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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Chapter 39

Nice update ...
For the 1st time I feel jalal is speaking his heart out...
All are melted with his speech...And for the 1st time felt bad for him... Lovely Lovely..
All become friends with Jalal...I like Abdul's words...Was a friend , is a friend,will be friends...
AJAY is the reason for this...A true friend...
So cute update...

well he is change now so whatever he will do will be his heart wish so it will definitely make you all like his character now and and friends are like that only who always be your side and always make you do right thing isn't it Ajay is best example of true friend seriously Awesome comment dear thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Chapter 40

Awesome update Rashmi...
Totally nice...I Loved the morning group chat among friends...
Wow Veer teasing jalal...most surprising...
Jalal is very smart and he wants to convince Jo by himself... Super...
The most surprising fact is Jo and Ajay heard that chat...
But Jo's reactions?
Father united with kids and the girls.. sweet surprise...

well as they all forgive him and accept him by there hearts so there is no way that they will let him feel alone they will tease him and help him like friends do so it's not very surprising but I understand veer is teasing him is shocked you I just wanted Jalal himself get her forgiveness so I write that and about Jodha reaction it will take time guys after all he hurt Ajay whom she love as brother and no one can forgive the person who hurt there loved ones isn't it so have patience for that dear and about kids and father so they are important in there life so I thought why don't make surprise and I am happy that you all like it thanks dear for such sweet comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: simranjitkaur

Its awsome.. pls add me too ..

okay I will don't worry.
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there is no need to thank infant it will be good for me if I will get many friends here.
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Chapter 41

Father said : uff I thought to give you all surprise by coming to meet you as it was plan by Ajay but I am hurt to see you all in tears you all are not happy.

Jodha said : no father we are so happy to see you all here.

Father said : then why these tears are in your eyes dear you very well know I hate tears in your eyes and look here my little devil to is in tears.
Jodha said : because happiness there are tears in my eyes father I missed you so much father.

Ajay said : and father don't bother about Hitler she have a habit to do drama isn't it she is such a drama queen Hitler.

Priya said : how dare you Monkey to call me Hitler and drama queen you oh god I don't know what to do with this men.

Ajay said : oh my Hitler don't put so much pressure in you useless small brain.

Priya said : you idiot stupid Monkey how dare you call my brain useless stop there I am going to kill you now.

(saying this she run towards him but stop in her track listening Father words).

Father said : you both are such a Joker who can make anyone laugh with there silly act isn't it Jodha.

Jodha said : well you are right father they are such a child they always fight with each other like child and we always enjoy that to much.

Priya said : what the hell you are saying we are Joker father how could you.

Ajay said : yes in fact I can agree if you call her Joker but how can you call a handsome smart hell hot guy like me Joker father.

Priya said : what you handsome smart and hell hot guy oh god how could you think like that about yourself Ajay.

Ajay said : why don't I look smart handsome and hot to you.

Priya said : no way.

Ajay said : okay let me prove you now My Anjel and Love of my life will tell you.

(Saying this he looked at Jodha and Ritu and they looked here and there to avoid his look).

Ajay said : oh hello tell your Hitler friend how am I .

Ritu said : well Ajay I can't say truth and neither I can lie so better you don't ask me about it.

Ajay said : what the ... you are my Love of my life and you can't praise me wow never mind My Anjel will answer it isn't it .

Jodha said : well there is no doubt you are smart and handsome but ...but ...

Ajay said : but what.

Jodha said : but you are stupid joker to Bhai.

(saying this she started laughing her heart out and everyone started laughing to But Ajay get angry and turn his face other side showing that he is angry with Jodha everyone can see his face but not Jodha she saw that and goes to him).

Jodha said : you are angry.

(he just nodded his head in yes but didn't said anything).

Jodha said :I was just joking Bhai please forgive me if I hurt you.

(listening this Ajay smiled but thought to play prank so he in stern voice).

Ajay said : no you disappoint me Angel I will not forgive you.

Jodha said : I am saying sorry to you still you will not forgive me.

Ajay said : no I will not.

Jodha said : if I will hold My ears will you.

(saying this she made sorry face listening and seeing this Ajay get happy but didn't showed to her and again nodded in no).

