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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: rarefan
Good story.. grand OMM of pinky...
Please write more

Thank you dear...😊

Aww...Will try to write more...😳

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: Apu_915
Amazing Update. Totally loved it.
Apu...😊
Happy to know that you liked it...😳
Loads of hugs to you for writing the Grand OMM of Pinky just the way I had wanted it to be in the show🤗
Aww...Happy to have helped dear...
It was so full of Emotions and beautifully written from Shivaay's outburst to everyone leaving together for a happy life ahead ❤️
Have always wanted a happily ever after for junior Oberoi's away from their selfish seniors...😆
Then Shivaay regretting how he behaved with Anika before but now he has changed for good. Would love to read an epilogue for this. Do write if possible
Will try to write dear...😳
Thanks for the PM!
Lots of Love ❤️
-Aparna

Aparna...😊

Thank you so much for your encouragement...😳

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written..

Thank you dear...😊

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: tikit
Fantastic and simply superb biggest omm of Pinky ever. She got the money but lost very precious thing the Oberoi family. Thank u for the pm

Thank you dear...😊

Yes...her selfishness made her lose her son, her husband and her family...

Naam, daulath saab mila but she lost what was really important in her selfishness...

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: chavi12345
Beautiful story ., Just loved it .. will writen ... Hope obros move out of OM for some time.
Write am epilogue dear

Thank you dear...😊

Obro's really need to step out...varna they get caught up in the games of their parents...humesha kuch na kuch zyapa hotha hein ene...

Will try to write an epilogue...😳

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: January31
Beautiful story... Well written... Keep it up

Thank you dear...😊

Happy to know that you liked it...

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Kirthi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: joy1
Wow !
What a grand OMM of Pinky Singh Oberoi!!!

This was needed and I totally loved it.
That last line worked like a punch line.
'For The first time in life, OM creeped her out'

Good job kirthi.
Looking forward to read more works from you :)

Joy...😊

Thank you dear for your encouragement...

Happy to know that you liked it...

Now Pinky has the money and power she had desperately wanted and yet had lost the most important things in her life...her son, her husband and her family...all because of her selfishness...

That line was the first thing that came to my mind when I thought about pinky's OMM...This story developed around that one...😆

So happy that you noticed it dear...

Will try to write more...😳

thank you for the support...