FF on RR:Love wins over Hatred part2 pg.2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey frnds.I hv read so many fics on RN & HN but had hardly read any fic on RR so here's my fic on RR.

Plz comment on my fic.

Col.Shakti Chandra just left raj's room.Raj closed the door and sat on the sofa.He was looking very sad.He was lost in his thoughts when Col.chandra was talking with him some time back.He started remembering all the lovely moments he had spent with the love of his life.A gentle smile came on his face now.He looked at the engagement ring.Half an hour back he got engaged to her.Then suddenly all the words of naina & chandra came into his mind.He couldn't believe his eyes when naina showed him the photo of navin,his best friend & ritu,the love of his life.He accepted the truth that navin was in ritu's life b4 him but he couldn't tolerate neither accept what col.chandra said one hour back.

"Ritu,a traitor,a spy,no, she can't be,she can't be..."

His mind says ritu is indeed his biggest enemy but his heart says ritu cannot be a traitor.

But raj is very strong.He knows he shld control his feelings.For him,Country comes first.And for the sake of his country,if had to kill ritu,he has to do it.After all,he got engaged to ritu not b'coz he loves her but b'coz it was his plan to catch ritu red handed & expose her in front of the whole world.

Suddenly he got up,started searching for something in the drawers,found a small paper,locked the room & went outside kma.

Next day,it was around 12AM when he stopped his jeep in front of a house.He was searching for this house frm the past 3 hours.The place was isolated,no one could be found there.The house was located on the outskirts of delhi.

Raj opened the gate & went inside.He knocked the door of the house.After a long time,a lady opened the door.Raj thought she may be ritu's mother.

Yes,Raj is now in ritu's home.He had stolen ritu's address long bck frm her purse.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start dear!!!!! It is nice to see that somebody started writing on raj-ritu also 👏 .Waiting for the next part...continue soon 😃
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superb........ 👏 👏 👏
cont soon
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cool ff yar plzzz do contt sooon
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superb start dr......and d part is also superb.plz continue
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subha where is the update...plz continue dr
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👏 wow nice start...please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx 4 liking my fic.
Here's the second part.

