AvNeil FF: Once in Love (AU) 19th Oct, Chapter 3, Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi everyone! As you would have guessed, my name is Naina and I am new to this wonderful place! I actually never even knew they had a forum for this series until yesterday when I was scrolling through all the lists! I absolutely love the love and friendship of the protagonists in the serial, even though I have only recently started watching it. This is an AU [Alternate Universe] fanfic so I hope you like it and well, without further ado, let's get on with the story!

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CHAPTER 1: THE ONE WITH THE ENCOUNTER

IT WAS DARK OUTSIDE, as Avni sat waiting for her boyfriend to come home. She was getting anxious. Where is he? Why isn't he home yet? She was getting worried for Laksh. He is never late.

That is when the knocking started.

She knew she had to act fast. She had to call the police, or Laksh, or even her family who lived two houses away. But she was frozen. Who would come here at 2 A.M. at night? Laksh had the keys, so he wouldn't knock. Avni looked around as she found a saucepan and an egg. Great idea, Avni. If the potential burglar or kidnapper walks in, just make him an omelette.

The knocking persisted. She slowly started walking towards the door, the saucepan and egg in hand. She was getting anxious by each passing minute as she looked around for any signs of trouble. With her hand on the door knob, she cursed them for not having a hole in the door to look through, and then opened the door about a feet.

"Can I help you?" She said meekly.

"Are you Avni?" A man about her age turned around and her breath caught in her throat. Oh my goodness, this man was like a Greek God. She gulped down the bile rising in her throat and help up the saucepan... and the egg. You can never be too careful, was what her mother always said. Besides, the kidnappers these days are insanely attractive, after all that is how they trap girls.

But not me, she decided.

"The one and the only." Avni laughed nervously. Seriously, though, this was definitely not the time for her humor.

"Extremely sorry for disturbing you at this hour, miss." The gravelly voice replied as big brown eyes settled on hers. "But I am afraid this is a pressing matter."

"Is everything all right? Who are you?"

"Yes, of course, my apologies. Where are my manners?" The man pulls out a card from his back pocket. Or no, it's not a card, it's a police badge. "My name is Neil Khurrana. I am with the police and I have come to ask you some questions."

"Did I do something wrong?"

"No, miss, it's not concerning you."

"Oh my god." The horror hits Avni like a ton of bricks. "Is this about my family?! Are they okay?!"

"This is about your boyfriend."

"My..my boyfriend?" She stutters. Laksh was a hardworking orthodontist, what could he have done to attract the attention of the police?

"You know Lakshya Singh Mehrotra?"

"Yes. You are right, he is my boyfriend." Avni stutters again. "I am confused, officer, did he do something wrong?"

"Miss, your boyfriend is under arrest." Neil leans down on the scared little woman. "For substance abuse."


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I can't believe I was woken in the middle of the night to go to the house of some scared little women who made horrified eyes every time she opened her mouth. I was sleeping so quietly, after a day full of gunshots and arrests, finally at peace, and then this happens.

But damn, if she wasn't the most beautiful.

The way her hair covered her face when she looked down embarrassed. The way her mouth formed the words coming out. The way her nose scrunched up in the most adorable and cutest way when she was confused.

She was breathtaking.

"Follow me." I stepped back and allowed Avni to come out of her house and lock the door. Her boyfriend didn't deserve her. I bet she doesn't have a betraying bone in her body, even after knowing her for less than 10 minutes.

"I'll follow in my own car."

"That is not how it works." Or, correction, that is not how it would work for me.

Ever since I joined duty, I played around, sure, but I promised myself never to get into anything serious. I was barely 26 and I wasn't going to get married until I was at the very least 35. Marriage wasn't a joke, it was a decision that dictated how the rest of your life is going to go, and I wasn't going to make a joke out of it either.

"It isn't?" Again, with the scrunching of the nose. Oh god, this woman will be the end of me. It is not healthy for me to be attracted to a potential partner in crime of the suspect.

"Get in the car, Miss." She complies.

This is going to be a long night.

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To be continued..😃

I hope you liked it. This is going to be a hopefully long FF, but of course, I will only continue if you liked it. Hit 'LIKE' and comment down below if you did. This was a lot of fun writing and I hope I am able to continue.

