Kal kya pata Mile, na mile Nazdeekiyan O' Saathiya - Epilogue 15/05/18

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Hi guys. I'm back at it again. Sadly this isn't part of Changed... won't get that until the weekend unfortunately. This OS is based on Gauri's disappearance and Omkara's renewed MU. Everything is on track until Shivika's marriage and Om going to the cheap' hotel. After that we detour - No Shivika separation and no memory loss. It's been two weeks and Gauri has not returned.

This is Part 1 of a Three Shot. The rest will be up soon.

I know this won't happen - and I don't even want it to... because this was hard to write. This piece involves Gauri losing the thing that has for a long time kept her tethered to life... to vishwaas'. The Gauri here might seem out of character, but please understand she's in trauma and I'm taking artistic liberty so forgive if anyone else is also out of character. Ultimate MU clearance coming up. Plz like and leave a comment - it makes my day. @gumpchump this one's for you - I promise that I will get around to your lengthy PM prompt... give me a little time.


Omkara

The last two weeks had been torture. Omkara thought the worst had passed as he wept over the ashes of his creations - that he was burning away the pain... the hurt... that feeling that had slowly crept up over him that he had yet to name. He thought the gaping hole in his chest would recede as the time went by... that he would no longer wait for her, but he still found himself sitting in the main hall facing the door. His eyes would not waver from it for minutes at a time and after a week of this behaviour his family finally came out of their happy wedding stupor and noticed his turmoil.

A week ago Omkara's brothers had worn him down and forced the truth out of him. Red eyed, sleep deprived and emotionally spent he told Shivaay and Rudra about the phone call, following THAT B*****d to that shady hotel that had an hourly rate and seeing Gauri's name on that register. He couldn't even get the words out without sobbing... so how had she done it? How had she let THAT F****er call her to meet him... write their names down together... What were they doing in that room (the guy at the register revealed they had paid in full advance for the weekend)... Had she let him touch her? Were they together now? Had she...had they...? By the end of his explanation Omkara was feeling nauseous, unable to stop his staggered breathing at the thought of another man's hands on HIS wife.

ShivRu were speechless as they looked upon their broken brother. What could they say? What did you say when you suddenly become a witness to the end of your beloved brother's marriage. As was there nature, ShivRu chose their separate routes. For Shivaay it was a question of protecting his family and The Great Wall of Shivaay' came up automatically - gone was the affectionate Bade Bhaiyya... Gauri had the capability of sinking his brother if he was not cut loose from her. Shivaay would squash this leech before it sucked his brother dry. For Rudra he saw his O's anguish and realised his brother had fallen and fallen hard. Rudy Bhaiyya knew his Chulbul Bhabhi - she was not capable of such deceit... O must be mistaken. Rudra would not let anything disrupt his brother's love story - he would defend his Chulbul Bhabhi.

"O...O ho sakta hai ki tum hi galat samajh rahe ho. Mera dil maanta hai ki Chulbul Bhabhi aisa kuch nahin kar sakti. O...O it could be that you are misunderstanding this. My heart believes that Chulbul Bhabhi can not do anythiong like this. You must have got it wrong." Rudra pleaded with Omkara.

"Give it a rest Rudra! It's time to be practical. I'll call the lawyers - we can have the divorce papers ready by noon." SSO was in action mode, unaware of the bloodshot eyes that were now glaring at him. "We have to make sure you are are protected Om. She won't get a dime of alimony, trust me. I will make it difficult for her to breathe in this city! Don't worry, nobody gets away with hurting Shivaay Singh Oberoi's family!"

"Hai main marjawan! Yeh kya bol raha hai tu, Shivaay? Hamare khandaan mein talaak? Ohhh let me die! What are you saying Shivaay? Divorce in our family?"

The brothers had been unaware but their family had been eavesdropping on their conversation and had heard all the shocking details. It had been Dadi of course who released the typical dialogue, all that remained was -

"Itna kuch hogaya aur humme kuch pata hi nahin chal. So much happened and we didn't find out."(Oh... She got that one in there too. So sly Dadi.)

"Oh My Mata! Oh my Goddess!" (No prizes for guessing the next family member to get their word in.) "Pata kaise lagta? Sab ne aankhon mein patti jo bhaand raki hai. Aap sab ko meri baatein karvi lagti hai, par meine toh pehle hi din se iss ladki ko padak liya tha. Kaha tha na JethaniJi... Phoothi kismat hamari! How would you find out? Everyone is blindfolded. You may find my words bitter, but I figured this girl out from the first day. Didn't I tell you JethaniJi... Our bad luck!"

