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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 50

(after a little teasing and fun Jalal Jodha Abdul Salima goes to sit on mandap where priest were chanting mantra and from bride side Ajit mom dad fulfill the ritual which make everyone happy and at last they get married than they goes to have food).

Siya said : now tell us what gift you both are going to give them.

Jalal said : just have little more patience guys you will know soon.

Manvi said : okay than we will wait to know.

Abdul said : hey kids what happen why you all look sad I'd there something wrong.

Sunny said : you both are bad now you both will take our girlfriend with you and will never let them meet us isn't it.

Vishal said : yes they always come to meet us on weekends but for the time they met you both they hardly come to meet us and if they come than to you both didn't let them spend time with us.

Sunny said : and now you both get Married to them than they will definitely forget us.

Samrat said : hey kids that never happen they love you they will never forget you all.

Sanaya said : and don't be sad we all come to meet you all to.

Vishal said : you all will come what about them.

Jalal said : I think you all really need to know our gift now.

Abdul said : hack remember you ask in evening who buy the house which is situated front of this orphanage.

Jack said : yes I ask it and you know it is decorated to but what's the connection between your gift and that question.

Jalal said : as we all are aware how much both sister love each other and there attachment for kids to can't ignore right so they all can stay with each other after marriage and can meet kids often we buy that house and from there we will start our new life we all will stay there as family now.

(listening Jalal words everyone get happy and shocked and Mirza Shivani started smiling other side Salima Jodha looked at each other than hugged each other in happiness and looked at Jalal Abdul in admiration and love).

Abdul said : and you Mirza don't show your white teeth we are going to live together still you will stay away from Shivani till you both get married get that.

(listening this Mirza face fell and seeing his reaction everyone started laughing).

Sunny said : woe you are best it means we will meet them often love you.

(saying this he hugged both Jalal Abdul and other kids to hug him and they to hug them back with love).

Samrat said : you are best guys what a love you have god bless you guys.

commissioner said : proud of you my son you prove it today that you. other are not only best officer but best lover and wonderful human being to i am so proud of you.

his wife Said : learn something from them they are ready to live with each other and you can't even stay happy when my mom come to our home for just weekend.

commissioner said : so what they are youngster and understand each other not like your mom who want me to love you but can't see you red.

(listening this everyone smiled and his wife blush after talking and having fun all goes to there new home to see where commissioner and his wife performed the welcome ritual for married couple and when all of them enter inside they get shocked to see the interior and design furniture everything).

Jalal said : do you guys wanna have tour of our home.

(listening this everyone nodded there head).

Jalal said : okay than come.

(than they started giving them tour of the house making e everyone shocked by there thought and taste.).

Samrat said : how did you both manage alone and from when you both were arranging everything here.

Jalal said : the day we decided to get married we plan for this.

Siya said : there are so many room but everyone get different room for themselves still few are closed why.

Abdul said : well we are 6 people who are going to live so we need four room for our self isn't it as you know I Salima Jalal Jodha will live with each other in one room so other room are for there craft and art room and two room which are attached to bedroom were study or theatre room so whenever we will plan to watch or have fun we will go there.

Jalal said : and when we plan to have fun with you all we will go upstairs as there are big room which may fit for everyone.

Abdul said : and from now on we are just 6 but in future there will 6 people come to isn't it.

Jalal said : so for them the third floor is closed.

Jack said : 6 people more who.

(listening this Jalal Abdul goes to Jodha and Salima and hugged them.

Jalal said : oh come on will not we have our kids in future.

(listening this Salima Jodha Started blushing and Abdul Jalal smirk at them making everyone laugh).

commissioner said : you both are so naughty.

Jalal said : all credit goes to our love sir they are the one who made us naughty.

commissioner wife Said : if parents are like this than how will be both of your kids.

Jalal said : naughty like there mom and smart like there dad simple.

(listening this started laughing and at the end having lots of fun all goes to there home and our married couple goes to there room).

Jalal said : so did you like it.

Jodha said : I love it it's awesome you know I always thought I will have to leave Salima Di but you both make me happy by staying at one roof Jalal I love you.

Jalal said : it's not the way to show your love Jaan.

Jodha said : than what's the way to show our love.

Jalal said : let me make you learn now.

(saying this he take her in his arms and laid her on bed and started removing the jewellery from her body gently and kissed on her both eyes than nose cheek lips forehead lovingly).

