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Posted: 7 years ago
Poor geet so lost and angry. She feels it is her right to tell maan off and he should bear it and try further. What's she does she not realize is this is MSKs way off bringing geet back to him
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice pt
geet Annie making fun of mahi all said she's so naive than geet struggling with luggage Annie
eye maan to help geet and maan geet lost in each other and all making fun
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! update soon

yeah
thanks for that
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Originally posted by: priya_21

loved it😛😉

maan jaa rha hao
geet karib aa rhi hai

thank you
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Waiting for next please update soon
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Originally posted by: hira2010

Waiting for next please update soon

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Part 29

All journey goes in silent yash wants to give geet a chance for think about maan and her realtion, they reached Sharma uncle's home priya Sharma uncle's daughter welcome them warm heartdily and mingle them after relaxing they all sit in hall and have a chat priya asked geet

Geet di ap kay husband kya naam hy unka?

All of them alert on her question and looked towards geet to speak

Maan...!

Oh haan maan bhai wo nhi aye ap kay sath?

Geet once looked towards yash and he blinked to assure her they are with her

Nhi wo unko kuch kaam tha...

Arey kyun unko apni biwi aur bachey kay sath trip nhi enjoy krna tha??

Nhi aisi baat nhi hy bus unki kuch important meeting thi...

Chalein koi baat nhi

Acha yeh batayen ap unko miss to kr rhi hoon gi??

That question make geet nervous she didn't have any reply she again looked yash but he pretend he is talking with Sharma unlce but in mind he said

Very good priya shi jaa rhi ho keep going nishana shi lag raha hy

Geet is looking towards her rescue but she is actually busy to make ayush eat something then she saw annie, annie smiled and said

Haan geet priya tum sy kuch poch rhi hy usko jawab to dy do

She glared annie and said

Haan priya kya keh rhi ho?

Ma poch rhi thi ap maan bhai ko miss to kr rhi hoon gi?

And winked to annie

Haan thora sa...

She lied and thought

Kya ma ne sach ma jhoot bola ya ma sach ma maan ko miss kr rhi hoon arey nhi ma bhi kya soch rhi hoon ma kyun maan ko miss krn gi

Next morning they all plan for their day first they spent good time in park and some random places and now they are planning for shopping geet is so much excited for shopping that's her favourite hobby they reached mall and start their shopping after few minutes geet said

Mjh iss taraf kuch pasand nhi arha mjh doosri side jana hy

Tumhein kab koi cheez jldi pasand ati hy jab take k ghanta na laga lo kuch leti bhi ho

Annie replied

Aisa nhi hy kuch cheezien mjh foran pasand ajati hain acha ab marey sath chalo na

Na baba ma to thak gyi hoon ma nhi ja rhi tum bhi aisa karo kisi aur din kr lena abhi hum sab ghar chaltey hain

Plz annie plz mjh abhi jana hy

Geet annie shi keh rhi hy aur kya tum tired nhi ho kab sy ayush ko li hyi ho dekho mjh to lag raha hy usko bhi neend arhi hy

Bhabi bus kuch dair I promise jldi kr loon gi

Nhi bus bht ho gya ab ghar chalo

Acha aisa krety hain ma geet kay sath chali jati hoon ap jab tak caf ma baith jayen hum jaldi ajyen gy

Haan yeh idea acha hy ab to khush hy tu?

Yash asked

Haan yeh shi hy

Acha aisa karo ayush ko simran bhabi ko dey do hum isko ley jatey hain

Ok

Aur ek request hy ziada time mat lagana mjh umeed to nhi hy kyun kay shopping ki ek aur shoqeen priya tumharey sath hy magr phir bhi jldi ke lena aj thand bhi bht hy raat ka khana ghar py khayen gy

Simran looked them one by one

Jo hokum sarkar!!

