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Devrupa (fanfiction) 2
I M UR SECOND LOVE, BUT U LL ALWAYS REMAIN MY FIRST AND THE LAST LOVE...
Satrupa ran down the stairs after the heated confrontation between her and baldev . She had no tears in her eyes to put down. While walking through the big hall of the palace, she mistakenly hits anami who was in a rush towards her room. Satrupa suddenly regains her senses and looks at anami. Anami looks at SATRUPA'S eyes which were red and dry after crying so much. She gets to know dat something wrong might have happened with her. Satrupa says, sorry and quickly moves from there. Anami stands there dumbstruck by SATRUPA'S behavior. Satrupa moves to her mother in laws room, she knocks the door. Gayatri asks her to come in. Satrupa enters, goes near the bed and sits near her. Gayatri looks at her dull face and asks her if everything is fine. She says, hum aap se kuch kehna chahte hai maa! She continues, ek Baar is Lal Mahal mein sab Kuch theek hojaye, hum yahan se chale jayenge. Anami ko waaris goshith Karne ke Baad humari zaroorat na iss Ghar ko rahega, na anami ko. Woh toh humse nafrat karti hai. Woh apni khayal khud rak sakti hai. Anami humari madat kabhi nahi chahti hai. Gayatri is confused after hearing her words. She says, yeh Kya bol rahi ho tum satrupa! Tum is ghar ki bahu ho. Kahi nahi jaaogi tum. Baldev ki patni... Before she could complete, satrupa interrupts.. nahi Maa! Baldev hume apne patni nahi mante. Isliye aap mujhe mat rokhiye. Hume yahan se chale jaane dijiye. Gayatri tries to stop her, but satrupa walks out of the room crying...
Baldev is seen holding a photo which satrupa had left in front of him with anger. The photo was of their roka ceremony. He looked at SATRUPA'S innocent face in d photo. The photo becomes a video, he imagines the moment where they sat next to each other looking into each other's eyes, by looking at the photo. Baldev sits down and takes every photo and letter one by one.. As he looks at it, he remembers each and every moment behind those stuffs. He feels so bad for behaving like a heartless person. Even after satrupa asked sorry, he behaved very rudely with her. He decides to apologize for his harsh behavior. He walks towards the door, his footsteps stop. Whether it is his ego or guilt which stops him from going to her. It's night... Both of them r in their rooms, thinking about the incident happened in the mrng. SATRUPA'S throat gets dried. She finds dat d jug is empty. She takes it and comes out of the room. She walks towards the stairs, but finds baldev walking towards her. She walks fastly without looking at him. She reaches the kitchen, baldev follows. She fills her glass jug with water. Baldev reaches the kitchen door. She senses him standing near the door. She turns towards the door and looks at him. As usual he makes a puppy face. She walks towards the door but he blocks her. She stops and asks him, ab Kya ilzaam lagana chahte hai hum par? He says, ilzaam nahi, maafi mangna chahte hai tumse. Humne Jo kuch bhi bola woh gusse mein aakar bola. Hum nahi jaante the ki tumhare man ke andar yeh sab hai kyunki tumne kabhi humse DIL kholkar baat hi nahi Kiya hai. Achanak aakar yeh sab kahogi toh hum kaise maanlenge is baat ko ki.. before he could complete she interrupts.. sahi kehte hai aap.. hum dono ek dusre se bohot door chale gaye hai.. nadi ke do kinare ki tarah.. humare soch samaj tareeke sab alag hai.. lekin mujhe vishwas tha ki ek na ek din sab Kuch theek hojayega.. mein galat thi. Woh din kabhi nahi aayega.. baldev interrupts, satrupa hume baat Karne ki ek moka toh do.. satrupa replies, baat Karne keliye aur Kya bacha hai baldev.. mein jaanti hu ki aap hume kabhi apne patni nahi maane hai.. toh chodiye hume.. she walks leaving him behind, he holds her right hand and stops her. She stops.. he speaks as he walks towards her, tumhe yaad hai jab hum pehli Baar lade the ek dusre ke saat, tab Maine tumhe manaane keliye Kya Kya nahi kiya.. jab tak tumhari gussa Tanda nahi hua tab tak hum kuch na Kuch karte rahe.. aakhir tum maan gaye.. satrupa too remembers the moment and smirks. He walks closer, she brings back her serious expression on her face.. he stands in front of her, she s still sad.. he asks, mujhe maaf nahi karogi? She stares.. he continues..he holds her hand and says, tum hume chodkar kahi nahi jaaogi. She says, nahi hum jayenge, she stops for a second and asks aap ko kisne bataya.. he says, maa ne hume sab Kuch bata Diya.. she bends her head down.. he asks, ab kuch toh bolo, aisa chup rahogi toh hum uska Kya Matlab samjhe? She says, kuch nahi, bohot der hogya hai jaakar sojayiye.. with an angry tone he says, tum kabhi nahi badlogi.. ziddi ho.. itna zid acha nahi hai satrupa.. theek hai hum jaa Rahe hai.. Jo karna hai karo.. he walks off with anger.. she looks at him and later goes back to her room..
