ANGEL'S TOUCH AR FF part 4 7/2/18

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hello everyone im back with a new ff of mine based on my fav jodi armman ridhima(AR) from Dill Mill Gayye (DMG)

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PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 2
PART 3 PAGE 3
PART 4 PAGE 4




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PART ~ 1


a car comes n stops on front of the house.. its a decent sized single storey house neither a big mansion nor a small one.. 3 bedroom with a living room dining and kitchen.

A man almost 26-27 yrs got down the the driver side and ran towards the passenger side to open the gate..
Man : araam se..
Lady in almost same age as the man got down holding his hand...
Lady : kya shishank ap bhi aise behave kr rahe ho jaise main bimar hn..
shishank : padma tum bahut bolti hoo.. it's time to take proper rest.. tum koi kam nahi krogi no stress n hospital se bhi chuti..
padma : sabhi instructions yahin khade khade doge lets go in...
shishank : sorry.. chalo..

Both moved inside holding hands..

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Inside
A little boy almost 2 yrs was crying loudly.. and another couple same age as shishank n padma were trying to calm him down..

padma : are mera chotu sa armaan kyu ro raha hai...
Boy : *sob* teddy *sob* chahie *sob*..
shishank : ise abhi teddy pasand nahi aya.. billy maine tumhe jo factory btayi thi vahan dekha apne...aisa konsa spl teddy pasnd agya mere buddy ko..
2nd lady : pareshn krdia hai apke buddy ne toh 3 din se jis ke lie zid krra hai vo teddy market maim nahi milega.. itni shops ghumli iske lie hm sabne..
padma : kya mtlb..anaya??
billy : main btata hn..

** flashback**
In a toy factory..

Manager : ji sir kahiye..
Billy : dekhiye I need help ye mera beta hai pichle 3 din se kisi teddy ki zid kr raha hai.. n khana bhi dhang se nahi kha raha..
Manger : koi baat nahi sir main ise yahan se best teddy dikhata hn I'm sure kuch toh zarur pasnd ayega..

Manger to armaan : come beta.. main apko teddy dikhaunga.. ao mere sath...

Manger showed him various teddy of different sizes colour bt Armaan did not like even a single one...
45 mins passed still the boy didn't like any of the teddy in the factory..

Suddenly his face lit up...
Armaan : papa teddy...
Manager : konsa teddy beta hm abhi ladete hai btao..
Armaan ran towards a female worker of factory who was holding her new born baby in her arms..

Armaan : tedddyyy... teddy chahie.. dedooo...
N he started to take that little kid from his mother.. coz of the sudden distribance baby started to cry..

Lady (in a rude tone) : chod ise.. kiska bacha ye leke jao ise. Mere chote se bache ko rula dia..
Taking her kid she went from there..

Manager : I'm sorry sir ye teddy toh hm apke bete ko nahi deskte..

Now Billy was totally embarrassed he took Armaan home...

** end of flashback**

ani : ab ap hi btao kahan se lake de isko iska teddy..

padma went towards the boy picked him up n kept in her lap..

: apko teddy chahie..??
Armaan : still crying noded his head in +'ve..
padma : agar aise roge or sabko tang kroge toh main apko teddy nahi lake dungi..
Armaan : main good boy bnunga kisi ko tang nahi klunga mujhe teddy do na..
padma : abhi nahi..
Armaan : toh fir..??
padma : jb tum good boy bnke dikhaoge..
Armaan : main good boy hn.. plomise kisi ko tang ni klumga..!!!
padma : thoda wait krna pdega
Armaan : kitna..??
padma : tumhare next bday pr.. pr agar good boy bnoge Tb

Armaan ran towards the table where a glass of milk was kept.. he quickly drank that milk..
: ab main kisi ko tang nahi klumga.. or milk bhi piunga..
N started to jump...

anaya came towards padma : sach..??
padma nodded her head : ji..
Shishank : hm abhi hospital se hi aa rahe hai. ..
ani hugged padma : badhai ho..
Ani ran towards the kitchen n brought gur gave to everyone..
ani : badhai ho bhai sahab...lije muh metha kijie..
shishank : apko bhi bhabhi ji..
billy hugged shishank
Billy : badhai ho shishank..
Shishank : tumhe bhi..

