TAAREY OS 'I M SORRY MY LOVE'

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Posted: 8 years ago
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"I AM SORRY MY LOVE"

Taani is frustrated with the accusation and humiliation on college website and rey is also taking her granted not understanding her even the members of team accuse when they get the chance rey knows about sharon's asthma she has taken promise not to tell anyone even taani
Now taani is done with all these and she wants to end all now first she wants rey to realise her importance in his life for that she has to make him understand the value of their relation
Story starts from projector room when taani points out sharon mistake they had a argument and sharon leaves from there swayam gets angry on taani

Here is the story...


IN PROJECTOR ROOM

After sharon leaves

Swayam- tum aise kaise sharon se baat kr skti ho vo ek bahut achi CS h tum usse resign krne k liye kaise kh skti ho
Taani- bhai aapne dekha nahi aaj sirf unki wajah se kitni badi problem hui fir bhi aap mjhe suna rhe ho unhe kuch nahi kaha kyun bhai
Swayam- wo sab mjhe ni pata tum ek baat kaan khol kr sun lo agar sharon ne resign kia toh mein bhi resign kr dunga and leaves
Taani is very hurt kyonki uske bhai se usse samajhne ki bajaye uska sath dene ki bajaye sharon ko support kia she is very hurt
After Swayam leaves rey calls taani
Rey- dekho taani tumhe sharon aur swayam se aise baat nahi krni chahiye thi tum toh pehle aise nahi thi ab kya ho gya tumhe
Taani- (rey ko dekhti h aur sochti h "aap bhi mjhe nahi samajh paye)and says to him aapko bhi mein hi galat lag rhi hun
Rey- dekho taani jaan please tum sharon ko sorry bol do sab theek ho jayega
Taani- mein unhe sorry kyun bolu galti unhone ki fir bhi aap mjhe bol rhe ho aap mjhe support krne ki bajaye mjhe sorry bolne ko kh rhe ho (she looks him disbelieving)
Rey- jaan tum kyu aise bol rhi ho mein toh bas yeh sab sort out krne k liye kh rha hun tum sorry bol dogi toh sab theek ho jayega aur waise bhi sorry bolne mein kya problem h tmhe ek sorry toh bolna h bas
Taani- exactly sorry toh bolna h wo bhi bol skti h main hi kyun bolun
Rey- taani tum kuch nahi janti sharon ko agar kuch... but stops dekho taani agar tum mjhse pyaar krti ho toh sharon ko sorry bol do
Taani- (looking him disbelieving) theek h and they leaves for canteen as everyone is in canteen


IN CANTEEN

Everyone is having fun but stops as they see taani and rey coming towards them everyone is looking at them wondering now what happen swayam looks taani angrily
Taani to Sharon- I M Sorry and leaves before anyone cab says anything
Rey wants to go but swayam stops him saying usse apni problem khud solve krni hogi


Taani strait goes to home crying 😭😭and thinks
Aap bhi rey aap bhi mjhe nahi samajh paye ek baar bhi mere baare mein meri feelings k baare mein nahi socha bas kh dia agar mjhse pyaar h toh sorry bol do HOW COULD U REY how main meri feelings aapke liye koi importance nahi rkhti aapke liye aapki dosti sharon mayene rkhti h her thoughts intrupts hearing continues ringing of her cell she wipes her tear and attend the call
Guy- hey babydoll
Taani- 😭😭 says buddy
Taani's buddy- kya hua babydoll tu kyun ro rhi h kisine kuch kaha bata mjhe main usse chodunga nahi
Taani- buddy please aap yahan aa jao
Buddy- ha main aa rha hun pehle mjhe yeh bata kya hua h
Taani narrates the situation to him listening to taani her buddy fumes and says main chodunga nahi unhe bas mjhe aane de tu tension mat le babydoll
Taani- buddy aap aisa kuch nahi kroge
Buddy- tu pagal ho gyi h ab bhi chahti h main kuch na krun
Taani- Aap mjhe galat samajh rhe ho main unhe maaf nahi kr rhi par mjhe un sab ko especially rey ko apni importance realise krwani h aap jante ho main unse kitna pyaar krti hun kya aap mera sath doge
Buddy- theek h main kal aata hun bas mjhe yeh bata mjhe kya krna h
Taani tells him the plan