Jalal said : if you want me to stop and not ready so tell me Jaan I will understand you need time.

(listening this she just looks at him with desire and passion).

Jalal said : I can see that in your eyes that you want me to continue but I want to hear from you.

Jodha said : I want you Jalal I want you to love me like there is no tomorrow I want you to make me your by every way. love me Jalal make me yours.

(and listening this soon he removed his dress and her and both started kissing each other will ful passion and love and whole night they make love with each other and become two body one soul and other side).

Abdul said : what are you thinking darling.

Salima said : that what I did good in my life to get you as my love my husband who understand my emotions respect my decision.

Abdul said : well we will think about that later but now I want to do something else.

Salima said : and what is that.

Abdul said : let me show you.

(with this he started kissing her and soon they to get lost in each other desire and covering themselves in blanket take the marriage at another level by becoming one other side Mirza and Shivani were sitting in garden).

Mirza said : what do you think about that gift Shivani which bro give our Bhabhi.

Shivani said : I don't know I mean it was there way to show how much they love each other how much they understand each other and how much there loved ones mean to them it was hell shocking for me that they can gift them like this.

Mirza said : you are right anyway it's good for us to now we can see each other daily isn't it.

Shivani said : yes but now it's really late and I am hell tired so good night Mirza.

Mirza said : good night have sweet dreams Shivani.

(than both of them goes to there room and slept peacefully next morning Jalal wake-up and tried to get but than he felt some weight on his chest so he looked at there and saw Jodha sleeping on him while hugging him tightly and her hair were covering her face so he removed them by keeping them aside and looked at her lovingly).

Jalal said : what can I ask more from you god you given me everything i can ever ask.

(than suddenly he looked at his watch and saw its seven now so he carefully without waking her up move aside and was going to freshen up when he fell on bed by tight pull by Jodha).

Jodha said : so my hot hubby where are you going leaving me alone.

Jalal said : for freshen up I didn't mean to wake you up.

Jodha said : you know I can't sleep when I get up for once isn't it.

Jalal said : yes I know so.

Jodha said : so why not we freshen up and have bath together hubby.

Jalal said : well I don't want to late for work neither you isn't it so Better we plan this bath on weekend what say.

Jodha said : you are right okay than you go and freshen up.

(listening this Jalal goes to freshen up and Jodha goes to another room to freshen up and after that both get ready and come downstairs and saw Salima and Abdul were arranging breakfast on table).

Jodha said : good morning Di and jiju.

Salima said : good morning Little one and Jalal.

Jalal said : good morning everyone where is my devil brother and sister.

Abdul said : good morning and he is sleeping and Shivani is getting ready.

Jalal said : okay than I am going to wake him up.

(saying this he goes to wake him up and enter in his room saw him sleeping while hugging pillow like toy so he goes to him and pulled the blanket of from him and snatch the pillow).

Jalal said : wake up Sleepy head you have office to go wake up.

Mirza said : let me sleep for five minutes more please.

(Jalal tried every way but no use so at the end he take him in his arms and goes to bathroom and laid him on bathtub and on the normal water tap which make him wet and he get up hurriedly).

Mirza said : what's wrong Bhai why you always do that and you are in uniform it means are you going police station oh god Bhai just yesterday you get Married at least take a day of today.

Jalal said : you have just 15 minutes to get ready come downstairs for breakfast.

(saying this he goes out of the room and goes downstairs and sit besides Jodha and she serve him breakfast Salima to serve Breakfast to Abdul and than Shivani and Mirza come and sit besides each other and Jodha Salima serve then to and than all of them started having Breakfast).

Shivani said : how was your night Bhai.

Mirza said : yes bro tell us what you and Bhabhi did at night.

Jalal said : our night was peaceful why did you ask.

Mirza said : peaceful it means full of love isn't it.

Abdul said : maybe you are right now keep your mouth shut and have breakfast.

(than after having Breakfast Jalal Jodha Abdul Salima Mirza Shivani sit on there bike with each other and goes to there office first than Jalal Abdul left to police station after kissing there love and when they reach police station there other officer get surprise).

Vikas said : sir you here.

Abdul said : why didn't we need here.

Kareem said : no sit it's not like that I mean just yesterday you both married and today you both are here so just.

