AKDHA Os/SS: Yeh Ishq Hawa Hai... chapter 6 updated!!! - Page 27

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

I KNOW GUYS M VERY VERY LATE IN UPDATE AZS U ALL KNOW MY HECTIC SCEDULE DIDNT LET ME SIT CALM ON MY CHAIR😆 SO CANT TYPE THE CHAPY DOWN... PLEASE BE WITH ME AND KEEP SUPPORT ME FURTHER

Chalo koi baat nehi me too late in reading! 😛

Chapter 6

Night started with a cold wind. The chillness of December freaking out in every bone of the body.

In the backyard the scenery changed from a darkness of haunted night to bonfire light. Bilal and his partners in crime came to enjoy. Jalal know how do they enjoy. He know he will find the each door of the ground floor closed and if u pass through the hallway you may be fortunate to hear voices. Some of are scorching of bed, and some moans and groaning of male and female voices.

Very well description of backdrop!👏

Jalal have witness this scenery before. He had once a horrible experience. Once a girl approaches to him when he came to fill his bottle in the kitchen. Smart ass f***. She tried to zip down his fly. Despo material all of them.

😕😕😆

This is not new to jalal. He saw many nights his brother have with many women. He thanks his god as his brother not married.

Waise he could be married... maza aa jata. Jalal's chemistry with dukhi bhabi and she being the rescuer etc. 😆

Now he is standing in front of his cupboard. He can see Jodha sitting opposite side. She didn't have her leg banded but her hand. She was given a cup of milk and two biscuits. And now she is chewing it aggressively

Poor! 😔

He don't want to do this to her. But he has to think of his and her safety. If she will be under Bilal, she will be a food of any of his crime partners. He can't let that happen. She is innocent and captive, not a pleasure toy. And not for that animals.

He is so good!

He breath and open the cupboard and took out a black kurta pyjama. He glanced at Jodha once then went to bathroom.

After he came out wearing the kurta. Went to Jodha. The moment he went towards hr she started to back off. Jalal went close to her and bend down.

I don't know why, but I especially liked this sequence...

"hi, have your tea?

She said nothing, jalal indirectly enjoying this all.

He went more near her. Now her ears are near him.

"waise, tumhari hathkadiya aaj khulne wali hai. Taiyaar rehna.

"how dare you?

"its in my blood honey!!

She took her hands from his. And irritatingly try to move aside.

"don't move a strict command from him made her froze. That cold chilliness in his voice stopped her on the spot

It was dark! And thrilling!!😃

"CHAMPA!!!!!! JALAL SCREAMED.

CHAMPA CAME RUNNING. "take her to the dancers. She will dance for us today.

Too much!😲 Don't like this! 😔 However... I feel it's needed.

On this words jodha's anger shot its height. How dare he??

But she look at jalal who have an unknown helplessness and anger.

Baah!

Champa too ker to the dancers.

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In the CAmpFire ground.

A highly ignited Fire was there in the middle and some Gaddi was there around it with takia on it. The enjoyers are going there to sit and enjoy. All have experienced it many times but as usual the need he best this time.

"bilal, har bar ki tarha tum is baar bhi kuch zaroor naya karoge!! Ab bata bhi do bhai!!

IDIOT KAHIKA!😡

"aarry abhi bata dunga to is jashn ki chamak hi mit jayegi. Or ha bazi rakh lo, agar us chamak se tum logo ki aankho me Dhoopchasma na lagana pade to naam badal dena mera!!

DHAKKAN!!🤢

"kya baat hai!! Bialal, laga hai koi badi maal haath ayi hai!!

😡

"maal to hai, ek dum badhiya bilal smirked evily, "or ek raaz ki baatt bataye?? Ek dum tazi hai. Bas yu samajh loke bas ped se tod ke laya hu

"arry wah...is baar to samjho sirf is maidan me nahi, balki kamre me bhi dhoom dham hoga!!!

🤢🤢

Jalal's fist gone tight. His anger is raising by second, their dirty comment on Jodha made him mad in anger.

SAME TO U JALAL!😡

He could never thought they could have think for a woman like this. But what else he should think of them.

He controls his anger and went towards them.

One of the men saw him coming toward them.


Jalal's dress


Wow we have a sample of dress! 🤣

"hy look who's here!! others turn around.

Every one turn around to see jalal standing there. Looking at them turning around he went towards them.

"kyu miyan, kya haalchaal. Aaj humare beech?

"arry bhagwant ji, ye to abhi bachcha hai. Arry bilal, kuch sikha ise yara. Varna aaage chalke dhanda samhalega kaise?