NEXT MORNING IN COLLEGE

All de day taani was ignoring rey , he was getting annoyed wid taani's behaviour n was in confusion wat had happened

A bike comes wid full speed n stops before de college
He takes out his helmet n ruffle his hair
All girls were like omg...he is so damn hot
Few were like he is soo cute...
He is none other than taani's buddy karan

He walks through the cooridor , all girls were drooling
Here gang is in canteen except taani
All r chitchatting n r having fun ,
Karan enters the canteen , everyone looks him
Simmi - hey look at him man he is damn hot
All girls looks at de entance except Sharon as she got a call she excuses herself n goes to de corner
Rinni - nahi simmi he is cute
Neha - looking grt he is
Aashi - charming types hai
All boys listening to de comments looks at the direction

He came and ask someone about taani just then he hears her voice as she is talking to some one and starts singing

agar tum mil jaavo...

taani - Buddy and turns to his side

Karan - thoda dramatically agey badhta hai - agar tum mil jaavo...
Kamana chod denge hum...

Taani laughs n goes to him

Taani - uffooo Kamana nahi zamana chod denge hum
Karan - kyaa yaar babydoll kitni feeling se gaa raha tha , disturb karr diya
Taani - lekin aap yahan ,aap kal aane wale the rite
Karan - lagtha hai you are not happy ki main yahan aaya so I am going back😡😡 n he turns to leave wid fake anger
Taani - arey mera matlab wooh nahi tha
Karan smiles n turns back
Karan - so u r happy to see me
Taani - yaa
Karan - then prove it
Taani smiles n hugs him
Taani - itna proof kafi hai yaa aur proof chahiye
Karan hugs her back n twirls her
Karan - ohh babydoll missed soo much
Taani - aww...i too missed u
Suddenly surrounding became so hot as rey gusse se garam ho raha hai soo and every one looking at them astaurnishtly
Our rey is fuming wid anger😡😡😡
" who de hell is he...aur taani ne usse hug kiya..." he looks at swayam😡😡 but swayam🥱🥱 shrugs saying i dont know
Just then peon comes and says "aap sabko VP Sir ne bulaya h is new ladke k sath listening to dis rey gets jealous they all go goes to VP's office

AT VP'S CABIN

VP Sir- taani karan aaj se college join kar rha h aur yeh tumhari responsibility h isko yahan se formal krana
Taani- sure sir
Karan-bilkul ... aap tension mat lo babydoll h na😉😉 at taani
Rey looks at him as he is going to kill him
VP Sir- ok then *looking towards d3 team* aur tum log mjhe koi tum logon ki shikayat nahi aani chahiye as tum logon ne karan pe koi new prank kiya ya isse pareshan kia got it
Everyone- Yes Sir
VP Sir- ok then u guyz can leave
They all came out of the cabin suddenly rey sees karan hold taani hand says making cute face "babydoll chalo mjhe college dikhao as ur vp has told u na"
Taani- acha thik h chalo par aise faces mat banao listening to their conversation rey is burning with jealousy and leaves from there

After 1 month
In this 1 month taani totally ignore rey and hangouts with karan many times rey calls her but she always refuse to go with him by all this rey is very frustrated

IN COLLEGE

Taani walking through corridor just then rey holds her hand and drags her to fire exit and l9cks the door

At Fire Exit

Rey- what the hell taani kya hua h pichle 1 month se tum mjhe ignore kr rhi ho and punch to wall
Taani- looking at floor rey main kab aapko ignore kr rhi hun main toh bus karan k sath busy thi
Rey- Ya right! Tum busy thi holds her hand and says look at me say again
Taani- chodo mujhe dard ho rha h
Rey- aur jo mjhe dard hua pichle 1 mahine mein uska kya
Taani push him hard and shouts- 1 mahina maine aapko tome nahi dia toh aapko takleef hui dard hua aur mera kya haan rey mera kya jabse hum relationship aaye h tabse leke aaj tak aapke pass mere liye kabhi time nahi tha par is 1 month mein aapko yaad aa gya ki aapki ek gf bhi h bolo
Rey-taani...
Taani- bas rey bas meri feelings mera pyaar aapke liye koi maayene nahi rkhta bas aapka dance aapki dosti sharon bas yeh sab maayene rkhte h na
Rey- nahi taani aisa nahi h jaan tum janti ho i luv u tum nahi sharon ko...
Taani cuts him and shouts- SHARON SHARON SHARON aapki life mein inke alawa koi aur h hi nahi main, mera pyaar, meri feelings kuch bhi nahi h na rey bolo sharon yeh sharon wo thak chuki hun main yeh sun sun ke ab aur bardasht nahi hota mjhse kyun sunu main kyun samjhu kuch hamesha mjhe hi kyun kaha jata h samajhne k liye aapke dosti aapki sharon yeh kyun nahi samjhte smiles accusingly and says jab aap hi mjhe nahi samajhte toh kisi aur se kya umeed krun h na rey then
holds his collar and says aapko ek baar bhi meri yaad nahi aayi ek baar nahi socha main kya chahti hun kya sochti hun gf hun na aapki main bas yehi importance h meri thak chuki hun main bas rey bas and runs from there crying
rey stands there totally numb he is not able to think just then karan comes there and ask him is he fine but rey just leaves from there for home as right now he is not in right frame of mind