Jalal said : for personal reasons we already take one week of isn't it so now we are here that to by our live permission so now get us the latest case file which we have to work in 5 minutes .

Vikas said : okay sir.

(saluting both of there senior they both goes to get file and soon all get busy like this they both perform there duty as officer and at home give lot of time to there love spend there weekend with kids and friends going out for shopping funfair movie match or race was part of there fun but still they do there job perfectly to Jodha Salima never let them down always stand by there side give there support whenever they need and like Jalal Abdul promise them they will always choose there profession first they did which makes there love feel proud on them).

(so my lovely reader and friends her I end my this simple story thank you all for encouraging and supporting me by commenting and liking this not so good story of mine love you all because without you all I will never be able to complete this or write further a very special thanks to you all I know the ending is not very good but I don't get any other way to end this so here it's end and I hope you all like this to and from now I will focus on my other two story and I hope you all will like that and always encourage me by commenting on that once again thank you very much for reading this story of mine thank you for making me your friend thank you do much guys).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks dear for comment.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Super Rashmi...The gift by Jalal and Abdul is very Beautiful..
Just Wow...How understandable they are...
So all are living under one roof...
Jalal and Jodha so romantic moments between them..
Abdul and salima lovable...
Jalal and Mirza moments are cute...
Beautiful ending for ur beautiful story dear...Love it...
A simple yet lovable story with the different plot...
Thanks for this story of ur's in AkDha land...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Super Rashmi...The gift by Jalal and Abdul is very Beautiful..

Just Wow...How understandable they are...
So all are living under one roof...
Jalal and Jodha so romantic moments between them..
Abdul and salima lovable...
Jalal and Mirza moments are cute...
Beautiful ending for ur beautiful story dear...Love it...
A simple yet lovable story with the different plot...
Thanks for this story of ur's in AkDha land...

thank you dear for this wonderful comment I will always feel glad to written this story as I got many friends here like you and many more and that's all credit goes to you guys anyway I am glad that you like this last chapter to thank you. very much and about your comments I think in any relation most important thing are trust understanding respect and love isn't anyway thank for your comment dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 50...
woww...

finally their journey has reached to a point , where both r one now...😳

liked the way u hv shown it , ja & abdul so understanding planned everything according to the wishes of their love & beautifully surprised them !

no matter ja is madly in love with her but never forgets his commitments so does jo .

also u , u ended it here...why ?

no honeymoon , no kids...ok then write a sweet epilogue giving this couple full time to romance & nothing to worry...😉😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Part 50...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">woww...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">finally their journey has reached to a point , where both r one now...😳</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">liked the way u hv shown it , ja & abdul so understanding planned everything according to the wishes of their love & beautifully surprised them !</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">no matter ja is madly in love with her but never forgets his commitments so does jo .</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">also u , u ended it here...why ?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">no honeymoon , no kids...ok then write a sweet epilogue giving this couple full time to romance & nothing to worry...😉😆</font>

well I think you are right there have to be some epilogue but dear I am not very good on kids or some romance or passionate movement I mean proposal are enough but ... Nevermind i will try but can't promise anyway thanks for such a awesome comment dear it means so much thank you dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

well I think you are right there have to be some epilogue but dear I am not very good on kids or some romance or passionate movement I mean proposal are enough but ... Nevermind i will try but can't promise anyway thanks for such a awesome comment dear it means so much thank you dear.


aww dear worry not u can avoid kids part , & just give a hint about the arrival of another happiness .

i understand dear , but u write well . not too much full passionate romance is necessary though if it comes am more than happy...😉😆 even a subtle one is also lovely & had its own essence !
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Originally posted by: --cute.manasi--



aww dear worry not u can avoid kids part , & just give a hint about the arrival of another happiness .

i understand dear , but u write well . not too much full passionate romance is necessary though if it comes am more than happy...😉😆even a subtle one is also lovely & had its own essence !

okay than I will try for that dear and maybe soon I will write an epilogue regarding this story of mine but it will take time maybe till Wednesday and I promise it will be full of fun anyway thanks for idea dear.
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

okay than I will try for that dear and maybe soon I will write an epilogue regarding this story of mine but it will take time maybe till Wednesday and I promise it will be full of fun anyway thanks for idea dear.


great , thanx a lot .
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing chappies
U ended it 😭

Plz can give an epilogue too

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