Jodha said : if I do sit up will you.

(listening this he can't control himself and started laughing and hugged her again everyone started laughing with him seeing that she understood he is making fun of her).

Ajay said : how can I get angry on you my Angel you are so sweet and innocent that a Devil to can't get angry on you then how can I when I love you.

Jodha said : so you were making fun of Me Bhai.

Ajay said : yes but didn't want to hurt you.

Jodha said : well you can't hurt me Bhai and I enjoy this silly fight.

Veer said : well if you both are done with you brother sister love so can we plan what we should do today.

Ajay said : yes we will but first let me Introduce everyone now Father He is Jalal my college friend She is Bakshi his sister and He is Mirza his brother and they are my sister and Brother to he is Abdul and she is his love of life Salima and they both are my Best friends to Kids say hello to them.

(listening this Kids goes to them and hugged all of them tight).

Aditya said :you all look so good and sweet.

Tanya said : we all are happy to meet you will you love us like they do.

Shivam Said : will you all become our best friends to.

Tina said : can we call you all Bhai and Di to like we call them.

(listening this Abdul Salima Jalal Mirza Bakshi sit on there knees and looked at them with smile).

Salima said : we will love you like they love you Kids and we will be glad if you all call us Di or Bhai.

Abdul said : we will love to become friends with you all dear.

Jalal said : and you all are sweet and smart Kids we will love to have you all with us.

Mirza said : you all will be with us then we will have lots of fun what say.

Bakshi said : we will give you gifts to.

Aditya said : thanks so now we all are friends to.

(they all again hugged them then after sometime).

Salima said : we should plan about all the function what say.

Kabir said : good idea so let's go and sit then we will make plan.

(everyone nodded there head in yes and goes to sit on sofa Priya with Veer in one Denny sit between them. Ajay with Ritu Tanya between them Bakshi with Kabir Jahaan sit between them Abdul with Salima Tina sit between them Jalal with Mirza Jaden sit between them Jodha with Father Nikhil sit between them Aditya Sapna Shivam Archna Neha Arpita Seher sit besides each other).

Jahaan said : are we going to plan about birthday party.

Denny said : but who is birthday boy.

(Listening this everyone smiled).

Father said : no there is no birthday boy kids and neither we are planning about Birthday Party we actually we are planning about Wedding function.

Aditya said : it means we will get so much fun.

Shivam said : I saw my friends Sister wedding there I and my friend Dance to and there was many types of food we get to eat father and you know the decoration was awesome.

Tina said : wow it means we will get so much new dress.

Sapna said : yes and lot of sweats to right Father.

Neha said : but who is getting married father.

Father said : well your handsome boy and beautiful Di is going to get married.

Tanya said : wow Di you are going to marry with My Handsome Bhai wow I am so excited to see you in wedding dress Di I am sure you will look beautiful.

Denny said : and My Bhai will look very good in his wedding dress to.

Ajay said : thanks for wonderfull comment but here is one more couple who is going to get married.

Shivam said : and who is that.

Ritu said : Salima and Abdul.

Jaden said : really wow it means we will have double fun.

Jahaan said : yes in fact we will get double gifts now.

Veer said : yes guys you all will have fun and we will give you lot's of gifts to but now let us discuss about function okay.

Tina said : can we suggest you all theme of function.

Kabir said : why not you all are smart and very creative to we will be glad to get some ideas about them of function.

Priya said : but first select the venue.

Veer said : yes where do you both want to get married in your house or in some hotel or some royal palace.

Kabir said : and you all want lavish or simple wedding.

Ajay said : well it will be Ritu choice.

Ritu said : well you know guys I don't have parents like you all but I have my Mama Mami and I am rich to like Ajay because of my Profession but I want simple Wedding in one of My royal Palace because it is there wish to see y marriage there.

Salima said :I don't have problem I to want simple wedding and venue is good to I Saw your palace Ritu and no doubt it is beautiful and the Place to.

Abdul said : how and when did you saw her palace.

Ajay said : well it is in Jaipur and she was gone there for one Music concert and there she saw that and Met Ritu there to.

