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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
don't say sorry friend.thanks for the lovely comment. it is not based on any movie.it's inspired by a novel which was later made into a serial.but only the theme is same.

Originally posted by: RoshniMenon88

as always, I'm up with an apology for being late. I haven't watched the movie n have no idea about it but I'm glad u r working based on a malayalam movie. was glad to see Roli achieving n Dev supporting her but didn't know that there is a painful story in background. Their love is way too strong n may be that's y Sid sponsored her being under wraps. Such a sweetheart he is! I seriously love him. so rosid was married by everyones consent. but why do I feel that the attack was a drama by his mom n uncle as uncle asked her to take him to their cousin's hospital. whatever I feel that the bad omen thing became a bad omen in RoSid life. thanks for writing this ss n ya, looking forward for next

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanx for penning down this amazing story on rosid I love the concept and all but I think all this heart attack is a drama hope u update it very soon can't wait for the suspense to end
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Mangalsuthra Nuptial chain Part 2

Dedicated to Ayesha Kapoor who wants me to update this.


Roli was very upset.
Nirmala:Roli beta!
Roli's eyes were wet:Dadimaa,if something happens to Mamaji...
NIRMALA:Nothing bad will happen to Rishab as Go can never let dangerous things happen on auspicious occasion like marriage.
ROLI:But suddenly at the time of grahpravesh itself Mamaji fell sick.
NIRMALA:Roli,don't mind what they say.It has nothing to do with you.He had to fall sick at that moment.That's all.Don't blame yourself for that.
ROLI:Dadimaa...
Roli hugged Nirmala.

Rishab got admitted to the hospital.After some time Dr.Jatin came:Now Rishab is out of danger.
Sid and Niharika were relieved.

Morning...
Roli had slept off in the bedroom without changing her bridal attire.
Nirmala came:Roli...
Roli woke up:Dadimaa...
NIRMALA:There is a happy news.Rishab is fine now.They will be coming today itself.
Roli was very happy.
Roli changed her clothes and went to the kitchen.
After some time Nirmala came:What is the new bride doing in the kitchen on the very second day itself?


ROLI:I thought I would make breakfast.
NIRMALA:But why?Servants are there.
ROLI:But I want to cook something specially.
Nirmala smiled:That's good.Is your cooking over?
ROLI:Yes.
NIRMALA:Then let me taste it.
ROLI:I will serve.
Roli served her food.


Nirmala ate it.
NIRMALA:Wow!After a long time I had a very good breakfast.
Roli smiled.
NIRMALA:Now let others also eat it.They will be flattered.
Roli smiled.

Rishab,Niharika and Sid arrived.Nirmala and Roli were very happy.Sid was happy to see Roli.
NIRMALA:We are so happy that you are alright Rishab.
Rishab:Auntiji...I feel very hungry.
NIRMALA:Break fast is ready.You can start eating.
Niharika:Bhai,change your clothes now.After that we will have breakfast.
R:Oh ok...
SID:I will also change and come.
Sid and Roli went to the bedroom.Sid changed his clothes.
Sid looked at her softly.
SID:I am sorry Roli.On wedding night I could'nt be with you.
ROLI:It's ok Siddanthji.You went out for a purpose.And thank God...mamaji is alright now.
SID:Don't call me Siddanthji.Call me Sid.
Her lips shivered:Siii...
SID:Sid.
ROLI:Sii...Sid.
They both smiled.
He held her close to him.
She breathed heavily.


SID:I won't make you sad like yesterday anymore.
She blushed.


They all sat for break fast.
Sid:Roli,did you have break fast?
Nirmala:Roli did'nt eat anything.I had break fast.
SID:Why did'nt you hve break fast Roli?
ROLI:I thought I will eat along with you.
SID:Don't wait for me Roli.You should have food on time.Sometimes I won't be able to make it on time.That does'nt mean you have to starve.Now sit and have with me.
Roli smiled.
She sat near Sid.
Rishab's face became dull.
They started having break fast.
R:Wow!Today Nakul made unusual breakfast.
SID:Right.Very tasty.I have not eaten such a nice break fast recently.
Roli smiled.Nirmala smiled:It is not made by Nakul.It is made by Roli specially for us.
Sid was surprised:Roli...you are so good.
Roli blushed.
Rishab's face became dull.

Niharika gave a confused look.
Suddenly Rishab stopped eating.
R:If it is made by Roli I am not eating it.
They were shocked.
N:Why bhai?
R:What if I fall sick again eating this?
All were shocked.
Roli felt upset.
Sid:What do you mean?Why should you fall sick eating the food cooked by Roli?Is it poisonous?
R:I am not saying that it's poisonous.But since when she entered this house itself I fell sick I can fall sick again if I eat this.
Roli was shattered.
Sid got angry:Mamaji...stop this nonsense.You just had a minor attack.For that you are making a big fuss?
R:Sid...for the first time I had attack.I did'nt have any problem till now.Then how did it happen at the time of her entry itself?
Roli's tears rolled down her cheeks.
Nirmala:Rishab!Can you please keep quiet?
Niharika:Bhai...I think you are over reacting.
R:No Sweety(Niharika's pet name)...do you know why I opposed Sid and Roli's marriage?Because I had looked into their horoscope and there were only problems.But I ignored it as Sid was adamant about marrying Roli.That's why I did'nt tell this to anyone.
Everyone was shocked.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
mere pagli ki request...superbb update...!!!!loved it..hope everything clears soon...update soon dear...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Awesome update. Oh ayesha's request. Great work yaar. Waiting for nxt.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
First of all Thank you so much for update & thanks for dedicate this part to me...& Awesome update dear...Rosid conversation was nice...but I hate Rishab...let's see what happend???Eagerly waiting for next update.
Edited by ayeshakapoor - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
nice update... luvd rosid cute scene n the way sid supporting roli,it was really cute... n rishab,what is his problem with roli, is it something like he wanted sid to get married with the girl of his choice or may be with his own daughter, i don't know he had any daughter or not but my stupid brain n it's stupid guess... well waiting fr next... update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Thx 4 the detailed comment.In north India cousin marriages do not happen.So even if Mamaji has a daughter she will be considered as Sid's sister😛

Originally posted by: manasa5124

nice update... luvd rosid cute scene n the way sid supporting roli,it was really cute... n rishab,what is his problem with roli, is it something like he wanted sid to get married with the girl of his choice or may be with his own daughter, i don't know he had any daughter or not but my stupid brain n it's stupid guess... well waiting fr next... update soon...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thx 4 the detailed comment.In north India cousin marriages do not happen.So even if Mamaji has a daughter she will be considered as Sid's sister😛




my stupid guess😆 i'm a south indian n cousin marriages are very common here so i thought like that...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
This uncle is so bad...hopefully nothing bad will happen

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