RikaraSS-AAnkhon ki Gustakhiyaan-Season IV-The Wedding-P5-03.12

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AAnkhon ki Gustakhiyaan - Season IV - The Wedding

Part 5

Next day, early morning, Daadi witnessed Omkara coming down the stairs carrying a sleepy Gauri in his arms, walking towards their room. She was behind the pillar so he could not see her; he wouldn't have anyways, because all his attention was on his Ri, she looked so beautiful whilst sleeping, like a child. Daadi, although annoyed that they didn't follow the two feel rule, was also happy inside, she knew Omkara had become a real Ishqbaaz now, for Gauri. In any other circumstances, Omkara would have happily followed any rule set by Daadi, but in this case, he was desperate, wasn't he? These two were inseparable, and with Gauri around, Omkara will never go back to his old ways, into darkness. Daadi blessed them in her heart and moved to the puja room, also making a note of enforcing the two feel rule properly this time.

Omkara laid her on the bed; she was still clutching his collar and wouldn't leave him. Om, stay with me' she mumbled. He smiled, and cuddled next to her, very aware that soon he will have to leave, lest someone catch them like this, despite the two feet rule. Gauri was smiling in her sleep; she was at peace now, unlike last night. When he was doing all those ministrations with her, she felt aroused, and very affected. Although by now, she had studied about the relationship between a man and a woman and read several fictional romantic novels, all that still couldn't prepare her for all that she felt when he touched her. She knew she was ready now, to become his completely, she wanted him as much as he wanted her, but she was also afraid of losing control, and they had not even gone far enough together yet. When she finally woke out of her dreamland, he was gone.

She woke up, anticipating a new day, beautiful because they were together and getting married! She looked at her mehendi clad hands and realised that she will have to remove it now and check the colour. Anika and Bhavya came barging in, show, show, did you remove it?' they were curious.' No' Gauri pouted. They helped her remove it and were surprised, it was the darkest shade of maroon and on her milky skin it looked absolutely stunning. Gauri was very happy.

He loves you so much Gauri', Anika quipped.' This is the colour of the warmth in your relationship'
Gauri remembered how he had taken care of her all night, getting his way as well, and blushed. But why are you still in your lehenga? Did you not change yesterday? How did you sleep?' Bhavya questioned. Gauri suddenly realised she had his work of art on her stomach as well, and covered herself with her dupatta,' Woh , main?' she had no reply.

But Anika and Bhavya were in full mood to tease her,' Woh, main kya bhabhi? Bhavya smiled
Woh mehendi wale haath the na, toh, I couldn't change' she lied.

Hume bula liya hota, hum help kar dete. Ya aap badalna hi nahin chahti thi? I am sure you had other help as well.' Bhavya was referring to Omkara, and Anika couldn't help giggling on the side. haan Gauru, I was looking for you after the function, but you had disappeared. Where were you?' Anika added her two cents.

Gauri had died and gone to heaven by now, out of embarrassment, just telling Anika and Bhavya about last night and imagining him helping her out of the lehenga was ...ufff!!! Thank god, he didn't propose that last night.

She hit Bhavya gently,' Chal hat, kuch bhi.' And the three girls laughed together. She made a note to stay away from the Jatadhari today; he had caused enough embarrassment for her already.

Jhanvi Ma knocked on the door and asked, kya joke tha? Mujhe bhi batao'

All the girls were quiet, looking at each other, kuch nahin Ma, kuch bhi nahin, yeh kya hain' Gauri changed the topic looking at a bowl in Ma's hands.

This is warm methi oil, tumhari mehendi ke liye, isse colour aur bhi khilega. Dikhao, kaisi rachi hain?' Ma took her palms. This is beautiful Gauri' she said and started applying the oil on her palms. She hugged her and said,' Don't put too much water on the mehendi today ok, someone help her today' she pointed to Anika and Bhavya. She also gave her plastic gloves to cover. Jhanvi wanted everything to be perfect. She had given up hope of Omkara ever getting married given his thoughts on marriage, but she couldn't believe that this was finally happening. She had Gauri in the form of a DIL, and she couldn't be happier.