AT REY'S HOUSE
Rey is sitting in his room recalling what taani said just then his cell rings its aashi's call he answer the call because aashi never calls him

Aashi- rey abhi types college website dhekhiye
Rey- kya hua h aashi
Aashi- rey bas aap website types dekh lo aapko types samajh aa jayega
Rey open his laptop and fumes as there is lots of comment about taani, camparison between taani and sharon, their relation he shut his laptop and think "how could they aur taani ne mjhe batana zaruri nahi samjha itna sab kuch ho rha tha aur main damm threw his fingers in hairs just then he recalls whatever happen last few months and says
Taani sahi kh rhi thi main hi nahi samjh paya usko uski feelings ko bas hamesha usse hi accuse kia isliye wo itni hurt h itni insecure h how could i damm taani jaan i m sorry please mjhe maaf kr do tum sahi thi main hi galat hun ab main sab theek kr dunga main aa rha hun jaan tumhara rey sab theek kr dega yeh mera promise h"
And sleeps

NEXT MORNING AT COLLEGE CANTEEN
Rey is waiting desperately for taani just then taani enters with karan anyone can say she has cried alot looking at her red eyes and pale face reys sees that and its hurt him to much looking at taani's face his heart bleed but he controls him as he has something important everyone is now looking both of them

Rey goes to taani bends on his knees holding his ears says " I M SORRY JAAN I KNOW MAINE GALTI KI H TUMHE GRANTED LEKE TUMHARI FEELINGS KO IGNORE KRKE TMHE HURT KRKE I LNOW MAINE TMHE BAHUT HURT KIA H BUT TRUST ME JAAN MAIN YEH SAB NAHO CHAHTA THA MAINE YEH SAB JAAN BUJH KAR NAHI KIA MJHE NAHI PATA THA TMHE INTI TAKLEEF HO RHI THI SWEETHEAT TMHE PATA H NA JAAN MAIN TUMSE BAHUT BAHUT PYAAR KRTA HUN NAHI JEE PAUNGA TUMHARE BINA PLEASE APNE REY KO MAAF KAR DO BAS EK BAAR EK AAKHRI BAAR JAAN I PROMISE AAJ K BAAD MAIN TMHE KABHI HURT NAHI KARUNGA KABHI KOI SHIKAYAT KA MAUKA NAHI DUNGA KABHI TMHARI AANKHON MEIN AASUN NAHI AANE DUNGA JAAN PLEASE MUJHE EK CHANCE DE DO EK BAAR MAAF KR DO BAS EK BAAR MAIN PROMISE KRTA HUN MAIN WOHI KRUNGA JO TUM KAHOGI I LOVE YOU JAAN PLEASE FORGIVE ME UR REY PLEASE NA JAAN"
Taani is crying bitterly and hugs him says aap bahut bure ho aap hamesha aisa krte ho main aapko kabhi maaf nahi krungi aap kharab ho rey
Rey- sorry jaan please is baar maaf kr do apne rey ko
Taani- I LOVE YOU REY
Rey- I LOVE U TOOO JAAN I LOVE YOU I promise main tumhe kabhi hurt nahi krunga main kabhi tmhe complaints ka chance nahi dunga i promise jaan
Taani- cupping his face i know rey
Rey- tmne mjhe maaf kr dia na
Taani- haan
Rey hugs her and twirls her



THE END



This is my first OS... i hope you all will like it... if not then i m sorry...


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