Moving to Mumbai : Advni FF , The Reasonable Move we never got!!! - Page 5

Originally posted by: missreddy7

Oh My Chitra!! :)

Well Well...What do we have here? Have I created a FF sprouting monster? Not the scary beasty one with horns of course. More like a bubbly cute munchkin! HAHAHA! Now that you have begun this bandwagon of writing from your pure imagination, I want you to never stop! What did I say, we readers are greedy! We want more and more and more!

Coming to this wonderful creativeness of yours, I LOVED it! How could I not? Hotwa doing action, count me in!! His possessiveness was amazingly written! Indrani is a pig as always but Rituji is smoking hot! I'm sort of in a love/hate situation with Meghana in your FF but I have a lot of issues regarding her character in general. Isnt Nani the best? I hope she is one of those character that don't get ruined ever!! I love old cupids! The best !

What next then? You must write more! I will take this platform and shamelessly request. Can you write a humour FF? So that my ribs can hurt from laughing? Pretty Please! I can give you a virtual cake with a cherry on top? I know you can do it! Gooo CHITRAA!!!!!

Until next time (I know there will be another one...im psychic you see?)

Much Love
Vinu xx

New concept. Lovef it. Update soon👏

i wish this had a sequel
where indrani comes to mumbai
to harm chandni again
then we may get a grand face off
but u can do that in your current ff too😳

Chitra, this was a beautiful FF . How had I missed it before ??

chitra i know u will write humor well too

this was so good. pleased do write soon more on Advni

ahh what punches Advay gave PP here

I loved it so much. plz update soon dear