What's Bhagwant doing here????😲😲😆

Bilal who was forwarding towards them with a glass of whiskey said, "ise kuch sikhane ki zarurat nahi, mere sikhane se pehle hi bohot kuch saeekh chukka hai.

Yeh Bilal kuch zyada hi gaddha lag raha hay!😕

"rry wah jalal, kya baat hai, tu to hum se bhi age nikla! Much nikli nahi ki dari katna suru????

Bilal's friends are too much!😆

"with a bitter smirk jalal said, "kya hkaru, bhaijaan ka asar hai. With thi jalal look at bilal. He soo want to give him a tight punch on his and his all these moron friend who didn't know anything above money and sex.

Nice. 😆

Bilal give jalal a glass of whiskey and with eye gesture indicate to drink as he know jalal don't drink.

Testing chal raha hay? 😆

The moment jalal give a sip to the drink a man asked him. "waise jalal, aj tumhare bhaijaan bata rahe the ke kisi khaas item ko pesh karega? Tum batao, kon hai woh item?

So it is Jalal's exam time in front of Billu kya? 😆

Jalal's face gone red as blood. How dare they. With an irritating face he say, "no i don't know.

😕

"what do you mean you don't know jalal. Tum to use le gaye the. With a smirk bilal said.

😆

Now jalal's turn to be smart. "arry bhaijaan, haa main le gaya tha. Per uske bad kaisi hai pata nahi. Or waise bhi, aghar abhi bata dia to maza kaise ayega?

Bach gaya!

Now bilal came to them and took them to go to the takh and sat there for the more entertainment.

Jalal was about to go away from there, when bilal called him and ask him to sit and enjoy. With a disgusting feeling jalal has to agree.

😆

There are matka dance, rings of fire and fire play. Many kind of dance and singers some are male some female.

After sometime. Bilal called a servant and asked to do something, and the servant went away. Jalal saw him walk away towards. Jalal look all sides then swiftly. He saw that servant went towards a room behind the storage.

He followed him.

He stops outside and gives a signal. A lady came out and said something.

Then he saw Jodha came out wearing a beautiful Ghaghara choli.

For a moment his eye lashes froze looking at the epitome of beauty in that rajasthani Ghaghara.

She looks like a couplet of any poets. Her kohl eyes like a deer can kill any young fellow in front of her.

It was beautiful! 😃

For a moment he was somewhere lost. Jodha was crossing the veranda when she saw jalal. Her face became hard. Its because of him she have to be like a Sl** have to entertain those who are not even enough to call a monster.

Awww!

For a moment jalal lost in her eyes when their eyes met, his mind knitting a shayeree

Nazron Se Nazre Milake To Dekho

Ekk Naya Rishta Banaa Ker To Dekho

Baat Jo Dil Mein Hain Kardo Bayaan

Kabhi Khud Ko Jataa Kar To Dekho

Hasratein Jo Dil Mein Hain Bataake To Dekho

Apne Labon Se Kucch Bataake To Dekho

Aasmaan Khud Simatt Jaayega Aaagosh Mein Tumhaare

Apni Baahein Kabhii Failaa Ke To Dekho

Cliche... 😆 😛

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The night is still young, but jalal is not in peace. He want to stop this humiliation of a innocent soul but he is bonded, and for this helpless ness Jodha started hating him. But for her betterment he have to do this.

It is touching to see Jalal's humanity... 😳

All ladies in front of the guest. Jodha was in the middle. She was determind, she will not left her ghoonghat.


And the song started...

Some banjara started to sing...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZEiRDZnStRQ

Mhare Hiwdi Ni Pey Gayi Re Kataar Re (x2)
In my heart, it seemed as if a dagger was thrust
Re Kataar Re...
Oh a dagger!
Moriya Chhore Bolyo Re Dhadti Raat Maan (x2)
When a peacock started singing in the middle of the night

Mhare Hiwdi Ni Pey Gayi Re Kataar Re (x2)
In my heart, it seemed as if a dagger was thrust
O Kataar Re
Oh a dagger!

And now Jodha started dancing and as well as singing...