Lots of love,
Naina




CONTENTS

Page 2 - Chapter 2 : The One With The Interrogation
Page 3 - Chapter 3 : The One With The Second Encounter
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😳
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Eagerly Looking forward for next part
Plz continue 😊
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Amazing start and its very interesting
Continue soon
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Avni has a boyfriend too and he is a jerk .
I could imagine her with egg and saucepan 😆 What if she had attacked Neil as she opens the door for him 😉
Neil is clean bowled with very first meeting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This sounds like a very interesting take on AvNeil's story and I definitely liked your work. Surely am looking forward to this. Update soon! :)
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CHAPTER 2 : THE ONE WITH THE INTERROGATION


Neil sat Avni down on the chair in front of his desk. She was literally shaking, and he couldn't do anything to help. He offered water, she declined. He offered to turn off the AC, she again declined. He was guessing at this point, there was no solace he could possibly provide.

"Can you please tell me, inspector, why I am here?" Oh now she's getting impatient, Neil thought with a smirk. "I would like to go back home as soon as possible."

"No doubt there, Miss." He nodded, shifting through some files and pulling out the papers of the arrest of Lakshya Mehrotra. "Your boyfriend.." He saw her cringe. "...is a drug dealer."

"A drug dealer?" She looks down on the pictures of Lakshya, her boyfriend, handling some deal with a billionaire's watchman. Neil gauged her reaction. "But he.. He is an orthodontist at the childcare clinic not five houses away. He comes home at 8 every night and goes to work at 11. He hasn't been late, ever.." He knows what she is going to say.

"Until now." He finishes for her. "As he was arrested."

"You don't understand, Inspector." She shakes her head stubbornly. "I am sure there has been some misunderstanding. Laksh is a lot of things but never disloyal. He would never do something as absurd as this. Faking.. no. Just no." She stands up. "I would request a lawyer's presence."

"Of course, Miss. But right now, at 2 A.M., I am sure finding your lawyer would be a hassle. I am not questioning you, just telling you the facts."

"Then what is the use of the interrogation?" She says impatiently.

"Please sit down." Neil motions towards the chair. God, when will this be over so I can go home and sleep? She is beautiful and she is so sweet and innocent, like a breath of fresh air, but I really do need my sleep to function well. I can't sit here all night long just for her. Or, who am I kidding, maybe I can.

"Please begin with the questions. I need this to be over as quick as possible."


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"Where were you at the night of 12th September?" The inspector with the gorgeous brown eyes began with the first question, looking up and straight into my eyes. Don't break, Avni.

"Let me think." And she does. How can she remember something that happened more than a month ago? But she remembered that they went to Bali for a vacation around that time. Her family and her.

But not Laksh. He had work, a bitter voice said in her head. But that could mean a lot of things, Avni argued. He is an orthodontist after all, they are quite busy.

"I was on a vacation. In Bali." She cleared her throat.

"All right. And who was with you?" He looked down to the papers. Then up again. "Or, let me be more specific, did Mr. Mehrotra go with you?"

"He had work..."

"No need for further explanation." He shakes his hand in front of Avni's face. He got what he wanted. Now he knew. Avni knew too. Maybe Laksh wasn't as innocent as everyone thought he was.

The questions continued. The handsome inspector continued asking Avni questions, questions like her love life made her flustered, and she almost saw a hint of a smile or a smirk at times on the inspector's face. They finally ended and, checking the clock, it wasn't 10 minutes to four o'clock.

"I believe we have everything we need." Neil got up and so did Avni. For some strange reason, she felt a pang of disappointment. As if she didn't want to leave a freaking police station. If she wasn't bonkers before, she definitely was now. "If you have any questions, please do ask. There shouldn't be any doubts."

"When will he be up for trial?"

"Within 24 hours is what is necessary. Tomorrow morning would be probable." The inspector nodded and gestured towards the door. "If we have any other questions, we would have to call you down to the station again."

"Of course." Was that excitement Avni felt?

Yeah... definitely crazy.

"Thank you so much, Inspector." Avni nodded too and looked into the brown orbs of his.

He smiled and, swear to God, Avni felt her heart stop, "Please. Call me Neil."

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Thank you so much for all the appreciation! I am glad you are liking this FF so far, hope you continue to.

Will Neil and Avni meet again? Is Laksh really guilty?

You will have to find out.😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ah, I certainly hope Avni and Neil do meet again! So I see Avni is getting flustered by our flamboyant supercop. Guess it's time to leave Laksh then, haha! I am loving how fast you updated. Good work again!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you, a ton! 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhavsss

Ah, I certainly hope Avni and Neil do meet again! So I see Avni is getting flustered by our flamboyant supercop. Guess it's time to leave Laksh then, haha! I am loving how fast you updated. Good work again!


Thanks a lot! Oh she is going to leave Laksh all right!😃 I'll update soon enough.

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