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Hi everyone, I'm Avni Reddy. This is my first OS on Avneil. Please do read and give me ur valuable feedback. I'd love to know from u guys about the story. Sorry if ive done any mistakes with the Hindi bcz i'm not a hindi speaking girl.
Thanks and Happy reading ! 😊
Avneil OS : Avni's dream - Normal Happy Family
"Neil... Neeeiilll...!" Avni entered her room to find her darling hubby still sleeping on the bed.
"Neil...please utho. 5 minute pehle hi toh tumhe jagaake gayi thi. Phir se so gaye !"
** Neil opens his eyes while yawning**
"Tum mujhe jagaake toh gayi thi par bed se niche nai uthaari na ?" He smirks as he pulls her towards him to cuddle.
**Avni tries to free herself from his strong passionate embrace **
"Aah ! Neeeil... chodo na please. Thodi der pehle toh nahaake ayi thi so please don't touch me..."
"Awe meri pyari wifey...it's ok. Phir se nahaa lena. Hmm par, Mere sath" he completes saying this with planting kisses on her lips.
*Avni still in his embrace but a little shy and smiles to herself*
"Neeeiilll... aaj kal tum bohat besharam hote jaa rahe ho...chodo mujhe" and gets up from the bed.
"Wifey ke sath kaisi sharam jaaneman ? Hubby aur wifey ke beech no sharam and no hesitation...and let me tell u yeh mera rule hai salman khan ka nahi ha..."
**As Neil says this naughtily...Avni shys away and turns around**
"Haa haan Mr.Salman Khan... chalo ab ready ho ke mishti ke room mein aa jaana woh wait kar rahi hai.."
**Avni leaves as she says this with all smiles on her face**
#Mishti's room#
Avni is doing mishti's hair. Mishti sees Neil behind them on the mirror and turns around immediately.
"Paapa...!!" She runs and hugs him. Avni looks them with love.
"Tum dono paapa aur beti bilkul ek jaise ho..! Hamesha apni manmaani karte rehte ho. Yeh dekho Mishti ne tumhe dekha aur jhat se bhaagi..theek se baal bhi banane nai diya"
Neil smiles at her.
"Haan meri princess hai... kyu na kare manmaani..Hai na Mishti ?" Neil pulls mishti's cheeks.
"Yes papa. Avni maa ko hum dono tang karenge hamesha" Mishti and Neil both laugh at Avni and run away from the room.
Avni pretends to be angry and runs behind them.
"Mishti ki bachi...ruko.. Both of u stop...
Aah..! Neeeiilll..!" While running Avni falls unconscious
*Neil runs to hold her and Mishti stands still*
"Avni...hey Avni... sorry yar.. ankhein kholo avni...kya hua ?"
Bebe, Swetha,Neela and Prakash arrive when they hear neil screaming.
"Bebe, Mom hum bhaag rahe the aur... aur Avv Avvniii behosh ho gayi... doctor ko bulao jaldi... Avni please utho.. i promise hum tang nai karenge tumhe... utho na please.."
**Neil carries her to their room. Doctor tests Avni**
"Inhe ab bhaagne ya kisi bhi tarah ki physically stress lene ka kaam karne mat dijiye."
Bebe,Swetha and Neela's faces lit up brightly but Neil looks still worried.
"Haan doctor woh toh hum vaise bhi mana karte hai par yeh maanti nai...but ab kya hua hai Avni ko ? Woh theek toh hai na ?"
"Doctor uncle, Avni maa ko kya hua hai ? Unhe uthne ko boliye. I want to ask her sorry uncle" Mishti says with her guilt filled innocent face.
"Arre beta don't worry. Aapki maa bilkul theek hai aur apko ek chote se bhai ya behen gift kar rahi hai.."
"Wow sach me uncle? Mein didi banungi..yay!!"
Mishti's happiness knew no bounds.
Now, everybody's faces lit up with happiness.
"Doctor aap sach bol rahe ho na ? I'm the happiest person in the world right now. Thank you so much"
"Bebe, mom mein aur Avni mummy paapa banenge...sach mein ! Matlab Mishti ke mom dad toh hum hai hi par mera khud ka bacha aane wala hai so I'm very happy" Neil hugs them.
Prakash takes the doctor to leave.
Neela has tears in her eyes as she hugs Neil
"Yehi khushi dekhna chahti thi Neil tum dono ki zindagi mein. Hamesha aise hi rehna".
Neil smiles and looks Mishti who's sitting next to Avni.
"Mishti... aap dadi ke sath jaao aur avni maa aur baby ke liye dher saare shopping karo"
Everyone leave... Neil sits next to Avni and caresses her forehead. Avni wakes up.
"Neil...woh..." Neil interrupts her.
"Sshhh...kuch mat kaho. Mein bolunga..aur tum sunogi ab se"
"Avni, dhyan se suno... Tum Maa banne waali ho aur mein paapa...! Thank you so much for this wonderful gift Avni... mein bayaan nai kar sakta ki mein kitna khush hu..." He gives a peck on her forhead.
"Mein jaanti thi Neil...mujhe aaj subah hi pata chal gaya tha..."