Yes Aunty, we will help her brush and all. Unless she wants someone else's help?' Bhavya was relentless and Gauri was turning red like a tomato.

When she came out of the shower and stood in front of the mirror, that's when she noticed it, a hickey! It was on her left shoulder, just on the bone, it had become more visible now. She remembered last night and blushed, but at the same time she was worried, how is she going to hide this? Bhavya must have noticed it already, Damn Hippieji, she is not going to allow him to come within two feet of her today' she thought.

Daadi's rule was 100% correct. With this resolve she got ready, somehow hiding it with makeup and her dupatta. On the other hand, Omkara was thinking of ways of being close to his titli, despite the rule.

Today was their sangeet, it was going be an early evening affair as in the night, they had to retire early for next day when a lot of other functions and the wedding was planned. The entire OM was practicing for sangeet from a while ago. Two teams were created. Tej, Shakti, Shivaay ,Rudi and Dandi bhaiya were on the bride's side and Jhanvi, Pinky, Anika, Bhavya and Saahil were on the groom's side. Daadi got to be on both sides as and when she chose. Gauri's mom was neutral as she couldn't choose between her daughter and dammadji. They were all busy getting ready for their respective acts, whilst Omkara was looking for his Ri.

He had not seen her all day now; she had been hiding away from him. He was searching for her like a crazy man, when he got a glimpse of her in the kitchen, he walked in.

Ri, I have been looking for you. Show me your mehendi.' He commanded.

No. Daadi asked me not to show it to you' she hid her hands behind her back.

Please. Please. Please' now, he was like a little child with a puppy face, requesting instead of commanding.

No. Go away. This is what you get for embarrassing me. You have no idea how much Bhavya and Bhaujai teased me this morning' she pouted.

What did I do?' he was losing patience; he grabbed her hand and pulled her into his arms, locking his hands behind her back. He was looking at her as if he would eat her up. He leaned in near her ear and whispered,' tell me you didn't enjoy it?' and then kissed her earlobe. She shivered.

Stop, don't come near me. And I haven't even shown you what you did last night. How am I going to hide it?' she regretted the minute she mentioned it, now he will tease her more!

What? Show me na.' He knew very well, what she was talking about but he was enjoying teasing her and how he wanted to see his mark on her. He started moving her dupatta to find the spot, as he knew exactly where it was.

She was trying to stop him; they were lost in each other when they heard a very angry voice.

Omkara, Gauri. Yeh kya ho raha hain?' Daadi looked very perturbed. Maine tunhe mana kiya hain naa, two feet rule, kya hua? Main dekh rahi hoon tum kab se apni manmani kar rahe ho'

Gauri had tears in her eyes, Daadi had never scolded her before and Omkara was taken aback as well.

Sorry Daadi, woh, Daadi, main coffee lene aaya tha' he lied.

Daadi came and pulled his ear, Coffee! Tu kab se coffee peene laga. Tu toh woh glucose biscuit wala chai pita hain na? Maine kaha tha na, koi toh tumse jhoot bulva hi dega. Ab dekho, kaise ishqbaazi main jhoot bolna seekh gaye ho tum, sach ke boyfriend. Aur jhooth bola bhi toh Daadi se' She squeezed his ear harder.

Aaah, sorry Daadi, sorry' Omkara pleaded all the while looking at Gauri. She looked very upset, tears were resting in the corner of her eyes and she was trying hard to control them.

Chal, jaa yahan se' Daadi ordered him and he left with a pout, although not wanting to leave without consoling his titli.

Daadi didn't want to be that harsh with them, atleast not with Gauri, but she also wanted Omkara to realise how much love had changed him. How he had abandoned the black and white Omkara with fixed notions about life to this often grey, often colourful, naughty, ready to lie for his love Ishqbaaz. The child-like zid which he had abandoned long ago, he was now asking that off his Gauri. He was no longer comfortable with his loneliness; he sought her out for company always. Daadi was so happy with his progress. And with regards to the two feet rule, well, she was also allowed some fun at the expense of her potas, wasn't she; after all she was only sixteen at heart!

