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Mangalsuthra Nuptial chain Part 1

This SS is inspired by the malayalam novel 'Thaali' written by J.Usha(The rumour is that it is the novel written by Sudhakar Mangalodayam in his late wife's name)which was later made into a serial scripted by Sudhakar Mangalodyam.But the novel as well as the serial were depressing.Though this SS is emotional it won't be tragic like the novel and the serial.Though the theme is similar,the scenes and the incidents are different.

It's a converted SS which was originally written on another couple.I converted it for my dearest friend Arisha.




Today is a wonderful day for Roli.She has been selected as the best choreographer.She was holding a trophy in her hand.

She kissed the trophy.


She smiled emotionally:I thank God almighty who helped me to climb heights.And I need to thank my parents for their support.
She smiled at dev who was among the audience.
ROLI:I don't have words to thank Dev who introduced me to the world of dance.He only introduced me to the dancing field of dance.He only brought me back to the world of dance.And I have to thank the sponsor of the dance shows I did without him I would not have been known to the public.If he had'nt been there nobody would have known the dancer in me.
Roli always had a passion for dance.It was her childhood friend Dev who took her to the dance academy with him where he was teaching dance.There she picked up as a dancer.Later Dev entered films as a choreographer.When Roli was confined to the 4 walls of the house Dev brought her out of it and informed her that there has been a sponser who was willing to organise dance shows for her.Since he was in Dubai he could'nt appear before her yet.So se has not seen him yet.All she knows is his name is Mr.Inder Kumar.

Roli was feeling the cool breeze with Dev.
D:Roli...you thanked everyone.But you could'nt thank the most important person properly.Your sponsor.Because you have not seen him.
ROLI:And he was not present at the award function.
D:No Roli.He was present at the award function.But you did'nt see him.
She could'nt believe it:What?He had come?Then why did'nt you tell me?Why did'nt he come to me?
D:Because he told me not to tell it to you.
ROLI:What?
D:But If I keep that secret in me for a long time my heart will break.So today I have to tell you the truth Roli.His name is not Inder Kumar.That name was fake.
ROLI:What?
D:His real name is...Siddhanth Bharadwaj.
Roli was shocked:Siddhanth?


D:Yes Roli.Siddhanth.Once he had come to see me.He did'nt want you to spoil your life wasting your talent.So he decided to sponsor dance shows for you to make society know your talent...to give you fame.I was just helping you by following his instructions.He made me promise not to tell this to you.


Roli was numb due to shock.
D:But now since you are praising your Inder Kumar so much I thought you need to know his real identity.
Tear drops flowed down her eyes.
D:Roli...you love Siddhanth a lot.And Siddhanth also loves you a lot.Then why don't you go back to Siddhanth?Why don't you guys live together.
Roli burst into tears.
ROLI:Dev,you know why I stay away from Siddhanth.There is a solid reason for that.
D:But Roli...
She touched her nuptial chain.
ROLI:I just need this nuptial chain to feel my Siddhanth.
Dev became upset.


Flash back...

Today is the wedding of Siddhanth and Roli.
A few months ago Siddhanth saw Roli's dance performance and got attracted to her.Siddhanth's grand mother Nirmala Devi was happy with his choice.His mother Niharika Bharadwaj and Uncle were not that interested about Siddhanth marrying a middle class girl like Roli.But when Niharika saw Roli's photograph she liked her as she was very pretty.Finally Niharika's brother Rishab also agreed.They all went to Roli's house and fixed the marriage.
Roli was dressed up as a beautiful bride.Suddenly her face became dull.


Her mother Gautami:Roli...what happened?
ROLI:Mumma,new life...new surrounding.I am getting tense.
Gau:Such a silly thing?Even I was scared before marriage.But I got a good husband like your father.Then i realized that it was only my fear.You are getting a loving husband like Siddhanth.Siddhanth is so crazy about you.He did'nt care for our family status.You should be happy about that.

Roli's aunty(Father's sister Padmini):Bhabhi is right.Marriage is beautiful.Being loved by your husband is great.


ROLI:But...
P:Yes Roli.My married life was not smooth as my husband got paralysed in an accident.But his love makes me stand by him always.In that way I am very happy in my married life.
Roli smiled.She was relieved.

