RiKara OS - DEAR HUSBAND - Page 4

Originally posted by: B_rikarafan7999

First of all.,thank you very much for the PM

N abt the OS..loved it

U were fabulous as usual 😉

Originally posted by: maivelli

Super sanskari

Originally posted by: loveangel94

So hot!

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Pooru 🤗

Kash 🤗

Thanks for the PM and sorry for the delay - things are hectic right now. I know ... Kind of same with me ... See such a long time to reply to comments.

You did it again 😳 I can't help but blush - you make up for all the RiKara action we don't get on the show 😉. I have grown wiser because of these show makers ... Jis bhi tarah ka RiKara Chahiye Khud likhlo 😆

So I started this thing of thinking you were going with the show right now - the red and black checkered shirt That is one of my favorite shirt from his wardrobe! Omkara is wearing during the too short custard romance... Girl never ever remind me that but wait no! What is this? WriterKara -who is this fine romantic specimen? I expected her to find him sculpting/sketching/painting but I forgot... this is Pooru and she is always original. Eggjactly! Its been many a times that I wrote about his drawing and painting and I like him as a writer too. I loved it - this mature and comfortable phase in their relationship that you have captured. That is how a married couple who have fallen in love should be ... Actually I am also done with writing their Pehla Pehla Pyaar hai phenomena in OS format ... Let them seek each others company and have a nice time 😳

The RiKara you showed here are further along in their relationship than the ones in the show - I'm guessing the typical Oberoi drama did not come calling for them or if it did then the ghosts of MUs and MultiLana's no longer haunt them. 🤣 "I am a writer and my name is not Harneet Singh"The stability and comfort you've brought here is so commendable - my deepest wish is to see RiKara really talk to each other an the level of spousal understanding you maintain throughout is what I want more than anything to see. Conversation is the most essential part of any relationship and you know what RiKara have literally not talked properly other than MU's! Yes you give us their more passionate and sanskari bit, but you also always manage to give them the soul that all RiKarians have fallen for - and I love that most about your writing. You take the two characters and change their backgrounds/circumstances but hold in to their essence so 👏 to you. RiKara is the reason I got back to writing fanfictions after three good years and about the sanskaars part ... When we watch Indian television we have to eliminate a few things from expectations and so I write such few things 😉

I will not comment on that red-hot ending... you already know you're a pro and my face is red-hot now too... Ahaan beetroot Do you have a part-time job as a central heater? Because you always turn the temperature up 😆 - ok, lame joke I know. Ohho i love the CENTRAL HEATER compliment. I am going to write you something 😃Now I'm off to read the next thing you posted - overachiever 😆. Over thinker 😆

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Aww

This was so beautifully written pooru

Loved it

U HV become expertise in this stuff now...

Start writing a book now😉

Originally posted by: Omkaragauri5

Another great OS of urs dear...very beautifully written