RiKara OS : Jeeju-Saali Duology : Forbidden Love (Completed) - Page 3

Originally posted by: music1

Good one !!

thank you😛

Originally posted by: Divi.C

I just love your longgg os's... Just continue with these...

thank you hun... so glad u like long stories... i tend to write long stories😳

Originally posted by: -Aarfa-

I read it one go..

Couldn't stop obviously because it was a roller coaster ride indeed😊

You pulled it off flawlessly dear..

The transformation from jeeju to Omkaara was great❤️

You write really well.

Keep it up!! 👍🏼

thank you so much dear... so glad u enjoyed it😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit

I felt bad at first to read jeeju saali Love story...

But became so emotional while going down...& i also guessed svety might be having an affair, but didn't think with kaali😆

Was so nice & waiting for next one...

hehehehe there aren't many villains in RiKara's life other than KT, Svets and Bua Ma... so have to make do with them😆... thank you dear😃

Originally posted by: loveispure

Love it

thank you😛

Originally posted by: maivelli

It was a nice story, even though the subject was a bit, m not comfortable with still the story depiction was so apt

thank you dear for reading an uncomfortable theme😛... so happy, you weren't offended

Originally posted by: GinniAARAFAN

Good one

thank you😃

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb os di

Loved it

thank you hun😛😛

Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Awesome story 👍🏼

loved it...

thank you dear😃😃😃

Originally posted by: lizzy110

your OS's are becoming my life! aah absolutely beautiful

awww that is so sweet hun.. thank you so much🤗

Originally posted by: sree10

BEAUTIFUL.And i wll scream this out from rooftops. What a story. Loved both Om and Gauri. Love you

Thanks

awww thank you so much dear... so glad u liked it so much... means a lot... when i first wrote it, i was a little sceptical on whether ppl wud like it😛.. love ya too🤗

Originally posted by: Rumadiv

Dear Kuku, Hi Divya😛

First of all thanks for choosing one of my favorite song and my native ooty 😊 😊 aww u r from Ooty... used to go there when i was a kid... i love this song too... specially the way Aravin Swamy renders it❤️. I liked the way story proceeded. Ri just din think or take care about others and did wat she felt. Om deserved someone who put him above others.. so Ri had to be like that😳Svetlana deserved tat punishment. But still she din change. I doubt she will ever change But Jhanvi n Tej handled the situation in a matured way. Finally its nice to see Om and Ri together. Hope u write more stories. thank you dear.. In Shaa Allah, will try to write more😃

With love, love ya
Divya

Originally posted by: Mjush95a

Superb story line the all sequencea look like real one!!

thank you so much dear😃

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

Awesome OS

It was little difficult to imagine Svetlana and Gauri as sisters

But rest matched perfectly

How Gauri helped him uncover Svetlana's truth

Only Gauri & Omkara were fools

They didn't know anything going on

i just didn't know, who else to make a vamp 😆

I thought Svetlana would easily give divorce

But she dragged things unnecessarily

Even getting Gauri in the mess

She was nervous the truth might come out

But she handled well

svet is too selfish... but Gauri stood for Om😳

They surely had strong feelings

Gauri couldn't keep herself away for long

Svetlana coming back was shock

But Jhanvi handled things fantastically

Pinky & Shakti couldn't do anything

Except get the married

hehehe yeah... things had actually gone out of their hand... rikara did truly love each other😃

Waiting eagerly for the next shot of the series

Update soon

In Shaa Allah... I shud write by next month at least😳

Originally posted by: Brindha87

For the first time I've seen a Tamil song in this forum.

That was great 👏👏👏

The story was awesom and with Happy Ending ⭐️

Thank u for such a lovely story.

i felt the song was apt for them... 😛
thank you so much dear... so glad u liked it😛

Originally posted by: taarey25

Nice

thank you😛

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

Wow this os is very nice

Just loved it...

thank you so much hun😃😃😃

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

such an awesome read! its amazing how emotionally gripping your stories always are! loved it. 👏

thank you so much dear.. that is such a sweet comment... thanks a lot😛

Originally posted by: Aastha02

Hi Lazy,

I read the story ,Hmm But I can only imagine my RISHBALA on it.😉

This story is total a different style for Rikara. Please do continue on it .

Pls also be active there also ..

hi aastha...
hehehe yeah hun it happens😛... don't know wht else to write for this couple hun... they are at their happy ending...
In Shaa Allah will try to be active😛

Originally posted by: sketie

Loved it

Beautiful

thank you so much dear😛

This was lovvveellyyy... You are an amazing writer !

Kuku,

Nice plot...winderful writting...awesime execution of events...

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsemmm story

thank you so much😃

Originally posted by: fariah25

This was lovvveellyyy... You are an amazing writer !

Read it all in one go today and loved it...

Smiled at the mosquito part.. what an irony.. gauri and mosquitoes...omkara seriously needs to protect her from mosquitoes now...😉

U writers help us rikarians survive through all those no rikara days...

Plz continue with the amaazing work !

Lots of luvv !!

❤️

thank you so much fariah.. so glad u enjoyed it
hahahahaha yeah.. Gauri and Mosquitoes😆😆.. Om has a new villain in his life😆
thank you so much dear... so glad u feel so... will try to write more... love ya🤗

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Kuku,

This was absolutely forbidden and sinful but felt so so right. 😳

Amazing work. :-) Enjoyed it immensely. 😳

And are you Tamil? I am one :-)

Hey Priya...
thank you so much for reading this story... so glad u enjoyed it😳
I am a malayali, I watch Tamil movies😛😛

Originally posted by: Aarathi85

Nice plot...winderful writting...awesime execution of events...

thank you so much dear😃😃

Awesome story!!

wonderful story loved it so much.