AvNeil-Vidyut RS: Unbridled ~ Part 3a Updated (06-12-2017)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow Ashi am ur FF fan. U r genius in writing story. Loved part 1

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You are up with new story This one was cool . I love adventures 😆 Neil's guards will break and he is gonna be more mad at Juhi . Badly wanted this to happen on screen but kismat itni achi nahi hai .🥱 Will wait for the next !
Juhi woman deserves whatever she got from Neil and even more
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Oh god Vidyut is back for taking Mishti and revenge from them
Superb update
Continue soon
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Wow super vidyuth targeting avni👏 loved it
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Bookmarking.

You write exceptionally well and you definitely have a good hold over words and portrayal of emotions. I am definitely gonna enjoying reading this because I am all up for some tashanbaazi kinda stuff. Vidyut is a character that can be loved inspite of being a villain. He spices up the content.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Keep writing.
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Superb,u r amazing.aare koi juhi ko maro.neil jaldi aao.waiting for ur next update.continue soon.
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Avni itni jaldi kidnap ho gayi!:( Aage ke story mein us see bhi thoda action karvao please! Even in the show I would have liked to see her help in the action scenes. Jab Ali aur Neil vidyut se fight Kar rahe the avni had full opportunity to go and whack vidyut on his head from behind! That would've been nice! Anyway it was not like she did any first aid for mishti or anything...but obviously aisa serial me definitely nahi dikhayenge kyunki action ke liye 2 hero Hain! But avnis supposed to be a strong fearless girl...mere hisaab se uski daring or mainly uski presence of mind ko zyada dikhana chahiye in the show...she's not an ablanaari, she's a fighter! But show mein hopes nahi Hai toh FF mein hi sahi:)

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