Tanshi FF - Infinite Love Part-10 Updated Page-21

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am trying to write FF on Tanshi. This FF is based on some other drama which I thought it will fit for our Tanshi so I thought of writing it. Well the story has two janams which will run as parallel track. I know I am bad writer just bear with me. Here is the introduction...hope you all like it

INFINITE LOVE

50 years back
It is raining heavily from past three days. By looking at the ocean the villagers felt an unknown fear as the ocean is looking extremely dangerous with raising waves. Bandore is a village which is near the ocean and the most villagers depends on ocean for fishing. The ocean which is providing them food to live is now eyeing them to destroy everything they had. Their fear came true as the storm hit the village hard. The storm continued for almost one day. It went off next day. Although the storm is big the damage it caused is less. There was a legend in that village that whenever a storm hits the village it leaves one of its precious things. The villagers believed it firmly. So they used to visit the seashore every time after the storm although they didn't find anything. But still they believed in that legend.
So now also with the hope of getting something, some of the villagers visited seashore. They searched but they got nothing as usual. With the disappointment the villagers started to leave the shore.
One of the villagers went running to the villagers who were leaving and said "hey I found someone in that cave. I think she is a woman. May be she came to take shelter in that cave due to storm to protect herself. I think she fainted due to heavy rain. Let's take her to village doctor before it is late.
One of the villager asked "are you sure you saw someone in that cave.
Yes I am sure, that girls head is lying on the rock, her face is covered with her hair said that villager.
Okay then let's go to the cave.
All villagers agreed and went into the cave to see her. They were shocked at the sight which is in front of their eyes. They stood shockingly looking at her unable to believe their eyes.


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arya1210 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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love the intro part.Plz update soon.I love ur Writing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's difficult different and interesting divya please continue
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting build up! Loved it, waiting keenly for next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very interesting

Plz continue

Thanks. Definitely I will continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

love the intro part.Plz update soon.I love ur Writing.

Thank you very much Arya.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

It's difficult different and interesting divya please continue

Thanks Manazza. Definitely I will continue.
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Originally posted by: Anjan_Suntala

Interesting build up! Loved it, waiting keenly for next update.

Thanks Suntala. Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Here is the first part. Hope you all like it.

Part-1

They stood shockingly looking at her unable to believe their eyes. All came to their senses when the girl started to move. Its...Its...mermaid (jalkanya) one of the villager said. All the villagers moved some steps backwards due to fear n started shouting. Their actions scared mermaid. The Mermaid also started moving but it became difficult with her tail to move on land. She started to crawl but small stones in the cave wounded her, still she kept on crawling towards ocean. As she is crawling the villagers blocked her way. Unable to do anything she just remained there.

The villagers thought for a while and decided to take her to the noble person of their village. They caught her in net and took her to the Baldev Singh who is noble person of Bandore village.

Baldev Singh is middle aged person who is government official. His job is to collects tax from fishermen. The villagers has huge respect on Baldev as he is richest person of their village. Villagers kept her in small pond which is in Baldev's house.

The mermaid is sitting on the stone which is at one end of the pond and kept her tail in water. Her hands were tied with a rope. Baldev is thrilled to see her. One of the villager explained how they found her.
Then he asked that I heard somewhere that when Mermaid stays long at land then her tail turns into human legs but she stayed whole day in that cave then why she is in mermaid form.

Then one old man replied to him saying "sir may be one of the wave pushed her forcibly from the ocean to that cave. When we went to see her, her tail is in one pothole which has sufficient water to keep her body warm which made her tail not to turn into human legs.
It means she is real Mermaid...a real mermaid said Baldev evilly.
He has her back. He slowly went to touch her. But same old person stopped him and said "sir don't touch her. Our ancestors used to say that Mermaids have a special ability that they can erase anyone's memory whoever touches them without their knowledge. Precisely we can say that Mermaid can erase one's memory by touching them.

"What nonsense are you talking shouted Baldev at old man.

No sir it's true. I heard that this is a way the mermaids defend themselves against humans. And also I heard that there are some seamen who went crazy by touching mermaids.

Then I won't touch her with hand, I will touch her with sword saying those words he stepped back smiling evilly at her.

"Okay today our new town head is coming. Make arrangements for his arrival by saying this he left from there.

P.S- Sorry for Grammatical and Spelling mistakes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely update duniya.Seens to be intresting story.Waiting for next.
Thanks for pm

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