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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

can't wait...
Ulfat inki nahi hai inka kasoor...😳

Fitrat meri na kar de inko door 😆

Just kidding, it just popped the moment I read it..
Aj ka update is an out and out fluff!
😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23


Surprise surprise hi rahega...
You guys are gonna love it!
And dil full happy ho jayega!
🤗
On a side note, If you guys haven't heard the song "Hoor" from Hindi Medium by Atif Aslam, please do!😉

ohh sure atif ka hai to I am gonna download it right now...BTW thankyour for surprise and update too in advance...and sorry for annoying you.. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: orion23

Fitrat meri na kar de inko door 😆

Just kidding, it just popped the moment I read it..
Aj ka update is an out and out fluff!
😳

Since when you have started doing spoilers...😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sweksha

ohh sure atif ka hai to I am gonna download it right now...BTW thankyour for surprise and update too in advance...and sorry for annoying you.. 😃

Please don't say that...
You don't annoy me at All!
And you're welcome 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Since when you have started doing spoilers...😉

I took too long na to update ...
So a little something ...
😳
Edited by orion23 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!
Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chotte in every way! ! 😆

provided I'm alive, ...a gust of wind bellows and you hear a random CHOTTE ... I was about to say, ,nahi aisa nahi boltey. ..😆 actual insaan waale feels. ..they ain't characters anymore. .. especially HIM !!

cause cuteness kya hai? Hot is in! And you are hot! And tall!"
Pushkie pie No matter how much i adore you,,I will agree with you !!😛😆

Haha...Kamini Chachi does a Kanta Ben! !
Ladki ke saath!" 🤣
God! This is hilarious! ! 😆

Haye Ram!... #RaminiMoment! 😳

By the way who going to play villain here...circumstances? 😉



Party ready !!! Noor hi Noor !!!

He was so lost in the beauty that he missed a part of what his Dad said...ahaan! !

but she is not mine. Hayo Rabba! !

Suman noticed Shravan's eyes turn upset as he tried hard to mask it with his smile. .. he has some other plans! !
She noticed and I am happy about it... aagey ki aagey dekhtey hain...😃

Raghuvansh Tiwari... I feel he has a vital role play! !

He could allow himself this one night of "Noor" before tomorrow dawned and he reverted to denying his feelings. ❤️

I can allow him this, I can allow myself this one night to bask in his "Noor" before we both go back to being friends at the break of tomorrow. ❤️

Noor Mehfil main aamad se unki,,
Pur Noor hain ye nigahein inki !!
Noor faila hua yoon aaj ki raat hai,,
Noor jo aaj Noor ke saath hain !!

Beautiful beautiful song !!

The update is nothing but 'NOOR' !!
Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
How very obedient of you😆
Thank you 🤗
Star can stay as long as it likes!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update

Comedy, romance n drama...Sab kucch tha isme...
Pushkar toh bhaii namuna hai...Shravan bhi kam nahi hai...Bichare ka perfume swaha ho gaya😆
Chachi toh hilarious hai...Pushkar tharki hai🤣

Rmanath is fab here👍🏼...Thank God for that...
Oho...Shravan is smitten by his Sumo...But woh toh ziddi hai...Manega nahi...Chalo koi nahi...Hum wait karlenge
After all sabr ka phal mittha hota hai...

Thanks for the pm Zoya

Love, Sidhi
Edited by Ivvy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yedi is here with her RES!!!!

****
Unres
I resed on 13th Oct!
😲 😲
Yikes!!!!
This is the longest one!
*Muh Chupaaying*



Zyaada bakwaas nahi karti ha..
seedhe Upi pe aate..As usual ha😆

Zealous si Zoya🤗

Noor...Ye title kaha se laate chun chun ke?
And the way they are justified in every update!⭐️

Pushkie and Shravan..the cutest duo ever!!
Lamp Post..Sumo ka asar dikh ra😆

Arey I so love it when Shravan calls him Chotte..But jealousy!
#SiblingThing
Chote to hai n rahega!

Old people stuff😆
A 60 year old Pushkie Pie..🤣
Aaye haaye ye to imagination mein bhi chotte hi lag ra.
And Shravan ka oldie lagne ka chance hi nahi..ha Pushkie as Motu tab bhi jealous hi hoga😆

Suman Overdose..Yaha bhi😆
Well hai to Sumo overdose hi!