"What ? Tum kaise jaanti thi? Tum doctor ho ? Aur jaanti thi toh mujhe kyun nai bataya?" Neil asks innocently.
"Arre buddhu... pata chal jati hai. Doctor hone ki zarurat nai hai... Hahaha. Tum bhi na Neil..."
Avni tries to get up.
"Aarramse Avni..." Neil helps her leans her against his shoulder.
"Neil...abhi uth sakti hu khud se...shayad 3 ya 4 mahine ke baad tumhari help ki zarurat padegi"
Neil puts his hand around her shoulder
"Abhi ya kuch samay baad...mujhe koi fark nai hai...i will always be there for you my dear wifey... haa yeh sab theek hai ab bolo kyu nai bataya pehle mujhe ?"
"Oh god Neil, isse bataane ke liye hi toh subah se tumhe jaldi ready hone ko keh rahi thi...par tuummm kisi aur cheez mein intetested the aaj subah subah...mein chahti thi tumhe aur mishti ko ek sath yeh good news du...isiliye toh tumhe mishti ke room me aane ko kaha tha... tum aye bhi par isse pehle mein kuch bataati tum dono paapa aur beti ne mujhe tang karna shuru kiya aur... aur doctor ko tumhe bataana padha.."
Listening to her...Neil's face becomes lil dull.
"Awe baby, I'm so sorry...but for myself. Because meine kitna acha mauka kho diya..."
**Avni looks puzzled**
"Sorry to yourself? Mauka ? Kya bol rahe ho Neil ?"
"Haan... acha mauka hi toh tha...tum mujhe yeh good news deti aur mein...issi khushi mein..you know thoda romance karta and all that..i missed it man ! Aur uss sadu doctor se sunna pada " Neil smirks saying this.
"God... neil...tum sudhroge nai na..?! Hehehe.."
Avni hits Neil with her elbow...and laughs.
"Aahhoouu...mar dalo gi kya avni..hehehe?"
"Aree nai nai...ab toh mujhe 3 bachon ko paalna hai...jail nai jaana tumhe maar ke"
"Han ? 3 bache ? Kaise ?" questions Neil
"Haan mere teen bache...Ek Mishti,ek aane wala baby aur ek tum...! Tum bhi kisi bache se kam ho Neil...?!"
Neil hugs her lovingly... Mishti enters the room.
"Avni maa...paapa ! Mujhe bhi hug karo...!"
She runs upto them...they hug her.
"Issi happy family ka sapna dekhti thi neil bachpan se... ab tumhari vaja se pura hua...Thank you so much...I love you Neil..."
"Aww senti mat karo sweetheart... hehe...I love you too Avi."
** And they lived happily ever after **
Please do leave ur comments. Thanks for reading :)
Thanks and Happy reading ! 😊
Avneil OS : Avni's dream - Normal Happy Family
"Neil... Neeeiilll...!" Avni entered her room to find her darling hubby still sleeping on the bed.
"Neil...please utho. 5 minute pehle hi toh tumhe jagaake gayi thi. Phir se so gaye !"
** Neil opens his eyes while yawning**
"Tum mujhe jagaake toh gayi thi par bed se niche nai uthaari na ?" He smirks as he pulls her towards him to cuddle.
**Avni tries to free herself from his strong passionate embrace **
"Aah ! Neeeil... chodo na please. Thodi der pehle toh nahaake ayi thi so please don't touch me..."
"Awe meri pyari wifey...it's ok. Phir se nahaa lena. Hmm par, Mere sath" he completes saying this with planting kisses on her lips.
*Avni still in his embrace but a little shy and smiles to herself*
"Neeeiilll... aaj kal tum bohat besharam hote jaa rahe ho...chodo mujhe" and gets up from the bed.
"Wifey ke sath kaisi sharam jaaneman ? Hubby aur wifey ke beech no sharam and no hesitation...and let me tell u yeh mera rule hai salman khan ka nahi ha..."
**As Neil says this naughtily...Avni shys away and turns around**
"Haa haan Mr.Salman Khan... chalo ab ready ho ke mishti ke room mein aa jaana woh wait kar rahi hai.."
**Avni leaves as she says this with all smiles on her face**
#Mishti's room#
Avni is doing mishti's hair. Mishti sees Neil behind them on the mirror and turns around immediately.
"Paapa...!!" She runs and hugs him. Avni looks them with love.
"Tum dono paapa aur beti bilkul ek jaise ho..! Hamesha apni manmaani karte rehte ho. Yeh dekho Mishti ne tumhe dekha aur jhat se bhaagi..theek se baal bhi banane nai diya"
Neil smiles at her.
"Haan meri princess hai... kyu na kare manmaani..Hai na Mishti ?" Neil pulls mishti's cheeks.
"Yes papa. Avni maa ko hum dono tang karenge hamesha" Mishti and Neil both laugh at Avni and run away from the room.
Avni pretends to be angry and runs behind them.
"Mishti ki bachi...ruko.. Both of u stop...
Aah..! Neeeiilll..!" While running Avni falls unconscious
*Neil runs to hold her and Mishti stands still*
"Avni...hey Avni... sorry yar.. ankhein kholo avni...kya hua ?"
