||Share Your Pain|| An AvNeil OS - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was well written 👏 Do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Payal!
If I'm not mistaken, we have spoken before right? I am almost certain I recognize your ID. I'm Hinal btw, if that helps 😆

Anyway, coming back to the OS, it was very well written! The way you expressed their thoughts and emotions was very effortless! Both of them are scared to lose each other, and I'm glad that was out in the open. Which brings me to the ending - just perfect!!

It was a short OS, but you conveyed so many emotions with it! Great job with the OS!

I hope to read more of your stories!! 😳

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