"Just shut up Pinky!" A distraught Jhanvi snapped. She had felt her own heart re-shatter as she watched her son break, but a voice inside her whispered defence of the girl who had suffered through so much. Jhanvi loved Gauri as much as she did Priyanka - she always allowed her children space to figure out their own lives, but had always assumed they knew they could approach her with their problems. If Gauri had felt trapped in her marriage surely she would have approached her before taking such an action. Standing their Jhanvi began to question how well she truly knew her children - all her kids having eloped in one way or another... she had not given any of them a real wedding. Omkara was destroyed before her eyes... Gauri was God knows where... Rudra had turned marriage into a joke... And Priyanka... when had they last spoken? A dread filled her heart. She had failed. She had spent years as a failed wife - now she had lost as a mother too. Mentally making a note to contact her daughter, she turned to the issue at hand.

"Om... Please Om, relax. Don't take a wrong decision in haste. Marriage is a huge commitment... it doesn't just end like this. Gauri must have made a mistake. She's just a child Om, still so young. Forgive her... save your marriage. Please, Beta!" Jhanvi pleaded.

Seeing the state of his wife, the guilt already present in Tej magnified. Today Tej had seen his Omkara break and the agonised man before him transformed into the little boy who strived to impress his father. For the first time in years he could see his little boy's pain, could feel his anguish, and the dormant father in him roared. How could this be happening to his son?! To Tej Singh Oberoi's son? Maybe because he is Tej Singh Oberoi's son... Maybe now he's paying the price of your sins.' A quiet voice whispered inside him, silencing the lion that had just reared it's head. Yes, maybe this was the price of Tej's own crimes in love - in marriage - but Tej would be damned if he let Omkara pay it. He may not deserve a happy marriage himself, but his son surely did. From today Tej would work on fixing his son's marriage. Only then could he atone for his sins. Whereas Rudra and Priyanka had always remained slightly guarded from TejVi's isssues, Om had bourn the brunt of them. He looked again at his wife - the mother of his children - the woman he had wronged. He grasped her hand tightly in silent support. Tej had single-handedly destroyed Omkara's childhood, but this time he would join hands with his true life-partner and ensure that Omkara's marriage and family life flourished. Putting aside his ego and ideals of Naam, Khoon and Khandaan, this time Tej would be a Father. A divorce would only further damage Om's psyche... what he needed was to see a marriage work... Omkara needed to make his own marriage work.

"Your mother is right Omkara. Now is not the time for haste. Let Gauri return home. I will talk to her myself. You can get couple's counselling. this is not the end. You still have a chance, my son. I have wasted all the opportunities that your mother has given me, but Gauri is not me. That girl is willing to die for you... She's proved it again and again. She must have a reason for straying. Have you been giving her time, or have you been busy with the exhibition? Your marriage is new and you haven't even had your honeymoon. Maybe this man has mislead her. Let her explain herself. Maybe she just feels neglected. We can fix this, my son. We can fix it together." Tej tried to reach out to his son, but found his path blocked by Shivaay.

"Yeh aap kya ke rahein hain Bade Papa? What are you saying Bade Papa? This matter should be dealt with swiftly and discreetly. Omkara needs no more of this in his life. I am his brother I know what's best for him."

"I am his father, Shivaay." Tej countered, his chest puffing out.

"Forgive me, Bade Papa, but it would be best we didn't start that topic." Shivaay replied.

Instantaneously, Tej deflated and stood down, silenced under the weight of his own sins.

"I am his brother too Bhaiyya, and I know O can't live without Chulbul Bhabhi. Please stop trying to dictate his life." Rudra re-entered the discussion.

"Please Rudra! Tu abhi bhacha hai. You are still a kid. You don't understand relationships."

"I am not a kid. And are you... seriously YOU... giving relationship advise? I mean you don't have the best track record yourself - no offence Bhabhi." Rudra turned to Anika, who wasted no time jumping in to her husband's defence. Although she had liked Gauri, she would not stand for anyone harming HER family.

"Nahin Rudra, Shivaay sahin hain! Jho Gauri ne kiya uski koi maafi nahin hai! No Rudra, Shivaay is right! What Gauri has done deserves no forgiveness!" To Anika marriage was sacred... had it not been sacred to Gauri too? Was she not the one who constantly remembered ShivParvati? How had she stooped so low? Anika would never forgive her!

"Par Bhabhi... iss baat ki koi aur explanation ho sakti hain na? But Bhabhi... there can be another explanation for this too, right? We should go and ask Gauri Bhabhi." The ever logical Inspector Bhavya intervened, only to be cut off by Pinky.

"Don't talks in our family matters! Badi aayi Bhabhi' ki Chamchi! Bhabhi's sidekick!"

Anika quickly jumped to Bhavya's defence knowing how it felt to be a receiver of Pinky's taunting, and that started the Saas - Bahu debate, with everyone jumping in to say their piece. Everyone except for Omkara who was at his wits' end.