** time passed n Parma's due date was coming near n also armaan's bday.. he was were excited as he will be getting best gift his teddy...

During Parma's pregnancy phase armaan was on full time duty as instructed by his parents n shishank he fed her with his hands healthy food gave medicine when ever she refused to take them on her on... armaan used to stay beside her the entire day n left her side at nite to sleep.

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Armaan' bday eve
10 pm at nite padma felt pain n was rushed to hospital with shishank n billy.. anaya stayed home with armaan..

Exactly at 12:05 am she gave birth to a baby girl..

Next morning.
Armaan woke up n directly went to padma's room to check whether she has taken her morning medicine.. finding the room empty he ran towards his mother..
Ani : are wah aj mera baby itni jldi uthgya.. happy birthday..
N kissed his cheek
Armaan : muma aunty buddy or papa kahan hai..??
Ani : hospital gye hai tumhare lie teddy lene..
Araam : sachii..??
Ani : yes beta..
Armaan : mujhe bhi jna hai : hoshpitall..
Ani : pehle tayar ho jao breakfast krlo fir..
Armaan : nahi abhi..
Ani : tum good boy ho na..??
Armaam noded : ok...

***

Hospital
Padma's ward

billy : lao ise mujhe do or tum jake fresh ho jao.. ani nasta kele ati hi hogi..

shishank just nodded n gave his little princess to billy...

A little later anaya entered with armaan
ani : billy sab thil hai na.. abhi bhai sahab ko bahar dekha pde pareshan lg rahe the.
Bily : dekho na ani bachi raat bhar nahi tiki.. bar bar nind se jag rahi thi or roye jara thi.. na dhang se dudh pi rahi thi.. abhi kuch der pehle soyi..
Ani : doc ne kya kaha...
Billy : child specialist abhi thodi der main ane wale honge.. vo check krenge...

Armaan : papa mujhe dikhao na teddy..
Ani : abhi nahi beta.. pehle doc uncle dekhnge fir...

Baby woke up again n started to cry.. which woke up tired padma...
Billy n anaya were trying to calm the baby bt all tgier effort went in vain..
Padma : ani mujhe do main dekhti hn.
Anaya handed over little baby to padma.. padma was trying to feed baby with with spoon

Armaan was silient spectator of the entire happening went towards padma's bed n stood on the chair kept near it.. armaan moved towards padma n held baby's hand. baby suddenly stoped strugling in her mother's lap.

ani : are ise kya hua abhi toh itna roo rahi ekdm se chup hogyi..
billy bhabhi ji ab jra ise feed krke dekheye..
n to everyone's surprise liottle baby had her milk..

padma : armaan ke ate hi kaise shant hogyi or dudh bhi pi lia
ani : thik vaise hi jaise tum kha leti thi armaan ke hathon...

a little later doctor came n gave a green signal to baby...

a month latter little baby girl was named Ridhima.

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little background

shishank urf Dr shishank Gupta and Billy urf Dr balwinder malik were childhood friends. both thier father were farmers in a small village. they did not had any interest in farming n wanted to become doctors. both were the school toppers they studdied day n night n cracked the scolarship exam in a medical collage. their parents were against this n wanted their kids to help them in farming. one night both ran from their houses taking a few cloths their books n little money they had in their piggy bank attented collgae during day did a part time job in eveing and studied at night. two yes laer their fathers accepted their study with a condition that if they did not become successful doctor they will have to return to their land. shishank and billy happily agreed and passed with flying colours. both got a job in a hospital the city. their they met padma and anaya n fell in love. an year later both couples got married on the same day. four of them decided to stay in a same rented two bedroom house to save money for the medical clinic which was a dream for shishank and billy.

in two years their hard work paid off n they started a small medical clinic "G&M clinic" it was a multipurpse clinic. Padma is a Gynocologist, Shishank Heart Speacilast, Billy neurosurgeon and anaya was joints and bones specialist. and they also moved out of the rented house to their own.

an year latter anaya gave brth to little armaan who became everyone's fav in the house. shishank and decided to wait for an yr or two as still their financial condition was nt that stabled n wanted to give time to anaya and billy to enjoy their parenthood without stressing much about the clinic.

