Tanshi FF - Infinite Love Part-10 Updated Page-21 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well I said before this story has two janams. Same characters will be there in two janams but with different names. First janam will be of different names and second janam have familiar names which were same as Kasam.
So in this janam Baldev character is Guljeeth and Jai character is our Rishi. Remaining characters will be introduced as the story progresses.

Hope you all Understood.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-2

Finally the town head arrived. Being Rich man of the town Baldev hosted lunch for him. All were sitting for lunch and having great time together.

I am very happy that a person like you became town head at a young age of 27 and I also heard that you are widower. I am very sorry for that said Baldev.

Jai didn't say anything, just smiled at Baldev.

For a second the atmosphere became silent.

In order to change the topic one of the official present there said to Jai "Sir I loved your green bangle. It is very beautiful.

Thank you. It is my mother's. It always with me as it is last memory of her.
"Well I too loved your traditional dress especially your hat." said Jai.

ohh Thank you. But you know you have to wear this as this is our tradition that whoever comes to work here should wear our traditional type of dresses.

Well definitely I will try said Jai.

Did you ever heard about Mermaid? asked Baldev.

Mermaids...? questiongly said Jai.

"What I know is Mermaids don't exist. They are only seen in stories said one of the officers who came along with Jai.

If that so then I will show one rare scene to all of you said Baldev amusingly.

He took Jai to window and showed the mermaid.

Jai was surprised by seeing her not because she is mermaid but because he felt that he know her from long time. He got some strange feeling that she belong to him.

At the same time Mermaid raised her head and looked at him as she felt someone is looking at her.
At that moment their eyes locked. They just stood there looking at each other by completely ignoring the world.

Baldev words bought back him to the reality.
He with Baldev went to the Pond at the next moment as his life dependent on her.

She is sitting there helplessly and waiting for someone's help that's what he felt by looking at her stature.

He felt as she is calling him to help. He is ready to do it he thought.
He then turned to Baldev and asked what are you going to do with this Mermaid?

They say that oil extracted from mermaid is of best quality. Even the whale oil, that is supposed to be the best oil, do not compare to it. It doesn't rot even if you leave it for long time. So this is just the value can't be priced.

After doing my duties and living with goodwill, I guess these kind of fortunes come.

To someone like you who do his duties and lives with good will... I am very sorry to say this but...

What are you trying to say sir? asked Baldev.

I privately checked your profile before stating my post here. You bribed for getting this post here n you collected double of what you paid to get this job from fisherman by collecting double tax.

sir...? Said Baldev.

You know recently there passed a law whoever collects extra tax from innocent and poor people will get death sentence.

I understood. What do you want from me? Asked Baldev.

What you will give?

Anything...
anything... then he looked in the direction of mermaid and said I want her.
Okay take her said Baldev.

Jai took her in boat to the ocean and set her free.

She just went some distance and started swimming back following his boat.

He stopped the boat in the ocean n came to the end of the boat.

She by keeping her head up extended her hand towards him.

Baldev and that same old man is looking all this from sea shore.

Is she trying to drag him into the ocean and take his soul and erase his memory? Isn't she? Asked Baldev.

They say mermaids only erase memories that they want to erase.

However it would be better not to take that hand. The worlds that a human and mermaid live in are clearly different. Whether it is good or bad but destiny always plays it part. Don't know why it formed ties between them?

At the same time Jai held her hand.

Present

You know Rishi you are like Harry Potter of con-artists. No..no you are better than Harry Potter because you deceive people with your magic and your visuals are far better than Harry Potter.

P.S Sorry for spelling n grammatical mistakes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice loved it...thnx for pm... update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow love it.So van we say that mermaids was our tanuja??.
So different and intresting.Can't wait for next.Update sooner.Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wao divya that story is really interesting and about update i just love it so happy that our rishi help that mermaid and also free her it's fairytale type story of tanshi wao thanks for pm please update sooner sooner
Ps;kya wo mermaid tanu thi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Thank god jai was good person
Who set mermaid free from that creepy baldev
But both jai & mermaid feel some connection between them
In present rishi is bad guy?
Continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya1210

Wow love it.So van we say that mermaids was our tanuja??.

So different and intresting.Can't wait for next.Update sooner.Thanks for pm

Ho Saktha hai Arya. Thanks you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ManazzaShahid12

Wao divya that story is really interesting and about update i just love it so happy that our rishi help that mermaid and also free her it's fairytale type story of tanshi wao thanks for pm please update sooner sooner
Ps;kya wo mermaid tanu thi

Thank you so much Manazza. Will update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

Awesome update

Thank god jai was good person
Who set mermaid free from that creepy baldev
But both jai & mermaid feel some connection between them
In present rishi is bad guy?
Continue plz

Thank you Manita. About Rishi being good or bad will be revealed in next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-3

We are calling from public prosecutor's office. Our elevators broken.

Ah yes sorry for the inconvenience. We are right in front so we will be there right away. By saying this UV hangs up the phone.