Later he found Ri walking with along the corridor with a tray full of flowers. He held her hand, swung her around and pinned her to a pillar, resulting in all the flowers falling off the tray. She didn't know what hit her, but she had a pretty good idea. Nandi Bail was acting impossible these days. First she had to face so much teasing because of him, then Daadi scolded her and now this, she was furious!
Aap' she was just about to tell him off when she found his finger on her lips,' Shhh, let me look at you' he was staring into her eyes and she was losing control, very fast...so she had to look away.
That was it, for her. He was not taking any of this seriously! She was angry and upset.

Aap jaiye yahan se. Hume aapse koi baat nahin karni. Hum aapse bahut naraaz hain' she pushed him and walked away. He was surprised. He didn't realise his chirayya was really so affected; now he was worried. He couldn't have her all upset on the eve of their wedding sangeet.

The function started at designated time, OM was decorated as a bride, with chandeliers lit up with candles, gold and white drapes, beautiful flowers everywhere, and ambience meant to etch in your memories forever. For Gauri and Omkara , it was perfect. They came down the stairs with their respective teams. Gauri was on Shivaay Bhaiya's arms, looking like a goddess in Prussian blue lehenga adorned with silver and gold thread and precious metals woven onto it. He hair was open, the dark colour of the lehenga complementing her milky skin and dark marron mehendi clad hands perfectly. If he was lost looking at her, it wasn't his fault. He was in matching sherwani looking dapper as can be. The rest of the family had co-ordinated with the colour schemes wearing different shades of blue, leaving the best for the bride and groom. They seated on opposite sides in their teams and Rudra the anchor for the evening, with Gauri's mom took the stage.

So, family members, I start the sangeet festivities of my dear bro O and Chul Bhabhi. Firstly we invite the bride side to showcase their talent'.

The stage was then taken over by Shivaay, Rudra and Dandi dancing to the famous tune, looking in Gauri's direction, making her blush.

Mehendi laga ke rakhna, doli saja ke rakhna, lene tujhe o Gauri, aayenge tere sajna,
Shavva, oye oye oye, shavva

Omkara was looking in her direction, telling her with his eyes, they are talking about me, I am going to whisk you away and hide you from the rest of the world'; he had a proud smirk on his face. Gauri was still upset with him, so she did not reciprocate. He felt a sharp pain in his chest, he was sad now, she was still upset.

Everyone applauded when the act was over. Next, it was the turn of the groom's side, where, Anika, Bhavya , Saahil were all to ready to perform. They held hands on the stage and started,

Lo chali main, apne devar ki baraat leke, lo chali main. Aayi hain shubh ghadi, aaj bani main badi, Kal tak ghar ki bahu thi, ab hoon jethani, she walked to Gauri and gestured towards her,' hukum chalaungi main, raub dikhaungi main...lo chali main'

Daadi joined the dance party and they took Gauri along and forced her to dance, she was happy to comply, but this time the smile did not reach her eyes, Omkara was watching only her. Everyone applauded when the act was over. There were other acts, food and drinks, conversations and teasing, everyone was enjoying the sangeet function thoroughly except two brooding figures (Omkara and Gauri). She was still upset with him, but in being so, she was upset with herself, she was very sad. And how could he be ok when she was upset with him?

The function was nearing its end, when Rudy climbed the stage again,' Attention everyone, we have one last surprise request'.

A figure stood on the stage in the dark, everyone was trying to guess who it was, but one person already had guessed, a spotlight hit him, it was Omkara.'This is for you' he looked at Gauri.

Tu safar mera, hain tu hi meri manzil. Tere bina guzara ae dil hain mushkil.
Tu mera khuda, tu hi dua main shamil, Tere bina guzara ae dil hain mushkil.
Mujhe aazmati hain teri kami, meri har kami ko hain tu lazmi

She had tears in her eyes, yes, he was acting stubborn earlier, but he didn't deserve the punishment she had meted out, of not talking to him, not responding to his eye conversations and being upset with him.