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hope u guys enjoyed reading do give ur views...
Edited by Dik.. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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heyya rockstar how r u darling
its been long ...
welcome back so back to writing
i thought u discontinue ur work u urself said
i was utterly surprised seeing ur pm
anyways good to see u back
hope u will continue it
now coming to story its so cute
loved the little armaan n his innocent wish

loved ar relationship
they r actually so connected since starting
even their parents has a beautiful friendship
the story is written beautifully each n every detail n its also in a fluent which is making it more beautiful
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: lashyyy

heyya rockstar how r u darling
its been long ...
welcome back so back to writing
i thought u discontinue ur work u urself said
i was utterly surprised seeing ur pm
anyways good to see u back
hope u will continue it
now coming to story its so cute
loved the little armaan n his innocent wish

loved ar relationship
they r actually so connected since starting
even their parents has a beautiful friendship
the story is written beautifully each n every detail n its also in a fluent which is making it more beautiful

Heya bunny I'm gud.. howz u..

Umm I guess tumne mere fb page pr dekha nahi hoga.. I had given a note that now I'm back...

I'm glad u liked it...
Thank u soo much..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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heysss dikshhh
I'm in love with the concept
cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing starting dik...I laughed reading it. arman ne sachmuch apne liye teddy choose kiya par wo teddy nahi,gudiya hai..pyari si gudiya..love their family bonding..loved the whole part. now i am going to read next part in blog..hehe




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Posted: 7 years ago
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thank u...!!!😊
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Originally posted by: Prizi

heysss dikshhh
I'm in love with the concept
cont soon



thank u...!!!!😊😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: punamluvshilpa

amazing starting dik...I laughed reading it. arman ne sachmuch apne liye teddy choose kiya par wo teddy nahi,gudiya hai..pyari si gudiya..love their family bonding..loved the whole part. now i am going to read next part in blog..hehe






thank u soo much...!!! im glad u liked it..!!!😃
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PART 2



As the time passed Armaan n ridhima became inseparable.. their bond grew deeper n deeper with every passing minute...

Armaan's voice was enough to clam crying little ridhima.. after ma and pa she spoke alma (Armaan in baby language) both the kids spend their enire time together the only time time they were seperated was at nite as both kids slept with their repected parents, bt for they day naps both slpet with either padma or anaya...

G&M clnic was running a prety well Bt shishank and billy wanted to expand their work place.. 2 years after ridhima's birth Billy father passed away leaving the village land in his name.. billy sold that land bt still the funds were not sufficient for a proper expanstion... both tried to look for funds.. they tried banks for loans and many investors still both shishank and billy were nt able to get proper funding.. one day a trust named Sanjeevni that worked in the field of medince and health gave them a prosal to open a new hospital named Sanjevani and it will run on 50-50 parntership % share of G&M clnic and 50% of the trust...

this proposal was a life turing point for both the family's.. in a span of 5years sanjeevani hospital was one of the leading hospital in the city.
both family's have now shifted from the small house to a big mansion together. In front their was a huge garden where a swing and a small shed under which chiairs and a table were kept and garage for paking vehucals was made at basment. Lifts were also installed. inside it had a big drawing and dining room kitchen pooja room and 2 rooms for anaya billy and padma shishank and a guest room on ground floor.1 st floor there were 2 master bedrooms with a comman balcony for ridhima and armaan, 2 guest rooms and a library. on 2nd / top floor was tersace and a fully equiped gym with all cardio as well as weigh equipments so that every member of the family could keep him/herself fit. And on the back side their was a basket ball court and swimming pool.

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presnt
Billy is the MD of the hospital along with his cases he looks after the admistravive work and shishank being a bit angry man types is the head of all doctors doctors and staff. Padma and Anaya have reisned from their full day duty and now work as a consultant in hospital and take up only critical cases. Armman is a junior doctor in sanjevni and ridhima has just finished her medical collage.

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Time 8 PM
Gupta malik mansion

Billy Shishank Padma and Anaya were sitting in dining are and chatting about randon topics.. just then armaan entered...
Padma : how was ur day beta..??
Armaan Makes himself comfetable of a sofa
Armaan : too tiring.. back to back 2 surgeries..
Anaya : how are the patients..?
Armaan : one is stablised n other under observation.. itni shanti kyu hai aj..?? ridhima..
Shishank : apne room main..
Armaan : aunty bahut bhuk lgi hai ap khana lgao main use leke ata hn...
Billy : good luck son..
Armaan : thanks bt kyu..??
Shishank : u are going in a den buddy...
Anaya : princess tumse gussa hai...
Armaan : oh shit...!!! Bt kyu..??
Bily : vo toh hme bhi nahi pta... bt duphar se apne room main hai...
Armaan : did she have her lunch..??
Anaya : nopes...