Abdul said : oh okay there is no problem I agree with her then.

Kabir said : so it's done that we are going there.

Veer said : I wanna go there by train.

Priya said : no I wanna go there by car.

Ajay said : no we will go there by our private Jet and there is no discussion in that.

Jodha said : what happen Bhabhi why you look sad.

Ritu said : nothing it's just that I am tense to meet My Dada Dadi and family who live there.

Priya said : why you should be happy to meet them isn't it.

Ajay said : actually they are very old tradition type they don't believe in love marriage so that's why.

Ritu said : in fact they hate me because of my profession and now after knowing about this how they will react I don't have idea.

Jodha said : don't worry they will be happy to see you happy trust me.

Ritu said : hope so Jodha but I am scared what if they all insult you all and Ajay how will they react after meeting with you all.

Priya said : are you happy and Satisfy with your decision now.

Ritu said : yes there is no doubt in that.

Veer said : then don't worry we will face that and about there disrespecting us so they are elder they have every right to get angry and say anything to us we will not feel bad.

Ajay said : trust me Ritu I will not leave you because of some bade words or disrespect.

Ritu said : thank you all for understanding but there is one more problem you all have to wear
traditional clothes there.


Ajay said : I will manage I can wear that

Abdul said : we boys don't have problem.

Jalal said : I agree.


Kabir said : then I to agree but Bhai I have request can I come there with my Mom.

Ajay said : why not you can in fact without her I am not going to get married.

Jodha said : me to have no problem.

Priya said : what the ... but how will wear types of dress I in my whole life never wear that how will I manage.

Mirza said : and how will I I can't wear that to.

Bakshi said well you both will look good just try for once.

Jahaan said : what we will wear.

Ajay said : we will tell you later Kids and Hitler don't you dare to say no to me you have to wear that.

Priya said : are you ordering me Monkey.

Ajay said : no I am telling you in fact I already got dresses for you all.

Ritu said : what how and when.

Ajay said : when you all girls are doing shopping I was buying some dress for Mother so thought to buy some for you all to as I already knew that you all will buy western cloth only.

(some servants come there with lot of bag and kept them on table and left from there).

Ajay said : here those dress are look you all like or not.

(listening this everyone take bags and open them and saw beautiful dress in it).

Jahaan said : oh god they are for us to they are so cool and good I like it.

Jaden said : yes they are awesome I love it.

Tina said : the color is very light and simple like my choice thank you Bhai.

Jodha said : I love it to they are so beautiful Bhai.

Ritu said : you are best Ajay I love you thank you so much.

Ajay said : thanks for compliment guys but now we will leave from here after half hour .

Kabir said : let me go and get the arrangements for our departure.

Ajay said : no need Kabir I already done that .

(Suddenly they all heard voice of Humayu).

Humayu said : going without us not good.

Ajay said : well you all come great we were not going without you both come and sit with us to.

Kabir said : Mom you come here to wow.

Kabir Mother said : yes Ajay send car to take me here so I come why don't you get happy.

Kabir said : no Mom I am happy to see you here Mom.

Ajay said :now come and sit then after half hour we will go for Jaipur by my Private jet till then let's eat something now.

(while talking they all eat Lunch and after half hour they all goes to Ajay Private jet as Servants already pack there Bag Kids were and other were happy).



Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Me first
Nice one, Jodha Jalal and gang with Kids

Really Ajay n Priya are kids😆
Jodha so cutely manaofies Ajay😃
I am waiting for more Jodha and Jalal
Edited by Rahiramesh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Me first
Nice one, Jodha Jalal and gang with Kids

Really Ajay n Priya are kids😆
Jodha so cutely manaofies Ajay😃
I am waiting for more Jodha and Jalal
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oh thanks for first and fast comment of your and don't worry in upcoming Chapters you will see Jodha Jalal scene to.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Rashmi i like the chenged jalal and you well put up pain of both. his friend family and his love for her worked.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Rashmi i like the chenged jalal and you well put up pain of both. his friend family and his love for her worked.😃

well many people want him change so I did it in fact that is the way how I was going to write my story and I am glad you all like it thanks dear and thanks for comment to.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Update soon


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