Oh god AK you are genius how can you do this. You are king of hacking. Okay guys. We have only 20 mins time. Rishi you are ready na.

Ha UV I am ready. Let's go.

Three disguised in mechanic dress goes to the apartment where Prosecutors' office is located.
I guess you came quickly since you said you were nearby said Security guard.
Ah yes said UV and the trio started walking.

Just a moment said Security. The three stops there n panics.
"Chief Surya didn't come? He was the one who always come asked guard

Rishi comes to security guard n observes him.

[Habitual smoker as cigarettes in right pocket, fast heartbeat. Right Handed: right pocket faded out, hands folded left hand is on top: Sensitive person, same color scarf undershirt and socks matching compulsively.]

Putting everything together...he goes near to security guard, takes out lighter n turns it upside down n lit's it up showing him and says Chief Surya came, see he is right over there.
Where...?

There... he shows a girl with spects standing near elevators by keeping lighter between guard eyes and that girl.

He sees light then the girl and then says Ah I didn't recognize him because he is wearing glasses today. Yes you are right he came. Please go and do your duties.

They go to top floor where chief prosecutor cabin is present. "AK you go to terrors and you know what to do said Rishi.

"Yes by saying it AK goes to terrors.
Rishi n UV goes to chief prosecutor's room. They take off their mechanic dress. Rishi sits in chief prosecutors chair and pretends to be busy by writing something on paper. Sir our chief is busy so he can't take up your case says UV pretending that he is talking in phone.

Mean while a lady enters into the cabin with her secretary.
Who is she? asked Rishi.

Sir she is Meghana Malik CEO of Malik Industries. I told u know about it before. You know na, in Paradise high school a student committed suicide, but his suicide note had her son's name written on it.

He is idiot. If he is going to fall then he should fall by himself n die. Why write my sons name on there?

There is traffic signal near that office. AK is sitting at the end in the terrors where he can clearly see the people who are crossing traffic signal. He hacked the traffic signal system.
It's time for original prosecutor to arrive thought AK.

Meanwhile the prosecutor arrived and he is waiting for pedestrian signal to cross the road. Finally the signal is red and it's time for pedestrians to walk. The chief prosecutor stated crossing road. Meanwhile AK hacked traffic signal system n changed signal color to Green. The vehicles started moving and the pedestrians came back due to vehicle moving. AK repeated this whenever the signal became red in order to prevent prosecutor from reaching his office.

My son is taking college entrance exam soon. Why should he suffer because of one idiot? Just do one thing I heard that suicide letter is with you so do whatever you do but that letter should not contain my son's name.

"Come out within a minute. I can't stop him more than a minute warned AK to UV in phone.
UV signals to Rishi about this.

Shall we go for lunch? Said UV. Ahh I am hungry said Rishi.
Both UV n Rishi gets up n leaves both lady n her secretary follows them.

The four are walking on the corridors. It's good. It's all good but I can't really do much for you said Rishi.

They stepped in elevators.
Just get my son cleared. I will pay you as much as you want plus we have an island called Pamban you can enjoy there for one month.

That's not that good said Rishi. Now they were walking outside.
So what do you want asked Meghana.

I know a pretty cool place said Rishi. Where is it? Asked Meghana.

It's an island in the Mediterranean Sea. I heard the view is amazing there. Send me the amount of 10 crores then we will go wherever we want. By saying this he left from there.
In Airport
Yes ma'am we received amount. Thank you. Your work is done. Your son can attend college exam without any fear. I pray for his wellbeing saying this UV hangs up the phone.

"See Rishi how easily they got fooled. At that time they realize they are fooled we will leave the country. Said UV
Meanwhile AK puts his headphone in ears and leaves from there taking his luggage.

Hey AK. Hey you not even said goodbye.
Leave him Rishi. He doesn't know how to say goodbye but he can open doors in 2 seconds.
I hate it the most when he just goes without saying bye by saying this he goes from there by taking his luggage.

What and you are doing the same. You are the one with the crappiest mannerism by saying this UV also goes with his luggage.

Mostly the three goes to different places for vacation whenever they get large amount of money.
Rishi is in plane n flirts with Air hostess.

"We will be landing shortly so I will go ahead and open your window doors Said Air hostess.
Yes said Rishi.
"Isn't it beautiful? I have been to number of countries but there isn't a place that can match the ocean here said Air hostess.

By looking through window he said you are right.

"When I flew around here a long time ago I heard something form the elderly men who have lived here for a long time they said that mermaids still live in these waters said Air hostess.
Oh said Rishi.

It's true.

Voice over says
A long time ago mermaids lived in many parts of the ocean but now most of them disappeared and they say that the last mermaids that remain on this earth lives in this ocean.

In Ocean

Many mermaids are swimming in the ocean. A mermaid goes deep down the ocean. She finds a green bangle deep down the ocean. She picks it and swims above the ocean. She keeps her head above the water and wears the bangle to her hand.

P.S. Sorry for grammatical n spelling mistakes.

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