Listening to this armaan grab his car key's ran outside...

Padma : main khana lgati h nap fresh ho jayegi.. indono ka toh chalta rahega...
Elder's laughed at padma's statement ladies went towards kitchen n men to their room...

Ridhima's room..
Ridhima sitting on the couch holding her teddy bear...
Ridhima was mumering to herself.. : is bar main bilkul nahi mne wali.. smjhta kya hai apne ap ko.. I so hate him...

There was a knock on her window...
Ridhima: just go away..
Armaan : princess plz.. mujhe ander ane do..
Ridhima nooo...
Armaan : fine khada hn main bhi is ladder pr.. vaise hi bahut tired hn hospital main itna kam tha back to back 2 surgeries.. or pta hai kitni bhook lgi hai mujhe.. nahi yakeen toh suno mere pet se kaise kaise awazen aa rahi hai...

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Flashback
Since childhood armaan n ridhima fight a lot n har choti choti baat pre k dusre se gussa hojate the.. n specially ridhima.. bt armaan use 5 min main mna leta tha...
Once Ridhima was 10 n armaan 13 she was dam angry on armaan she locked herself in her room n did not had her lunch even .. 2 hrs passed bt she refused to comeout or let any one in...
Armaan came back home from his basket ball match.. he rushed towards ridhima's room to tell her about his day.. bt he found her locked from inside n both the mothers standing outside holding pieces of paper which ridhima had pushed out side under the door...
Paper 1 " mujhe kisi se baat nahi krni..
Paper 2 " ap jao yahan se
Paper 3 " main bahar nahi aungi..
Paper 4 " im fine.. kuch nahi hua hai mujhe..
Paper 5 " im nt hungry..
Paper 6 " no I wont open the door..
And soo on.. these were her rplies to Padma n Anaya.. as ridhima didn't want to talk to anyone.. wen she felt that both ladies are getting tensed she pushed paper in her rply..

Armaan knocked the door n said "princess main hn armaan.. mere se toh baat kr...
Came another paper " go to hell

Armaan left from there...
15 mis later... armaan with help of a ladder climbed to ridhim's window... n knocked
Ridhima first was shocked to see armaan there bt later decided to carry on her silient n ignoring treatment
Armaan : ridhi..
Ridhima did nt respond..
Armaan : princess plz.. kholo na.. vaise hi ye stupid sa ladder itna hill raha hai..
Ridhima : toh niche jao..
Armaan : no jb tk tum mujhe ander ane nahi dogi main nahi jauna.. yahi khada rahunga.. or tumhe pta hai. Aj mujhe chot bhi lgi knee pr..

The word " chot " was enough... all her anger just vanished she open the window n gave her hand to come indise.
Ridhima : tum bhi na khelna nahi ata toh kyu jate ho...
Ridhima mane armaan sit on bed tried to examined his knee.. it wasn't a major injury just a small tiny cut.. ridhima took out a bandaid from her drawer n put it on his wound...
Wen ridhima was satisfied that now armaan is fine she again moved aside n sat on the couch hugging her teddy...

Armaan to got up from bed n sat next to ridhima n pulled her in his lap...
Ridhima : armaan chodo mujhe...
Armaan : kyu..??
Ridhima : tumhe dikh nahi raha main apne teddy se baten kr rahi hn don't disturb me..
Armaan : mujhe bhi toh apne teddy se baat krni hai...
Ridhima : pr mujhe nahi krni.. jao yahan se..
Armaan : teddy.. kyu gussa ho.. btao na plz.. or dekho main kya laya hn..tumhari fav wali paneer patty n chocolate..
Ridhima: mujhe nahi chahie.. tum jao or apne new frnds ke sath hi khelo...
Armaan : pr mere toh ek hi friend hai..
Ridhima : jhoot..
Armaan : sachi baby...
Ridhima : toh fir toh khelne kyu gye..?? ye hmara cartoon time hota hai na.. or mujhe btaya bhi nahi.. tum jake unke sath hi khelo.. mujhe tumse koi baat nahi krni..(ridhima complained )