Raj:"Kya yeh Dr.Ritu Mishra ka ghar hai?"
Ritu's mom was taken aback.After five years,she heard this name.
Ritu's mom(angrily):"Aap galat pate par aaye hain.Yaha koi ritu nahi rehti."
She was abt to bang the door on raj's face when he stopped her.
Raj:"Dekhiye,mera naam Capt.Rajveer Shikhawat hai.Main ek army officer hoon,kma se aaya hoon.Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai,sirf do minute."
Ritu's mom became nervous.She couldn't understand what she shld do now.She kept thinking as to why this man frm army has come here that too after 5 yrs.
Raj:"Ma'am plz,yeh mera ya aapka nahi balki poore desh ka sawaal hai.Please!"
The lady told him to come in.
When raj entered the room,first thing he noticed was a photo of ritu alongwith the lady and an old man.He is convinced now that it is indeed ritu's home.
Ritu's mom told him to sit.
"Kahiye,kya poochna chahte hain aap?"
Raj;"Main aapko Dr.ritu mishra ke baare kuch poochna chahta hoon."
Ritu's mom:"Ritu mere liye 5 saal pehle hi mar chuki hai.Woh kaha hai,kya kar rahi hai,zinda bhi hai ya nahi yeh main nahi jaanti."
Raj:"Main jaanta hoon dr.ritu kaha hai,woh kma mein hai."
Ritu's mom was shocked.
Raj:"Dr.mishra pichle 8-9 mahino se kma mein hai.Aur mujhe pata chal chuka hai ki dr.mishra ek spy hai,ek gaddar."
Ritu's mom:"To phir aap yaha kyun aaye hain?Aap jakar giraftaar kyun nahi kar lete uss ritu ko?"
Raj:"Zaroor karunga lekin usse pehle main ritu mishra ke baare mein sab kuch jaana chahta hoon aur uske baare mein mujhe aapke alawa aur kaun bata sakta hai.Dekhiye,aap befikar hokar mujhe ritu mishra ke baare mein sab kuch bata dijiye.Main vaada karta hoon aapko kuch nahi hone dunga."
Ritu's mom then got up from the sofa and went towards the family photo.She kept on looking at the photo for some time.Tears welled out frm her eyes.
Ritu's mom:"Yeh mera parivar tha,yeh mere pati rajesh hain aur yeh ritu,hamari beti.Humne bade laad pyaar se ritu ko pala,posa,bada kiya.Usne jo chaha humne usse diya.Kabhi kisi cheez hi kami mehsoos nahi hone di,humne usse bahut achche sanskaar diye aur usne bhi hamare har sapne ko pura kiya.Bahut khush the hum sab."
Ritu's mom had started crying by now.
Raj:"Phir ritu mishra terrorist kyun...I mean aisi kya wajah hui ki woh iss raaste par chal padi?"
Ritu's mom turned towards raj.Now raj could see anger in the eyes of the lady.
Ritu's mom:"Aapne Dr.Prakash Mishra ka naam to suna hi hoga?"
Raj:"Dr.Prakash Mishra?Of course,he was a terrorist,usse navin ne pakda tha kyunki woh ek desh drohi tha.Usne army jail mein suicide kiya tha"
Ritu's mom:"Prakash ritu ka pati tha."
Raj was shocked.
Ritu's mom:"Woh ritu ka pati tha aur woh desh drohi nahi tha.Ritu prakash se bahut pyaar karti thi.Woh college mein ritu ka senior tha.Dono ne love marriage ki thi.Bahut khush ritu prakash ke saath lekin...lekin achanak prakash ko giraftaar kar diya gaya kyunki army ke mutabik usne terrorists ko apne ghar mein panaah di thi.Sach to yeh hai ki woh jaanta hi nahi tha ki woh log terrorists the.Agar jaanta to aisa kabhi nahi karta.Jinhe giraftaar karna tha woh log to bhaag gaye lekin pakda gaya bekasoor prakash.Capt.Navin singh ahluwalia ne usse giraftaar kiya tha.Prakash ne usse kitna kaha ki woh desh drohi nahi hai lekin kisi ne uski baat nahi suni.Usse jail mein physical aur mental torture ke alawa aur kuch nahi mila.Aur phir tang aakar usne apni jaan le li.Poori tarah se toot chuka tha prakash.Usne torture ke karan nahi balki deshdrohi hone ke itne bade ilzaam ke karan suicide kar liya.Ritu ke papa ko apni beti ko vidhwaa dekhkar bardaasht nahi hua aur heart attack ki vajah se woh bi..."
Ritu's mom couldn't stop crying now.
Ritu's mom:"Ritu se yeh sab bardaasht nahi hua.Usne na sirf apne pati aur pita hi nahi khoya balki prakash ki aakhri nishani,uske bachche ko bhi kho diya.Mental shock ki vajah se uska miscarriage ho gaya.Phir na jaane ritu ko kya ho gaya,woh poori tarah se badal gayi.Uski aankhon mein mujhe nafrat aur bagawat ke alawa aur kuch nahi dikhayi deti thi.Aur phir ek din ritu bina bataye ghar chhodkar chali gayi.Uske baad 1 saal tak uska koi pata nhi chala.Ek saal baad jab woh ghar aayi to uski aankhon mein maine wohi nafrat dekhi.Usne mujhe kaha ki usne capt.ahluwalia ke saath bhi wohi kiya jo usne prakash ke saath kiya tha.Usne navin ko aise jaal mein phasaya jisse woh kabhi bahar nahi nikal sakta.Jis tarah usne nirdosh prakash ko phasaya ussi aaj woh bhi nirdosh hokar saza kaat raha hai.Zyada poochne par ritu ne mujhe bataya ki ab woh ek terrorist ban chuki hai.Maine ritu ko bahut samjhaya ki usne jo bhi kiya,galat kiya aur uss officer ko bacha le par ritu meri ek nahi mani.Aur phir maine uske saath saare rishte tod diye aur usse iss ghar se hi nahi,apni zindagi se bhi bahar nikal diya.Main aapko ritu ke baare mein sirf itna hi bata sakti hoon.Pichle 5 saalon mein woh kaha thi,kya kar rahi thi yeh maine jaane ki kabhi koshish nahi ki.Main jaanti hoon ki aapki army ne ritu ke saath aur uske pati ke saath galat kiya lekin main yeh bhi jaanti hoon ki ritu ne jo raasta apnaya woh bhi galat hai.Ab aapko ritu ke saath jo karna hai,woh kijiye."
Raj thanked ritu's mom & left the home.Now he knows what he shld do with ritu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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subha mindblowing update friend...
waiting 4 next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice to see a FF on Rajveer and Ritu!!!!!! 😊

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