RiKara OS - Agar tu Hota - Jyoti ka gift! - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!
What a lovely os! Are you planning to continue? Would love ro read further :) absolutely loved your mini gauri, she is so adoroble:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is so pure... 😳
I'd love to read the next part, please continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os!!
Loved it.
Very beautifully written.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ay GENIE
amazing OS
YOU portrayed omkara feelings as I always imagine 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: writergenie17


Hi!

Indigal07... I don't know you yet but I'mma give you a looong hug and call you my friend! 🤗 Thank you so much for all the lovely compliments and taking the time to write such a beautiful long comment. I love to read each and every comment I receive but the long ones are always extra special. So add an extra thank you hug to that long one you already got...

Now that you're here with us on the Dark Side, have some cookies, put your feet up, relax and have a whole lot of fun!

The RiKara fandom on IF is wild and wonderful... every day is a trip! There are a whole bunch of super-talented writers here making dreams come true left, right and center so I'm sure you're gonna have a great time!

Thanks for liking the OS as much as you did... There's no immediate plan to continue but who knows? If the giftee and all you lovely people ask for more, who am I to say no?

Agar Tu Hota is a great song but to my everlasting shame, the first time I heard it was when Jyoti told me that was the song she wanted the fic to be on. Since then, I might've listened to it about 25-30 times in the process of writing.

For all the other stuff I've written, at the base of every post I make, in my signature, there's a link to an index of my work. Check it out if you're interested in reading more of my rambling.

It is awesome to meet another new RiKara fan... welcome to the craziness.

Cheers!

p.s. Do let me know what I can call you!


Aww thanks for being so incredibly sweet!! A very looonnnggg hug back to you as well! 🤗😃
You can call me Aali! Sorry, I got so caught up in the awesomeness of your story, I forgot to introduce myself 😆

I'm so glad I've returned to IF, the Rikara fandom here seems awesome! I need people that share my obsession with Omkara and Gauri, and this place looks like a great way to go. :D Like today's episode for example, just so mind blowing after weeks of waiting for a proper Rikara scene, and people here are excited too, yay!

Thanks so much for showing me your index. I'll go and look into the rest of the magical stories you've created. And please please do create more to Agar Tu Hota OS, it is just TOO GOOD!!! Can't wait to read more from you! 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏👏👏what an update! really there is no one big step that makes it but many small ones indeed.. this is redemption track that we all so badly wanted.. how he eventually finds her truth through his journey of redemption! The role reversal is done so beautifully! with omkara patiently waiting for his chiraiya to return and Gauri having had enough prioritized her self respect over him finally!
beautifully written genie.. the pain, the restlessness, the loneliness, the eventual realization of his commitment phobic heart and the undying hope!
👏👏👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one Genie. Totally loved it. <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS ❤️
Truly loved it. The way you explained his loneliness, his helplessness, his need for her, his undying hope; I loved it all. It was actually a role reversal specially that he wanted to stay as her husband (loved that). This is a much needed redemption track all of us want to see. You just nailed it here. Loved it so much. Usually I don't love the open-endedness in stories but here it just seems to be perfect. It is the way you wrote that it made it so beautiful. One amazing OS it was. Will be waiting for more stories from your side.
Much Love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Genie 🤗 .. somehow reading this one got delayed so apologies first .. missing you for a while thought .. where are you ??


This OS is great.. loved the way you've given Omkaras penance .. I totally expect this from him .. beautifully you've described his guilt the mountain of emotions that have kept building on his heart until this cute little Cupid dragged his chirayya into the house .. thank god she did .. cause a few love stories just deserve a happy ending .. I know this wasn't a finite end but m gonna be happy imagining Omkara manages to convey the state of his heart to his Gauri .. mad I am .. heheh .. thanks so much for this yaa ..

Lots of love
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
Fabulous loved it so much.
Superb.

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