Bebe, Swetha,Neela and Prakash arrive when they hear neil screaming.
"Bebe, Mom hum bhaag rahe the aur... aur Avv Avvniii behosh ho gayi... doctor ko bulao jaldi... Avni please utho.. i promise hum tang nai karenge tumhe... utho na please.."
**Neil carries her to their room. Doctor tests Avni**
"Inhe ab bhaagne ya kisi bhi tarah ki physically stress lene ka kaam karne mat dijiye."
Bebe,Swetha and Neela's faces lit up brightly but Neil looks still worried.
"Haan doctor woh toh hum vaise bhi mana karte hai par yeh maanti nai...but ab kya hua hai Avni ko ? Woh theek toh hai na ?"
"Doctor uncle, Avni maa ko kya hua hai ? Unhe uthne ko boliye. I want to ask her sorry uncle" Mishti says with her guilt filled innocent face.
"Arre beta don't worry. Aapki maa bilkul theek hai aur apko ek chote se bhai ya behen gift kar rahi hai.."
"Wow sach me uncle? Mein didi banungi..yay!!"
Mishti's happiness knew no bounds.
Now, everybody's faces lit up with happiness.
"Doctor aap sach bol rahe ho na ? I'm the happiest person in the world right now. Thank you so much"
"Bebe, mom mein aur Avni mummy paapa banenge...sach mein ! Matlab Mishti ke mom dad toh hum hai hi par mera khud ka bacha aane wala hai so I'm very happy" Neil hugs them.
Prakash takes the doctor to leave.
Neela has tears in her eyes as she hugs Neil
"Yehi khushi dekhna chahti thi Neil tum dono ki zindagi mein. Hamesha aise hi rehna".
Neil smiles and looks Mishti who's sitting next to Avni.
"Mishti... aap dadi ke sath jaao aur avni maa aur baby ke liye dher saare shopping karo"
Everyone leave... Neil sits next to Avni and caresses her forehead. Avni wakes up.
"Neil...woh..." Neil interrupts her.
"Sshhh...kuch mat kaho. Mein bolunga..aur tum sunogi ab se"
"Avni, dhyan se suno... Tum Maa banne waali ho aur mein paapa...! Thank you so much for this wonderful gift Avni... mein bayaan nai kar sakta ki mein kitna khush hu..." He gives a peck on her forhead.
"Mein jaanti thi Neil...mujhe aaj subah hi pata chal gaya tha..."
"What ? Tum kaise jaanti thi? Tum doctor ho ? Aur jaanti thi toh mujhe kyun nai bataya?" Neil asks innocently.
"Arre buddhu... pata chal jati hai. Doctor hone ki zarurat nai hai... Hahaha. Tum bhi na Neil..."
Avni tries to get up.
"Aarramse Avni..." Neil helps her leans her against his shoulder.
"Neil...abhi uth sakti hu khud se...shayad 3 ya 4 mahine ke baad tumhari help ki zarurat padegi"
Neil puts his hand around her shoulder
"Abhi ya kuch samay baad...mujhe koi fark nai hai...i will always be there for you my dear wifey... haa yeh sab theek hai ab bolo kyu nai bataya pehle mujhe ?"
"Oh god Neil, isse bataane ke liye hi toh subah se tumhe jaldi ready hone ko keh rahi thi...par tuummm kisi aur cheez mein intetested the aaj subah subah...mein chahti thi tumhe aur mishti ko ek sath yeh good news du...isiliye toh tumhe mishti ke room me aane ko kaha tha... tum aye bhi par isse pehle mein kuch bataati tum dono paapa aur beti ne mujhe tang karna shuru kiya aur... aur doctor ko tumhe bataana padha.."
Listening to her...Neil's face becomes lil dull.
"Awe baby, I'm so sorry...but for myself. Because meine kitna acha mauka kho diya..."
**Avni looks puzzled**
"Sorry to yourself? Mauka ? Kya bol rahe ho Neil ?"
"Haan... acha mauka hi toh tha...tum mujhe yeh good news deti aur mein...issi khushi mein..you know thoda romance karta and all that..i missed it man ! Aur uss sadu doctor se sunna pada " Neil smirks saying this.
"God... neil...tum sudhroge nai na..?! Hehehe.."
Avni hits Neil with her elbow...and laughs.
"Aahhoouu...mar dalo gi kya avni..hehehe?"
"Aree nai nai...ab toh mujhe 3 bachon ko paalna hai...jail nai jaana tumhe maar ke"
"Han ? 3 bache ? Kaise ?" questions Neil
"Haan mere teen bache...Ek Mishti,ek aane wala baby aur ek tum...! Tum bhi kisi bache se kam ho Neil...?!"
Neil hugs her lovingly... Mishti enters the room.
"Avni maa...paapa ! Mujhe bhi hug karo...!"
She runs upto them...they hug her.
"Issi happy family ka sapna dekhti thi neil bachpan se... ab tumhari vaja se pura hua...Thank you so much...I love you Neil..."
"Aww senti mat karo sweetheart... hehe...I love you too Avi."
** And they lived happily ever after **
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