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Posted: 8 years ago
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He walked to the other side " you are asking me why i am not still married ?" he narrowed his eyes and asked her " Asfi" she took a step towards him

" jo tum mera saath kar ka gai thi uss ka baad mera pyar se yakeen utah gaya, muhje ko laga sab log dhokabaz aur matlabi hota hai, waqt aana per saath chor jata hai " he paused " wait a second , if you think we will end up together , Or I will give you second chance ,than stop living in fantasy i have move on , i pray you find a caring life partner " his cell started ringing " excuse me " he attended the call" okay i am coming " he without saying bye to her left the place


At Mess

Zubiya twist and turn on bed " kya hogaya hai " she find herself restless , she received text from hospital to reach as soon as possible as there is an emergence


Both reached together to hospital

" Kya huwa hai " she asked him as they walked in together

"someone found a wounded man body in jungle " he said

" police case " she murmur

" mmm" they both rush to the OP

Dr Haroon give them briefing regarding the patient, Asfand look at her "will you accompany me ?" He asked she nodded " then get ready "

After 2 hours

In Staff room

"Well done Dr Zubiya " he said while taking away mug of coffee that she has made for herself , she narrowed her eyes and look at him he seated , she drag herself and seated in front of him " any problem" he tried to read her face. She shakes her head

" tum itni chup chup kyun ho? " he asked while taking sop from the mug

" shayad i am tired " she tries to avoid him " tum ghar Se bhi jaldi chali gai , mama scold me because of you " he hides his smile and said she this time look at him " she thinks mein na tum ko roka nahi , per un ko yeh nahi pata Ka tum na un ka Asfi kai baat nahi maani" he said in a low voice , she finished her coffee and stands , he stands too "chalo ab tum ko mess chordo, uss wqat tou nahi baat suni thi tum na " he said and walked towards the door

He as always opens it for her " mein chali jao hai" she whispered

"Raat Ka 4 baja " he narrowed his eyes and look at her , she unwilling walked out , she noticed he was matching his steps with her , both were walking in same pace , the moonlight showed them the way there was strange kind of silence between them , she stops near his car

He walked ahead , she recollect his word kabhi kabhi dil chata hai rasta kabhi khatam na ho"she walked ahead

I want to enjoy the chilly breeze and " he paused he finds her looks at him

"Kuch bolo bhi tum " he said

"Kya " she asked him

" anything , I am a very good listener " he said

" mujhe ko nahi pata tha ka aap itna bolta hain" she said

" Okay ab nahi bolta ,tum Bolo" he said

"Iss patient ko kon lakar aaiya" she asked innocently

"Come on Miss Zubiya Khaili i don't want to discuss patient and staff understand this beautiful shining sky " he said and grins his teeth " waise i told Faryal i have moved on "he said as they reached closed to the gate of mess , she in surprise look at him " i think now you can sleep peacefully and come home like before" he asked the guard to open the gate ,he waited till she walked in ,she turns back and look at him he was standing there waiting for her , she waved him he nodded and walked back to hospital.


I Find there is Some Prob In Editing how they are wearing Same Dress


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely!! You should continue it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG loved it! 👏
my heart actually stopped at this line😳:

Originally posted by: naddiya26

per un ko yeh nahi pata Ka tum na un ka Asfi kai baat nahi maani" he said in a low voice ,



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow, so beautiful 😳 Please do continue 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely OS

And probably I am the only who possibly believes its not an editing glitch 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os are you planning to continue?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovefk

Awesome os are you planning to continue?

i am already writing and SS on them
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Posted: 8 years ago
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SAVAGE👏 asfi exactly says what we all wanted to say him to Faryal.
We what a connecting point ,that might possible that man which is shot by bahadur.lets see what street up for us.u have written so we'll nads🤗i loved the convo between them in Stayeff room.aww she is still hurt.
Loved the walk to mess.
Thanks nads
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is AMAZING Naddiya!!!❤️ im not really fond of reading...😆😳 but i came to see what you had wrote regarding the promo, and i have to say LOVED it!! 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -RD-

Lovely OS

And probably I am the only who possibly believes its not an editing glitch 😆


Nope not the only one 😆...with the way this show has been going I dont think the makers will commit such a big blunder...

TO the OS writer - Its so lovely! A small scene yet so engaging 👏

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