Cause cuteness kya hai? Hot is in!...Baat to sahi hai😉
Meri favourite ladkian aapki ho gayi and aapko perfume ki padi hai!...😆
Haaye bechaara apne bhai ki hotness ka maara🤣
That sounds wrong😆

Aap na! Ladkion mai koi interest nahi hai ab bhi aapko na...Now that sounds terribly wrong Puskhie🤣
Kamini Chachi (Ekta Kappor inspired)😆
Pehle to kaala teeka...😲 chachiji ko kya hua!

Aisa to kuch nahi hua ke aap aise react kar rahe ho...Damn🤣
Thu thu ho jaayegi...Itni fikr chachiji!

Isko ladkion mai interest hai! In the plural!...Haanji in the plural but un Plural ko?😳

Iss ne hadd kar di! Isko toh ladkion mai koi interest hi nahi hai! Haye Ram!"...O shit🤣
Ram...Na Chachi na😆
Ramu kaka ne suna kya?

Pushkar Tharki hai and ye Shravan woh hai...😆.
'Woh' kya hota hai?
Am so bhola bhaala baccha na!

Haaye bechare ka kaan..ouch!

"Kya? Kya nikal jayega? Kehne ka matlab kya hai tera? ...Chachi sixer pe sixer maar ri🤣
Mera kaan aur naam kharab kar rahe ho...rhymes perfectly!

Khandaan to kamaal hai and upar se Zoya ne likha to dhamaal kar kar diya😆
Btw that chetti chetti of Lalaji...haaye!
That Holi waala song of Lalaji and Shravan

Ramnath..He was always a good and caring father!
And yes Shravan deserves it!
That I Love you baccha...Love it!
But as much as he missed it, living away made him stronger...Thats true!
It made him see his worth!
Indeed a blessing in disguise.
Sometimes it takes time for us to realise that whatever happened, it happened for a reason..for our own betterment!

Ma..Kiss on forehead..Moments of these three.❤️
I so so love these beautiful moments Zoya.
His parents are there with him maybe not as husband and wife but as his parents that too happily and thats what matters.

My son is back...I love it so much for some reason!
That proud tone here of a father ❤️
I forget the pain of living away from the one person my life belongs to...This is something!!

That Party epi

Shravan putting an arm around him..Ramnath's speech...Loved it!!
Sumo in Royal Blue..Ohoo!!
Jhalli, His Jhalli...A gorgeous Lady but she is not mine...Bang on there!👏
Sab bol diya!
Sumo chashmish ki thi Shravan ki nahi..according to the heartbroken Shravan!

Shravan and Pushkar on either side of Ramnath...Now thats a proud moment!
Sooo loved when he acknowledged Varun too❤️
Pushkie pie and him addressing Ramnath as Bade papa..Always adored their bond. Respect waala!
Shravan is upset..kyu ji?
Fir chodke jaane ka chal ra kya kuch?

Nanu..The most loved person!
His mere presence brings a smile!
He was Shravan's voice of reason...So true!
The little interaction there was just Love... emotional!

Suman Baccha...Aailaa 😲
Ye Ramu kaka itna accha kaise ho gaya re.
Bada emotional kar ra!
Haaye but I loved it so much ya ❤️
Pata na kyu?

The Malhotra's and Tiwari's as a family
Peg sheg te gallan mithiyaan!
The family reunion was ❤️

Kamini discussed with Mausiji the details of the Jagrata she wanted to organize to ward of any evil eye the kids of the family may have...



Chachi ko kya ho gaya 😲😆

Shravan...haaye ya❤️
The song...well yahi baj ra hai while reading and typing and sooo loved it ya!
Thanks for the recommendation!

Shravan nihaaroying Sumo and how...Sigh!


That one glance...and it hit him!
Sigh!!!!!
Zoya only you can do it so subtly🤗

He could allow himself this one night of "Noor" before tomorrow dawned and he reverted to denying his feelings...
I can allow him this,I can allow myself this one night to bask in his "Noor" before we both go back to being friends at the break of tomorrow...
What to say here!
👏 👏

That gesture of asking 'what' and in return the answer in another simple gesture of shaking head...Simple but cute and effective!!

The ending had it all!
Damn it was beautiful!!!!
The end quote..❤️


Loved the upi and the song and the title so so much!!
Thank you!

Keep writing and I will keep reading!
Love you ya🤗
Nikka sa Nik




Edited by Nik03 - 7 years ago

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