Junoon hain mera, banu main tere kaabil, Tere bina guzara ae dil hain mushkil.
Yeh rooh bhi meri, yeh jism mera, utna mera nahin, jitna hua tera
Tune diya hain jo, who dard hi sahi, tujhse mila hain toh inaam hain mera

His eyes were conveying a lot to her, from his every last being, he was sad because she wasn't happy, but if that's what she wanted, she wanted to punish him, he will bear it gladly.

Mera aasmaan dhunde teri zameen, meri har kami ko hain tu lazmi
Zameen pe na sahi, toh aasmaan main aa mil, Tere bina guzara, ae dil hain mushkil.

He held out his hand to her, she couldn't stop herself; she rushed to his side and embraced him, burying her head in his chest. This is when he smiled, she smiled, and everything was all right in RiKaraLand once again.

Everyone applauded, bringing them out of their reverie. The party disintegrated. They were sitting in his studio feeding each other, as both of them had not eaten anything since they had this fight. He held a morsel to her lips and said,' Promise me, you will never be upset with me again for more than 2 minutes. I cannot bear it Ri. I felt like the air was sucked out of my lungs today'. She fed him a morsel and said,' Never. Do you think I enjoyed being upset with you, I was suffering each second that you were. Next time we fight, we will resolve it within 2 minutes, promise.'

Daadi watched this from afar, with tears in her eyes, blessed the two, no, one soul in her thoughts and left. Two feel rule gaya tel lene, she thought, RiKara's 2 minute rule was much better!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Voww...that was awsomeee...😃
Loved AniVya teasing and blushingRi...😳...they break dadi's 2 foot rule...dadi herself withdrw it aftr seeing their love...Sach ka boyfrnd changed sooo much...😛
It was really a bliss...so sangeet function finished...is there any Bachelor n spinster party...???
Waiting for next update...come soon...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow that was just awesome loved it so much.
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I'm in love with this Kara..he's so much in love with her that he left his obsession of truth and embraced some white lies just to be with her..two feet rules couldn't keep him away from his titli and he found his ways to have her in his arms...but she was update due to daadi's scolding..aww..!! Poor Ri..loved how Om pacified her...and thank God daadi realized her two feet rules made my babies upset...the last one of two minutes rules is better then two feet rules stole the whole update...the sangeet ceremony and Oberoi's performance was precious..I still wish to get a re marriage track of Om and Gauri with full rasams in the show as well.. 😭
Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautifully written
Loved naughty Kara

Bechari Ri had to endure teasing

Kara is a true ishqbaaz filled with love

I liked their two minute rule... However I think they will not fight at all

Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 That was such a wonderful update.. The way you portray their love and bond is so perfect!
Thanks a ton for the pm!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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nice update dear
Rikara in that much love that they can't be upset with each other for more than 2 min .. how cute...

Dadi's 2 feet rule is no more and she is trying a new RIKARA RULE "2 minutes rule" 🤣

waiting for the next...

Pls update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful update. Pls write more.
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Aww! Dadi is a cutie, she has everyones best interest in her heart but damn that two feet rule of hers 😆
But I guess, All's well that ends well.
Loved the update, why can't they have like a normal nice sangeet like this one on the show too. Gul doesn't believe in normal functions and marriages, I think, lol 😔

Thankyou for this, looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aawww... My babiieess... ❤️
I can imagine the shade of red on her hands, with such a loving Jatadhari around her...
Tej Shiv Ru on Gauri's side...( Madhuri's peeerrffeecct ) 😃
ShivRi descending hands in hands... I love their bond so much... He's the fatherly brotherly shadow whose cool shade she's missed until now in her life... ❤️
Lo chali mein is what I've aallwwaayyss imagined for AniOm in Om's wedding... I sooo wishsh we get to seee this onscreen..😭 😭 😭
Why can't CVs think in this direction !
You just made me nostalgic reminding me of Mehndi lagake rakhna in Bareilly... Ohh wasn't that a pleasant surprise !...🥱 😭
Ae dil hai mushkil...... How could he not win her back...😃
Even Dadi had to give up on the 2 feet rule finally ! How could she part them... after all they were not 2 souls anymore... one cannot divide a soul.. and my RiKara are one heart and one soul...
Thank You again ! 😊
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