chapter after.

Kanak had fallen asleep before Uma had returned.

Waking in the morning Kanak went to serve breakfast to Uma.
Nanda watched her, holding the knife in her hand she slid it under her sari and edged toward Kanak.

"Why , Kanak you are glowing"
Kanak dropped the spoon in her hand and turned towards Nanda.
"Maasi Sa, you scared me"

Kanak looked down at the glint of the knife, eyes widening she jumped back quickly.

"Uma may have fallen for that face, but will he still like it if its scarred"
Nanda held her knife above her head as she went to stab Kanak.

Kanak grabbed the knife and pushed Nanda back
"Are you crazy, what are you doing" shouted Kanak

Nanda pushed the knife down Kanak's arm as Kanak grabbed it and threw it to the floor.
"I will take away everything Uma loves, including you"

Nanda grabbed the pot of hot oil and threw it onto the floor.
Turning she grabbed Kanak by the hair and was ready to push her.

"Maasi sa stop" shouted Shiv
As Nanda turned to face him, Kanak made her escape.

Uma walked forward "whats going on here"
Uma looked at the hot oil on the floor and the blood dripping down Kanak's arm.

Nanda picked up a hot log that was on fire and held it up to Kanak.
"Maasi sa what are you doing"

Uma shouted, alarmed.
Nanda turned to face him "Killing her, like I killed your father"

Uma grabbed the log immediatley as he told Shiv to call the police.
"I thought of you as a mother how could you betray me like this" Uma shouted as the police arrived

Nanda smiled "money makes the world go around "
As Uma let her go Nanda pushed Kanak into the oil just before the police grabbed her and dragged her away.

Uma pulled an unconscious Kanak to him as he sobbed into her hair.
Pouring water over her burns he waited for her to wake up and for Doctor Gupta to arrive.

For this, Uma Shankar would never forgive himself.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 20-
After Nanda's attack,
Kanak woke up a few hours later.
Doctor Gupta had advised Kanak bed rest and assured them the burns on her arm would not be severe and would leave mild if any scarring.

Uma sat in the corner of the room, his head hung low, shoulders shaking as he sobbed for what he could have lost.

"Uma" Kanak called out.
Uma jumped up quickly, pulling her to him "I just need to hold you, I need to know youre real, that youre with me, I am so sorry"

Kanak stroked his hair as he held her to him, gently so as not to hurt her.

"Im here, look at me , im not mad at you, we are safe now and we can be happy"
Uma looked at Kanak as she cupped his cheek she leaned her head against his.

"I thought i had lost you" Uma's voice broke as his hand fisted the blanket
"Never" Kanak's eyes held promise, she would never leave him.

Lying down next to her, he pulled her to him.
For now she was there, they were safe and they could sleep another night.


Kanak woke up in the morning to see suitcases on the floor.

Walking up to Uma she turned him around to face her "Why are these suitcases out"
Uma moved himself away from her "You are going home"

"Uma, dont be silly come on why are you being like this"
Uma pushed his hands through his hair "It is my fault my father is dead, I couldnt protect him and I will never be able to protect you, everyone I care for gets hurt"

Kanak grabbed his arm "Uma please dont push me away"
Shoving her back he looked into her eyes
"What dont you get, I dont deserve you but I am a selfish man and so I let you stay here"

Wrapping her arms around him "I want to stay with you, I dont want to leave you, of course you deserve me"
Uma slipped to the floor as he sobbed, Kanak held him close as he did.

"You know there was a time I didnt think life was worth living, I wanted to end my life but a man said a few words I cant remember them all but it made me want to carry on"
Kanak reminisced
Kanak reaches the top of the monument and looks down. She cries. She hears a voice. He asks her not to get scared of him. He says I m not your enemy, I know you have a storm in you right now, today you want to end your life, you don't see any meaning of your life. Kanak hears him and stops. The man says ignorant person is like a stone, he does not know his motive and duty, he stays at some place, but when a stone for Ram name, it has made his own way, similarly when a person accepts duty, he also makes his own way.



A woman asks for whom shall I fulfill duties. The man asks her to become support of others, if human gets courage, even Lord will support, who knows, your determination and love gets him back to you, else you can lose yourself. The woman says if I don't get his love. He says belief is a big thing, human's belief completes every tough work, we feel like is like a cut kite, but wind direction changes with time, sometimes wind can help you fly, just keep flying, person is never in a single relation, you can't hurt all relations for a single relation, all humans came on earth for some motive, find the motive and make your parents name shine, you are not alone, we all are with you, just stop for other relations. Kanak crys. Kanak wipes her tears and smiles. She looks for the ma .
*Flashback Over*

Uma turns to face her "I gave advice to Payal on her wedding day with my brothers picture, were we in Ladno or where you live"
Kanak's eyes widened "Oh my god it was your voice, you saved my life, see I need you, we are meant to be"

Kanak pulled Uma to her, thanking the lord for the wonderful thing she had got.

Later on Uma leaned against the kitchen door, watching Kanak.
She was the other half to him, he could never imagine life without her for he would be incomplete.

Walking forward he rested his chin at the crook of her neck "We have the house to ourselves"
His fingers traced her waist, tugging at the chain he watched the beads fall to the ground.

Kanak rested her head back, he was insatiable.
Uma turned her around to face him.

Lust and desire swirled in his eyes, leaning down he took her lips in a soaring kiss, making Kanak feel like she was on top of the world.

Pulling back he smiled down at her "I love you"

As she wrapped her arms around his neck and pulled him closer, she knew life couldnt get much better than this.
Edited by Mayakhan12 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Omg!! Maya you are a wonderful writer, love your story a lot.
Love the pace the kanum chemistry and most wonderful thing the romance it was brilliant. The way you wrote the sensuous scenes was awesome. Thanks a lot dear! Keep writing, and update soon. Thanks a lot.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai maya.
It was a wonderful story.
I loved it. Last part was awesome.

Keep on writing. Dear...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Omg!! Maya you are a wonderful writer, love your story a lot.

Love the pace the kanum chemistry and most wonderful thing the romance it was brilliant. The way you wrote the sensuous scenes was awesome. Thanks a lot dear! Keep writing, and update soon. Thanks a lot.


Thank you so much, this was so lovely to read! Please check out my other stories if you are interested, although the concepts are slightly different!
Thank you for reading, im so glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya.

It was a wonderful story.
I loved it. Last part was awesome.

Keep on writing. Dear...


Thank you! Im so glad you enjoyed it, i wasnt to sure on the last part so im glad it was a success!

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