"SHUT UP! All of you shut up! This is between me and MY WIFE! I don't need your advice! Just... just leave me alone!"

With that Omkara walked away heading to his room (#Mike drop moment). He had not talked to anyone since, refusing to meet the lawyers Shivaay had called and taking his meals in his room - of which he ate very little. At all other times he sat facing the main doors, waiting for his wife. He both dreaded and awaited her arrival. After a week his family were completely lost, all having tried to reach Gauri and failed.

It was after two weeks that something strange happened. There was a visitor to the Oberoi Mansion... One that would change Omkara's life.


Dandi (Don't killl me - I'm trying to fix the errors of the show)

The last two weeks had been a jumble of tiredness and worry. His work had been going well but that meant long hours and unavailability for his loved ones. His Sister had tried to contact him 14 days ago but Dandi had left his phone lying around and only received the 12 missed calls later. Since then he had tried on and off to get in touch with her between his own work, but he had failed miserably. When he had called OM a servant had said his Sister was out on some task (How useless are the Oberoi's servants?) So today he had come to visit her personally, only to be stopped by this ridiculous Khanna.

"Sorry sir, but no strangers are permitted inside." The bigger man explained as he held Dandi back. Never one to give up, he began screaming Gauri's name.

Omkara had been ignoring the commotion outside until he heard his wife's name. Instantly he rose from the sofa and ran outside. Disappointment filled him when he only spotted her adopted brother, then it was quickly replaced by rage. This man had mislead him about his wife. What was he doing her now? Had he come to sprinkle salt on Omkara's wounds?

"What are YOU doing here?" Omkara's voice came out as a husky growl, having been out of use for so long.

"I am here to see my Sister. Call her out to see me!" Dandi demanded.

Surely Gauri would have told her beloved brother before leaving... right? Omkara felt a ocean of dread brewing within him. Gauri had contacted nobody in his family, he knew. Could it be she was out of contact with everyone? Why?...How?

Omkara motioned to let Dandi in. It was time to have a real conversation with him. It was time to find out exactly where Gauri was...


End of Part 1- will endeavour to have the rest up soon. Hope you like it.

Part 2 - pg 4

Last part - pg 7

Epilogue pg 11


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow nice start... keep it up
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Kashish,

Brilliant one. Absolutely brilliant. Love Rudy ❤️

Awaiting the next part soon.
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Superb superb kashish, love all ur posts...& stories too...
Please do pm ur updates...
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First of all..how ShivIka could think so lowly of Gauri..?? They knew her more than any other member of OM...it's really heart wrenching to watch them like that...Tej left me surprised..finally he got some sense and tried to fix his son's marriage...Rudy was the sweetheart as always..at least he decided to keep faith on whatever he saw since Gauri came to OM...I expected Omkara will agree for the divorce..but he chose to wait for her...God..!! I can't see him broken like this...where is Ri..?? Dying to know her whereabouts...you just nailed it..continue soonish..
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Kashish 🤗

Thanks gurl! Your writing is so amazing.. brilliant character portrayal!

Waiting for what happens next as always 😆

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First of all Kashish ... I love you ... I love you ... I love you 😳 this one is so God damn realistic ... I like this Omkara ... Accepting and waiting for Gauri as his wife and then deciding on handling the matters personally ... Way to go Kara ...
I love tej here ... He wants to help Omkara in fixing his marriage ... Now that's more like a dad ...

Rudra is another charm ... Knowing that O chulbul bhabhi k bina nahi reh sakta ... I agree he is no more a kid ... He is mature enough to understand relationships

I feel like killing shivika ... They are so URGHH ... Don't they know gauri ... Instantly ready to conclude everything with divorce ... They are weaker than rikara when it comes to commiting in a marriage ... And I am feeling like to go and slap them.

Waapas laao Gauri ko jaldi ... I really feel something is terribly wrong ... Why did she call dandi ... I know your twist is going to be all the more solid ... I am keen to know about what has happened to Gauri ... Update soon
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Another point to be noted is tejvi as parents ... Both of them configuring their mistakes and trying to guide Omkara ... Such skillful initiation to some dramatic kind of family bonding. Jahnvi kept in mind to analyse all the facts and truths of her sons marriage whereas tej has learned from his own experiences ... This is a job well done kash ... Update soon and please let us know what's with dandi ... What has happened to Gauri? Is she okay? Is she hurt? God! Where is she?
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Never thought shivaay would go against gauri
Its show time i guess
Omkara and oberois need a reality check
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nice ...but i did not like Shivika also mistrusting Gauri, gosh Anika should know better but then...as for Shivaay family comes first guess he still has his nkk intact when it comes to them

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