Simran bhabi is kay hokum sarkar kheney ma aur krney ma bht difference hy

yash added

bht khoob...acha to phr aisa krtey hain mahi bhabi ap humarey sath chalye

na baba na...bilkul nhi

she holds her ears

to yun kahyen na hubby ko akela nhi chorna chahtin kahin kisi haseena kay chakkar ma na uljh jayen

she teased her

yash bhai! Aisa krtey hain hum phele yahan sy chaltey hain kyun kay yeh start ho gyi to chup krana mushkil ho jye ga

annie said on which geet make face and said

ok baba hum ja rhy hain

She gives ayush to simran bhabi and then kiss on his cheeks

Bye baby mamma abhi thori dair ma ati hy

Then geet and priya with her maid went to other side of the mall and everyone left for caf.geet saw some dresses but didn't like them then she saw a dress on opposite shop she said to priya

Priya ma wo samney wali shop ma ja rhi hoon tum yeh ly lo to wahin ajana

She goes there and then she saw a rust and dark green cuhuridaar she touched that fabric but suddenly some voices cathch her attention there is a couple arguing on dress she looked them how cutely they argued for their choice and then someone tapped her shoulder she truned and saw maan is standing right behind her she shocked and asked

ap yahan? ap yahan kya kr rhy hain?

football khel rha hn geet

ao tum bhi khelo..

maan!!!

baba shopping krney aya hoon aur kya...

Kya hoa kuch ley nhi rehin?

Nhi wo bus lena hi tha...

Acha chalo ma tumhari help krta hoon

Ap...ap meri help krein gy?

Haan na kyun nhi kr skta kya?

acha yeh dekho yeh lime wala dress kitna acha lagey ga tum pr

Nhi mjh wo rust wala lena hy

Arey pr yeh bhi to dekho mjh lagta hy yeh ziada acha lagey ga

Nhi maan apko nhi pata mjh wo rust wala lena hy

Pr mjh to yeh lime wala acha lag raha hy na yeh hi lo

ma yeh nhi loon gi ma apni pasand ka loon gi

Acha to yeh wala ley lo

He take a short dress

Yehh...ap chahtey hain ma yeh loon

Haan na jab yeh pheno gi to kitni hot lago gi and winked her

Kya kaha ap ne hot???

Haan na sirf hot hi nhi bht sexy bhi lago gi my sexy girl!!

Maan ap pagal ho gye hain ma yeh nhi loon gi

Haan tum yeh carry kr hi nhi sktin wo dekho wo sales girl us short dress ma kitni hot lag rhi hy he pointed a girl

Chi...kitni buri lag rhi hy ek min ap marey hotey hoaye dosri larkion ko dektey hain and hit his arm

Ouch geet kya kr rhi ho

Yeh to kuch bhi nhi hy abhi batati hoon apko wo hot hy na and she hit him again he is laughing on that and then holds her hands and pull her towards him and and then holds her waist with one hand and with other hand he touched her cheeks lovingly which makes her blushed

Maan yeh kya kr rhy hain ap?

Sshhh...meri biwi sy best koi nhi hy smjhin

Hmmm

Kya hmmm geet ma kab sy awaz dey rhi hoon kahan khoyi hyi ho???

Priya's voice makes her back

Hunh...

She then looks here and there but maan is not there

Kya?

Kya... kya... ho kahan tum?

Nhi kahin nhi chalo ab chaltey hain

Kuch lena nhi hy tumhein?

Yahan sy nhi chalo

Geet thought to kya yeh mera dream tha maan yahan nhi they...kya ma chahti thi kay maan yahan hoon chaddo geet tum aj kal maan kay barey ma kuch ziada hi soch rhi ho

She saw priya talking on phone she asked

Kis ka phone tha?

Papa ka tha wo bhi humein join kr rhy hain bus phonchney waley hain

After few minutes priya said

Geet yaar ma bht thak gyi hoon mjh sy chala bhi nhi ja raha papa pata nhi kahan hain ab tak nhi aye chalo hum bhi caf chaltey hain wahin call kr lein gy unko

Ok chalo

Then she saw upwards and said

Arey priya wo rhy uncle shayad humein hi dhoond rhy hain ek kaam karo tum bht thak gyi ho tum caf ki taraf chalo ma uncle kay sath ati hon

Haan yeh theek hy

And then priya leave and geet goes towards upper floor of mall priya reached towards caf and everyone meets at the door of caf

Oh...shukar hy aj ki date ma tu logon ki shopping complete hyi..

Annied thanked god and asked

Priya! Geet kahan hy?

Wo papa agye thy to wo unkey sath arhi hy ma thak gyi thi is lye agayi

Haan to jab itni shopping karo gi to tired to ho gi chalo bus ab uncle aur geet ajyen to hum ghar chaltey hain

Simran said and then they heard a blast

Booommm!!!!!


sorry for mistakes...

Edited by nehaa9 - 7 years ago

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