The sun has raised and the clock hits at 7 o clock, baldev is sitting and reading newspaper in their room. Satrupa enters and looks at him, wen he looks back,she changes her vision towards another place. He nods, as he got to know dat she just looked at him. She walks towards the drawer and takes a file out and starts reading it. She finds dat is not the one she wanted. She starts searching everywhere. Baldev comes near her and shows the file. He says, yeh lo, cheezon ko zameen pe rakh ke aasman mein doondogi toh nahi milega.. satrupa stares at him and grabs the file.. On the other side, anami is teaching Martial arts to the kids. Satrupa hears anami's loud voice and walks towards the balcony. She looks at her with a simple smile on her face. Suddenly sudha enters and anami stops her practice and starts speaking to her. Satrupa watching them from her room gets irritated seeing sudha being so close to her daughter. She walks inside the room with anger. Baldev looks on.. she goes out of the room. Sudha after her chit chat with anami returns. While returning she faces satrupa, giving her a cunning evil smile she goes. Satrupa goes to anami, as usual anami taunts her by calling her as Matlabi mataji.. satrupa says, anami hum tumhe kitna samjhaye, Lal Mahal ka bohot Sari dushmane hai, tumhari Sari oar katra hai. Apne ankhe kolo aur Sach ko dekho. Anami replies, matlabi mataji aap humare chinta na Kare. Aapko achanak itna pyaar Kahan se aagya hum par.. mujhe aapki yeh nakli pyaar manzoor nahi. She says this and walks off turning her face aside from satrupa. Baldev is standing in the balcony of his room and watching this maa beti TASHN. At the same time, a stranger is aiming gun at anami. Satrupa stands there looking at anami, her inner voice: lekin hume tumhari nafrat manzoor hai anami! As anami walks, a thorn pricks her leg. She starts shouting Maa! The stranger is ready to pull the trigger aiming at anami. Satrupa who was standing there runs towards anami who was suffering. As she comes near her, anami bends to remove the thorn, satrupa stands in front of anami asking her wat happened and the stranger pulls the trigger. Instead of anami it straightly hits SATRUPA'S left part of the neck just above the ribs. She shouts and takes a few steps back, her body not able to hold the bullet speed. Anami raises her head and looks at her mother's condition, tries to hold her but satrupa falls down lifeless. The killer escapes from there with the fear of getting caught and with the disappointment of missing his aim. Baldev who was looking at everything and is not able to believe his eyes. He shouts her name satrupa!! From there, takes a few steps back and runs towards the door of their room continued by the steps and the hall.. before baldev reached anamis hands shiver as she tries to wake her mother up. Satrupa slightly opens her eyes, taking deep breath, struggling to breathe. She doesn't know wat to do. Tears roll down her eyes for her matlabi mataji. Baldev runs towards his wife. As he comes anami leaves him the space to hold her. He takes her in his arms and starts shouting, Satrupa ankhe kolo! Yahan dekho, he pats on her cheeks trying to wake her up. He continues, satrupa! Satrupa.. he cries louder, Maa baapuji.. Satrupa who is half conscious, with grt difficulty says something in a very low tone, she says: ab pyaar se liya Mera Naam ko! Hearing this baldev closes his eyes tightly, droplets squeeze out of his eyes.. Gayatri Vikram daamo everybody run towards them and all are worried.. baldev asks the servants to call the ambulance immediately. He takes her close to his chest. Satrupa is unconscious. He says, satrupa kuch nahi hoga tumhe! Tum, tum sun rahi ho na satrupa.. satrupa yaha dekho. Satrupa dard hora hi hai tumhe?.. hum tumhe Abhi hospital lekar jayenge. Ache se ache doctor treat karenge.. mein nahi Rounga..jab tum ankhe kologi tab hum tumhare samne, tumhari saat honge.. tum sun rahi ho na, dekho tum mujhe aisa mat darao he cries... Ambulance arrives.. baldev wipes his tears. He carries satrupa to the ambulance. They make her sleep on the stretcher. Baldev sits next to her. Doctors start treating her. They put the oxygen mask. Baldev keeps taking her name to wake her up. They reach the hospital and satrupa is taken into the intensive care unit. All r standing outside worried.. baldev sits with his hand on his face. Anami is griefstriken. She doesn't know wat to say. A nurse comes out and gives all the belongings of satrupa to baldev. Doctors operate and remove the bullet from her body. Baldev, sitting outside, touches his shirt, full of red blood marks. He still feels her in his arms. Gayatri comes near him and says not to worry, she s very strong and nothing will happen to her. Baldev nods. Doctors come out and say dat they have removed the bullet from her body, but she s still kept in observation until she regains her consciousness. Baldev thanks doctor and asks if he can see her once. The doctor says not more than one can go inside. Baldev opens the door and walks inside the big OT. The beep sound of ECG is heard. Baldev looks at her, sleeping with the oxygen mask covering her face. He goes and sits on a table near her. He swallows as he looks at her. His hands want to touch hers, it starts shivering wen it travels to hold her hand. He holds her hand and feels the warmth. He sits next to her whole night looking at her face and holding her hand. In between doctors and nurses visit to check her condition. It is almost morning, baldev keeps her hand on the bed and goes to rest room to wash his face. As soon as he moves within a minute, SATRUPA'S hands start shaking. He comes out and looks at her, slightly getting consciousness. He runs towards her,touches her head and calls the doctor. The doctor comes running and checks. Satrupa opens her eyes slowly, doctor says she s fine now. She tries to remove her oxygen mask, doctor says if she s feeling better she can remove it. The doctor goes, baldev sits next to her on the bed, touches her cheeks and asks, ab kaisa lag raha hai? Theek ho na! She nods. He s about to say something but the family members enter to see her.. everybody speak to her. Anami is standing in the corner of the room still scared about the incident. But feels better after seeing her mother speaking. Baldev asks the doctor dat if they can shift her to the house with a nurse to take care. The doctor agrees. The next day they take her back to Lal mahal.