Morani Baaga Ma Bole Aadhi Raatma (x2)
A (female) peacock is singing in the garden in the middle of the night
Chhanan Chhan Chudiyaan (x2)
The jingling bangles
Khanak Gayi Dekh Sahibaan
Are making a tinkling noise, look O Madam
(Sahiban here also refers to the Mirza-Sahiban, which was a famous tragic
romantic couple in Indian History, like the Romeo and Juliet)
Chudiyaan Khanak Gayi Haath Ma
The bangles are tinkling in the hands
Morani Baaga Ma Bole Aadhi Raat Ma
A peacock is singing in the garden in the middle of the night

Main To Laaj Ke Maare, Ho Gayi Pani Pani
I became very embarrassed due to this shame
Sab Logon Ne Sun Li Meri Prem Kahani
As everyone heard (got to know about) my love story
Main To Laaj Ke Maare, Ho Gayi Pani Pani
I became very embarrassed due to this shame
Sab Logon Ne Sun Li Meri Prem Kahani
As everyone heard my love story
Muh Se Baat Nikal Gayi Baat Baat Ma, Baat Baat Ma
This story got revealed in the middle of other talks
Chhanan Chhan Chudiyaan (x2)
The jingling bangles
Khanak Gayi Dekh Sahibaan
Are making a tinkling noise, look O Madam
Chudiyaan Khanak Gayi Haath Ma
The bangles are tinkling in the hands
Morani Baaga Ma Bole Aadhi Raat Ma
A peacock is singing in the garden in the middle of the night

Saajan Saajan Le Gaylo Ho
When my beloved walked away
Ho... O...
Mera Saajan Jo Le Gayo
When my beloved walked away
Jab Dekhun Chadari Odh Main...
I was inside my veil
Mere Naina Mein Barsaave (x2)
And my eyes were raining tears

Jaane Kaun Ghadi Main Nikale Saajan Ghar Se
I don't know in which time of the day my beloved went out of home
Main Ghunghat Mein Jal Gayi Kitne Savan Barse
My heart got burnt and I started crying profusely (plentifully)
Jaane Kaun Ghadi Main Nikale Saajan Ghar Se
I don't know in which time of the day my beloved went out of home
Main Ghunghat Mein Jal Gayi Kitne Savan Barse
My heart got burnt and I started crying profusely
Meri Pyaas Na Bujhi Re, Barsaat Ma, Barsaat Ma
My thirst couldn't be quenched (satisfied) by even the rainfall
Chhanan Chhan Chudiyaan (x2)
The jingling bangles
Khanak Gayi Dekh Sahibaan
Are making a tinkling noise, look O Madam
Chudiyaan Khanak Gayi Haath Ma
The bangles are tinkling in the hands
Morani Baaga Ma Bole Aadhi Raat Ma
A peacock is singing in the garden in the middle of the night

Suni Sej Pe Saiyaan Sari Raat Main Jaagi
On a lonely bed, I remained awake all night
Tere Peechhe Peeechhe Meri Neend To Bhaagi
My sleep had run after You (my beloved)
(I was unable to sleep as You weren't there)
Ho... O...
Suni Sej Pe Saiyaan Sari Raat Main Jaagi
On a lonely bed, I remained awake all night
Tere Peechhe Peeechhe Meri Neend To Bhaagi
My sleep had run after You
Mera Chain Bhi Gaya Re Tere Saath Ma, Tere Saath Ma
My peace also went away with You
(I was restless as You weren't there)
Chhanan Chhan Chudiyaan (x2)
The jingling bangles
Khanak Gayi Dekh Sahibaan
Are making a tinkling noise, look O Madam
Chudiyaan Khanak Gayi Haath Ma
The bangles are tinkling in the hands

O... O Re Dhola... O...
O my partner
Re Mera Naina Phoote Re Dhola Maari Chhaati Dukhe Mhara Chola Phoote Re Dhola
My eyes are crying, my heart is breaking, my partner
Re Dhola... Mat Ja
Don't go away from me my partner
Re Dhola Re Mat Ja...
Don't go away from me my partner
Re Dhola Mat Ja...
Don't go away from me my partner

[Me too dancing 😆]

After the dance all of them cheers with praise, but he turn his face in disgust.

Perfect line to end. 😳

Precap: Husn-I jaanaan ki ta'reef mumkin nahi


A very cinematic chapter. And very balanced. The story is gripping and the best till date among all your works. Keep it up and please don't bring lovey-dovey things. 😆 Let the darkness and the thrill rock. 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update sis! 😃 I can't believe this sis jallu bhai told champa to take her to the dancers! 😲 Did he actually turned his face in disgust 😲 Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago


byata tor dabi ta ki bol!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri



byata tor dabi ta ki bol!!!!!!!!!!!!😃😃😃

Eta amr bon koreche go! 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice chapter!
Update soon and pm me please!

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