Armaan kissed her cheek.. n said : main khlene thodi gya tha.. vo toh use stupid ajay ke bache ne mujhe challenge dia ki vo jda acha basket ball player hai.. toh main toh sirf harane gya tha...
Ridhima : btaya kyu nahi..??
Armaan : btata kaise aj tumhara half day tha budhu.. agar main tumhe btane ghar ata.. toh match ke lie late hojata fir vo sab mujhe chidate ki main jan bhuj kr late aya kyuki main ajay se dr gya..
Ridhima : use hra ke aye..??
Armaan noded his head in positive..: obviously yes teddy ...
Ridhima clapped her hands n kissed him on his check..: my armaaan is the best...

Then armaan started to tell her bout the match how he won.. both were having fun forgetting that their mothers were still standing outside..
Listen to their laughter..
Padma: hm aise hi itni der se yaha khade hai.. pehle hi armaan ko bula lena tha.. ab vo smbhal lega apne teddy ko.. hm lunch krte hai..
Anaya: sahi kaha Padma..
In the room.. armaan went to window n pulled up a carry bag with help of the rope that he had tied on the ladder wen he climed up...

AR sat on the bed n enjoyed their fav paneer patty n chocolate...
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after that day.. it became their routine.. if ridhima got angry on armaan she locked herself in the room n armaan would clime through the window with some of ridhima's fav eatables n manofy her teddy...

**end of flash back...

Armaan : teddy plz kholo na.. (yawn...) plz teddy...
Seeing armaan's tired eyes n his countinous yawing ridhima opened the window n helped armaan come inside...

Armaan sat on the cauch n pulled ridhima in his lap...
Armaan : mere teddy mujhese kyu gussa hai..
Without showing much tantrums ridhima said..
Ridhima : tumhe pta hai na kl mera sanjeevani main interview hai or tum puna ja rahe hai 2 dasy ke lie... ( n pouted)
Armaan : bs ye baat..
Ridhima: tumhe ye choti si baat lgti hai...?? Jao tum yahan se...
Ridhima tries to get up from his lap.. bt armaan held her more tightly..
Armaan : are mere teddy meri baat toh suno... main hospital ke kam se ja raha hn.. naki ghumne n vaise bhi maine sab plan kr lia hai...
Ridhima : kya plan..??
Armaan : tumhe kl sanjeevani 8 am report krna hai rite..??
Ridhima : hmm...
Armaan : subha pehle main tumhe vahan drop krunga n then ill leave.. kl toh vaise bhi tumhare written exams hai.. jb tk exam ki first shift complete hogi ill reach there.. toh hm phone or baat krneg.. till ur second shift start... n jb tumhara exam hoga meri meeting khatam ho jayegi toh raat ko hm skype pr baat krnge n hm tumhare interview ke lie prepare kr lenge... N next morning apni meeting khatam krke main tumhara result anounvce hone se pehle pahunch jaunga...
Ridhima : pr..
Armaan : baby u know the condition mere dad n buddy main se koi bhi 2 din hospital nahi aa skta... jb tk external recruites fair bases pr tumhe select na krlen...

Ridhima : im scared agar main na hue select..?? upar se tum bhi yahan nahi hoge..
Armaan : teddy I know u can do it.. n mujhe mere teddy pr pura bharosa hai..

Ridhima : main select ho jaungi na.. mujhe kisi or hospital main nahi jna, yahi apni intership krne hai..
Armaan : ho jayega baby.. apne ap pr confidence rakho n jst give ur best... chalo ab mujhe bhuk lgai hai...

Armaan made ridhima stand n went towards the window picked up pizza boxes n moved towards the couch...
Ridhima: wao mera fav extra cheese pizza.. ur the best armaan ..
Armaan : that I know...
Both had pizza n n while eating armaan asked ridhima randon question relating to her test tomorrow...

An hr later..
armaan covered ridhima proper with blanket set the ac timer cheched her alarm clock.. kissing her good nite on her fore head ledt to his room...
as he entered his room his bag was packed n lying on the couch..
armaan : ridhima bhi na.. pta hai usko main jaunga n packing bhi krdi pr fir bhi gussa ho kr beth gyi...

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