In their room: He helps her to lean on the pillow,covers her up with a shawl. She looks on. He brings food for her. Starts feeding her with his own hands. Both keep quite, without speaking anything but their eyes speak to each other. After having food, he brings tablets for her and she eats it. Later makes her sleep by covering her up with blanket.. He looks at her wen she s asleep and smiles. Satrupa looked the cutest wen she slept just like a baby. It's morning, nurse is treating the wound. Baldev comes there and finds satrupa struggling to control the pain. She has closed her eyes tightly to resist the pain. The nurse moves after the dressing. He comes near her and asks, bohot dard horahi hai? She nods.. he says, acha Chalo chodo, hum ab walk par chalenge, Chalo humare saat. He helps her to get up and both go on a walk in the garden. She says, baldev anami Kahan hai? Ek Baar bhi who hume dekhne nahi aayi! Anami who was going to meet poonam looks at her parents. She couldn't resist. She goes near satrupa, and asks how is she feeling now. Satrupa has a smile on her face. She says dat she s fine. Anami walks off. Satrupa asks baldev, isse Kya hua hai? Itni pareshaan kyun hai? Baldev replies, shayad ghabrayi huyi hai, theek hojayegi tum chinta mat karo. They go back to their room. He make her sit and goes out. She calls out, Kahan ja rahe hai aap? He says, bas do minute mein aaunga. She waits, baldev enters with the medicine.. he directly walks to her. He says, apni shawl utaro dressing karna hai. She gives a surprising expression and asks, aap! Aap kyun karenge? Baldev replies, woh subah dekha humne, tumhe kitna dard horaha tha dressing ke waqt. Isliye hum karenge taaki tumhe zyaada dard na ho. She says, nahi nahi! Uski koi zaroorat nahi. Aap ek kaam kijiye, daamo ko bulayiye hum usse karwalenge. Baldev stares at her and says, agar hum karenge toh Kya hoga. Hum khayal rakhenge aur tumhe Zara se bhi dard nahi hoga. She says, nahi baldev. He suddenly raises his voice, ssshhh! Chup! Bilkul chup rahogi tum! Jaisa mein kahungi waisa karo. Utaro apni shawl ko. She agrees and does the same. He applies the medicine on the wound. She suddenly holds his shirt out of pain. He looks at her and blows cool air on the wound to prevent the burning sensation. She feels little bit relaxed. His face just next to her, she turns her face to the other side. He finishes it and covers her with the shawl. She looks at him with a thankful eyes as she didn't feel much pain compared to morning. He goes to keep the medicine. Wen he comes back, he doesn't see her on the bed. He s about to call her name, SATR..! but notices her standing near the balcony. He gets worried and goes near her asking, tum yaha Kya Kar rahi ho,. Chalo tumhe aaram ki zaroorat hai. Yaha aisi khuli Hawa main khadi rahogi toh thand lag jayega. Satrupa who was facing the sky turns towards him. Baldev looks at her eyes filled with tears. He walks near her, holds her and asks, Kya hua tum ro kyun rahi ho. She looks at him for a while and hugs him tightly crying. First, he s shocked but later reciprocate by hugging back. She says, aisa lag raha hai ki saat janm ke Baad apka aisa phir se gale lag rahi hu. Aisi hi rehne dijiye mujhe thodi der tak.. she says this and closes her eyes hugging him tight. After few moments he wipes her tears and looks at her. She says, aakhir mauth ne hum dono ko kareeb lahi Diya. He says, kaisi baate karti ho tum. Hume hamesha jeene ki baat Karna chahiye mauth ki nahi. Hum sari purani baat bhool chuke hai. Ab mujhe sirf tum chahiye, tumhara pyaar.. milega na? She smiles, he kisses her forehead and they hug again. Baldev finally says, humara beta hume dekh Kar aaj bohot Khush hoga. She closes her eyes and remembers vatsalya. Baldev brings the shawl, wraps it around her and take her inside.. The moon smiles in the sky...
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