IshRa SS : Tum jo aye zindagi mein #2 Part 12 on pg 112, Teaser on 119

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: aru_27
Nice teaser
Continue soon

Thx dear
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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: pyara12
Omg harshu beautifully written
Loved d update
Ishra scenes were too good
Toshi told abt ramans silly reason nd all started laughing
Raman pov is just fab
Update soon
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Thank you so much di..
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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Kadianvi

Nice teaser di.

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Muskan193
Lovely update dear
Loved ishra scene
Their scooty drive
Thoshiji told him to drop her
Mihir teasing was lovely
Loved ramans pov
He is falling for her
Update soon dear
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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: ameena671
Wonderful teaser loved it can't wait for the update thank you for pm.

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Harshita Srivastava

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Part-8

"Happy Children Day Frnds"

Mihika was reading a magazine then she saw Amma was walking in tension..

Mihika - ohho amma why r you getting so tense haa?

Amma -kya mtlb hai tera nhi hona chahiye mujhe see the time abhi tak ishu nhi aayi..she said in worried tone

Mihika -amma for ur kind information akka ki bachhi nhi Jo kahi kho jayegi aap chinta mt kro wo aa jayegi..

Amma -that I know mihika koi wo bachhi nhi hai pr mai kya kru ek to usne phn krke btaya bhi nhi ki kaha hai KB aayegi or jb maine kiya to uthaya nhi..

Mihika -arey amma that's not a big deal ho skta hai akka ka phn bag mein ho tbhi ring nhi sunayi di ho..

Amma - murugan kre aisa hi ho saying she folds her hand..

Mihika - ohho amma stop worrying (suddenly they heard doorbell) lo aa gyi aapko ishu saying she open the door & saw ishita standing there ishita came inside

Mihika - thank god aap aa gyi akka warna abhi amma PS report krne chli jati..

Ishita - Police station why?

Amma - ishu u don't listen her ye btao kaha reh gyi thi?mera phn bhi pick nhi kiya..

Ishita - wo Amma ek frnd se Milne gyi thi so late ho gya or phn pe dhyan nhi gya..

Amma - its ok kanna u go & get fresh n up I will bring coffee for you ..saying she went from there..

Mihika - akka nice story now tell me the truth..

Ishita royally ignored her talk & goes inside her room bt as well mihika too follows her & said " akka here m asking u something and you didn't answered me "..saying she came in front of her..

Ishita (smiles)- ok tell me what do you want to hear from me?

Mihika - areey about ur meeting with Rkb..

Ishita- hey don't call him Rkb,he's ur jiju..saying she opened her Almira & take it her night dress leaving a surprise plus shocked mihika behind her..

Mihika didn't understand wats wrong with her akka yesterday she was scolding so much to her for Calling him Jiju & now she herself telling her to call Raman Jiju.Mihika puts her hand on ishita's Forehead nd Cheeks.

Ishita (irritated)- what r u doing mihku?

Mihika - just checking ur temperature .is everything fyn naa? That day you r scolding me so much calling him jiju & now u r agreed m getting confused akka..

Ishita laughs seeing her state then said " my dear mihku don't put so much pressure on ur lil brain bas itna smjh le ki you'll call him jiju from now..

Mihika - bt akka..suddenly amma called them " mihku ishu seeko wango kanna coffee is ready"

Ishita - mihku tu chl m just coming ..saying she goes inside washroom..

After fresh n up ishita joined them they are enjoing their coffee when amma said " ishu m wanna ask u something "

Ishita - ha amma bolo naa..

Amma - wo actually toshi has called me & said that urs engagement fixed after 4 weeks when mihika interrupted them " amma one month "..

Amma (glared her)- I know mihku 4 weeks & one month both r equal..

Mihika - ha sorry u both carry on then amma turned to ishita " so ishu tera decision kya hai i know maine tera rishta Bina Teri marzi ke fix kr diya bt ye mai tujhse Bina puchha nhi krna chahti if u want u can take time as much as u want..

Ishita (after thinking something)- ok amma m ready ..

Mihika (spill the coffee)- whattt?

Ishita - sambhal ke mihku..

Mihika - is that true?

Ishita - what?

Mihika - wahi Jo mai sun rahi hu I mean in one day u r totally changed not bad akka waise akka ek hi meeting mein aisa kya jaadoo kr diya Rkb oops sorry jiju ne..only audible to ishita

Amma - chup re tu mihku don't irritate my ishu kanna saying she hugged ishita & she showed tongue ..

Mihika make pout "haww akka amma u both r so bad"

Ishita - oye nautanki bas kar come here saying she opened her arms for her then trio shared family hug..

On the other side raman was walking in tension suddenly mihir came & saw him then asked " hey raman what happened ?"

Raman - what?

Mihir - that's what m asking u? Kyun shatabdi express ki Farah bhaag rha hai yahan se wahan..

Raman - achha ye wo actually ishita ko gye bahut time ho gya hai he was saying bt mihir cut him in mid" ohho to someone is missing his would be not bad yrr good going..

Raman - shut up mihir pehle poori baat sun liya kr tb kuch bola kr m worried for her not missing her get that..

Mihir - worried bt why everything fyn naa?

Raman - actually she didn't call me yet about her whereabouts I said to her that call me once when she reached bt see itna time ho gya bt abhi tk call nhi ki..

Mihir start laughing which raised his anger " mihir here m tense & u r laughing on my situation "..

Mihir composed himself " sorry yr bt tera face dekh ke bahut hasi aa rhi arey yrr if u r really so much worried about her then u can call him too..

Raman - why should I do that?What will she think about me yrr? Nhi mai nhi krunga..

Mihir - dekh le jaisa tujhe thk lge saying he went from there..

That's all for now frnds I hope u all liked it so what do you think guys Raman will call her or not?

Love
Harshita

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Awesome chappy
Update soon

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Sanjna55

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Heyy..

As always Awesome part harshuu..

Love it..

SoooMuuccchhh..

Ishu went hiome..

She lied to amma..

Miku tried to know the real reason but ishu didn't tell her..

Oye Hoye..One day changed her fully..

Rkb se jiju..😆

Ishu is ready even in one month..

Miku spills her coffee..😆😆😆

Ek meeting or sb badal gyaa..😆

Raman is worried as she didn't called him..

Mihir asked him to call her ..

But Raman denied..

Let's see ..

Wese I think krlega..But as u r writing ..Kuch b hoskta hai..

Okay..

So will wait for the next part..

Update Soonish..

Lovely Update..

TakeCare..

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Dilpreet kaur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

Happy children's day to all 🥳

Fabulous update
Ishita shocked mihika
Raman is so cute
Mimi were surprised with sudden change in ishra
Lets see what happens next
Ty 4 d pm

Edited by cooldilkaur - 8 years ago