Roli was brought to the mandap.

Siddhanth's eyes glowed seeing Roli next to him.

Roli's face blossomed like a flower seeing Siddhanth looking at her lovingly.


Finally Siddhanth made her his by tying a nuptial chain around her neck.She was deeply engrossed in that blissful moment.


She said in her mind:Now onwards this nuptial chain will be a part of my body forever.
Siddhanth and Roli were very happy.



At the moment of departure Roli burst into tears.Her father Mohindar Handa wiped her tears.
M:Roli...this is the beginning of a beautiful life of love.You should smile and go.Don't shed tears.
He looked at Siddhanth:Damadji...please take care of my daughter.
Siddhanth:Papaji...Roli is my life.I will take care of my life.
Mohindar hugged Siddhanth and Roli.Roli looked at Siddhanth emotionally.Siddhanth's eyes were fully on Roli.


Roli went away in Siddhanth's car.Along with Mohindar and Gautami Dev also shed tears silently.Nobody knew that he was loving Roli secretly.


Grah Pravesh...
Nirmala Devi recieved them.
When Roli put her foot inside the Bharadwaj Mansion itself they heard a cry.
Rishab had a sudden heart attack.
Niharika:Bhai...
Siddhanth:Mamaji...
Everyonewas shocked.
Niharika held Rishab:Wht happened Bhai?
R:Take me to our cousin Jatin's hospital.Otherwise I will die.
N:My God!What bad omen is this?When the new daughter in law entered itself the members are in danger.
Roli was shattered.She felt that her head was spinning.


But she controlled herself.

Siddhanth:Mom,why are you blaming Roli unnecessarily?
N:I just said so out of my frustration.


Nirmala:It's not the time to argue.Take Rishab to the hospital immediately.
They rushed to the hospital with Rishab.Roli and Nirmala stayed there itself.

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arisharosid20 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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First fall thank u converting in my request u know we are craving for rosid so much.. About concept looking interesting..
Roli won price.. So dev revealed about Sid. .
Flashback Rosid married then what happens why nirmla say that really can't wait update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting n different story... looking forward to read next updates... pls update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome start so rosid are married but not living together I think may be because of that upshaguni thing or its sid mother & her brother plan as roli is from middle class well don't know but eager to know what happened in Rosid past loved the update sid helping roli by sponsoring her dance shows both love each other so much then what happened that they are not together waiting for next eagerly update soon &,sorry for late cmnt busy in campaign
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting concept yaar. So rosid are married but not living together because of that stupid upshaguni things ufff. Great update dear. Waiting for nxt. Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start dear...so rosid are married but not living together...because of that upshaguni thing or its sid mother & her brother plan as roli is from middle class...
Looking forward to read next update...& thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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1st of all...all the best for this ff dear...!!!!the update is soo good..again a very refreshening concept...loved the update...the start of the ff itself is very interesting...loved it soo much...update soon dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved Dev & Roli's friendship. Siddhanth faked his identity to sponsor a dance competition for Roli so she can make a name for herself. The flashback was very much shocking. Siddhanth decided to marry Roli to which Niharika & Rishab hesitated but accepted it after seeing her pic. Roli is nervous on her wedding day. Loved her bonding with her mother. Poor Roli. Niharika blamed her for Rishab's heart attack. Hope Roli & Sidhanth reunite
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awesome start...interesting concept...roli is an dancer n sid her sponsor...flashback scened rosid are married but not living together...loved this update...eagerly waiting for next dear and thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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as always, I'm up with an apology for being late. I haven't watched the movie n have no idea about it but I'm glad u r working based on a malayalam movie. was glad to see Roli achieving n Dev supporting her but didn't know that there is a painful story in background. Their love is way too strong n may be that's y Sid sponsored her being under wraps. Such a sweetheart he is! I seriously love him. so rosid was married by everyones consent. but why do I feel that the attack was a drama by his mom n uncle as uncle asked her to take him to their cousin's hospital. whatever I feel that the bad omen thing became a bad omen in RoSid life. thanks for writing this ss n ya, looking forward for next

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