Rikara OS Series #2: Confused Souls..

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Ann17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

awww..

just loved it

keep writing. ..

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: nami9j
So beautiful n romantic ..
Love d way u write d scenes.. please continue..

Thank you nami..!!

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: rikara94
Lovely update karthi...
Totally enjoyed it...
Their saree draping moments were amazing... am blushing look☺️☺️
and it was wriiten very well..everytime you elaborate feelings and emotions very well...
And last pe mehndi ko appriciate bhi kiya i thought draping scene mein hi khoya rhega😆
Waiting for the next os

hi jo..

sanskaari sapne ko ff/os se hi poorthi kar sakthe hain.. ab toh omkaara ki muh kulani chahiye.. high time .. aakhir kab tak aise ghoom phirega..😆😆

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Ahhaan..!! Kya kahoon..?? "Kara draping dupatta" moment was too much sanskaari...It took me few seconds to get over this..and I'm still blushing...it was mind blasting Karthi di...will be waiting to read the next OS of the series...toh harharaike next update ke saath wapas aajana...plz plz plz..

hi tasneem,

mind blast hua kya😲 thank you dearie.!! show to nahi to yahin sahi.. There are lot of scenes cooking up in my mind.. One at a time..😆

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
it's beautiful yar
Totally loved it

thank you dear!! keep reading!😊

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: music1
Pure sensual bliss!! Loved it:)

Thank u dear.. keep reading ..Ur name btw?

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yayini

@yayini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Ann17
awww..

just loved it

keep writing. ..

Ann.. so came out of Mr.india mode huh😊

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Neha

@A-Musing-Me

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Yay.. this is so subtly sensuous ... physical undercurrents hovering .. n deeply alluring .. yet the way it ends is aweee.. Omkara ki nikal padi .. he found O.. hehe.. it is beautiful.. love your RiKara yaa .. so nuances .. so many layers .. makes for a fascinating read .. thanks so much for this magic .. love it

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perFICtionist.

@perFICtionist.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

you took my breath away!! draping dupatta scene was mindblowing !! beautifully done yayini.👏

you reflected the inner turmoil with such finesse and adroitness! hats off! Gauri's reluctance at etching his name and disrespecting the traditions showed us what Gauri truly stands for! and Omkara's dilemna and sexual tension towards Gauri has been more than evident to us by now and you portrayed all that and more! beautiful👏

loved the ending