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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Ahaan..!! My DabangRi is back..I just loved the way she gave back to Kara...but we can't blame him for accusing or doubting her..he was brought up in a mess..his bitter experiences of his parents broken marriage made him like this...we know how much he try to fix things between him and his wife..but somehow he lose his temper and mess up the already messed relation...but I don't want him to point a finger on Ri's character this time..it's so NON OMKARA character...but kal ke epi dekhne ke baad I've a strong feeling show mein bhi aisa hi kuch hone wala hain...anyways can't predict anything..kuch bhi ho sakta hain...let's wait to sew how CVs handle our VolcanoKara..you wrote it beautifully..did justice to both of their character and the current situation...thanks for coming with this Kashish..



As always, thank you for reading and the lovely review!

Tej may have set off the eruption of VolcanoKara today. B4 he had commitment phobia in the fear he would become the Tej in a relationship. Now Tej has unwittingly fed to him the idea that he could become the Jhanvi. Again Gauri has become the villain. This time she hasn't taken the place of Svetlana, but that of Tej - arguably even more unforgivable to Omkara. We'll see how the CVs handle it.

After Kunal's epicness yesterday I needed to post this lest the CVs ruin the flow - which honestly is quite likely. Anyways, here's hoping for Shrenu's swift recovery and return.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Loved it kash
Love the way you wrote it..i hope show mein we get this after yesterday's epi...
I just love the way she gave back to him when he doubted her
Aaj phor se aap mere character pe ungli utha rahe..gande ilzam lga rahe..kabhi nahi badlenge aap..aapne hume kabhi nahi smajh payenge...uff dialogue delivery..perfect👏
And her english..this tym she is very confident han..
In Yesterday epi kunal rocked..his emotions and expresion as omkara really brilliant..and here in this shot gauri rocked
Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Loved it kash

Love the way you wrote it..i hope show mein we get this after yesterday's epi...
I just love the way she gave back to him when he doubted her
Aaj phor se aap mere character pe ungli utha rahe..gande ilzam lga rahe..kabhi nahi badlenge aap..aapne hume kabhi nahi smajh payenge...uff dialogue delivery..perfect👏
And her english..this tym she is very confident han..
In Yesterday epi kunal rocked..his emotions and expresion as omkara really brilliant..and here in this shot gauri rocked
Keep writing



It can't all be one-sided epicness can it? Gauri has to show some flare to. LOL. I do justify Omkara's reasoning for suspicion given his childhood and her flighty behaviour recently. I just hope he talks not accuses. And if he can't control himself, then she gives back just as good. Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it...


but I also want u to write few more lines as gauri leaving a guiltyKara behind in the morning ..


bt still it's excellent..

keep writing

stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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om is a perfect example of a person from a broken family... he witnessed only betrayal side of the marriage but again it doesn't give him the right to accuse gauri... he repeated the same mistake again and again... its sad to see him spoiling a beautiful life which he would have had...he is breaking it with his own hands
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Posted: 8 years ago
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you wrote it so beautifully! All emotions bang on point! especially the mirthless laughter which escaped from Gauri after she learns how om has once again butchered her character in his filthy head which will never see the concept of selfless love.! However, i donot blame the poor damaged boy who has been a witness to NOT just one but a few loveless compromises in the name of marriage.
" a shaking Omkara had forgotten his own words from before this break"
why do men always forget the important details of conversations! arghh its frustrating. Also he needs to stop with the wedding excuse to have Gauri around him 😆 (also love love love your english translations! i can so totally get where all the sarcasm is pouring through!) Aaand the ending "She had no time to soothe his ego" was brilliant! just how i see GKS!
You did justice to every character and every emotion! kudos woman!👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

you wrote it so beautifully! All emotions bang on point! especially the mirthless laughter which escaped from Gauri after she learns how om has once again butchered her character in his filthy head which will never see the concept of selfless love.! However, i donot blame the poor damaged boy who has been a witness to NOT just one but a few loveless compromises in the name of marriage.

"a shaking Omkara had forgotten his own words from before this break"
why do men always forget the important details of conversations! arghh its frustrating. Also he needs to stop with the wedding excuse to have Gauri around him😆(also love love love your english translations! i can so totally get where all the sarcasm is pouring through!) Aaand the ending "She had no time to soothe his ego" was brilliant! just how i see GKS!
You did justice to every character and every emotion! kudos woman!👏



I hope you enjoyed it 😊. What can we do?... men 😆

GKS is feeling fiesty in this one. I just wanted an altercation in which Gauri was not left in tears between them.

Got another OS going up today. Keep an eye out 😉

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