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Posted: 8 years ago

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Update next soon 😉

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Rashmi update was thoda chotu... Nxt Tim thoda bada please 😳 😃

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roseraja1915

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Posted: 8 years ago

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The story is getting more and more exciting.

Finally, after all the days of battling with his mind and heart, Jalal is set on making his own decision to win Jodha's love.

But it is definitely not going to be a walk in the park since Jodha ,too, has made up her mind to stand up to him.

The path of true love never did run smooth, so it will be so for the couple.

Waiting eagerly to read what the future holds for them.

Thank you Rashmi for this immensely interesting story .👏

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Rashmi Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: lovespari

WOW rashmi🤗
It was FABULOUS ... Super update
Just loved it 😃
JA was so confused bcz of continuous battle between His heart n Mind... N this the frst Tim he didn't tk anyone side... Gud
Oh my... Lik really... He share his Heart out With Ajay... It was a surprise very big Surprise... Nt fr me but fr Ajay too.. Remmber Ajay know tht Ja don't lik to Share his Feelings with anyone...
We doubt fr once but feel If he really Faking then wht Need to share Everything with him... Fr the frst Tim I too didn't doubt him fully... I feel somewhere it's Real 😊
I love the way Ajay Handle Ja... He was so overwhelmed tht Ja share his Truth with him he was soo Happy tht he finally gtting his Friend back but in this Emotion he didn't Flow... He fulfill the Duty of the Friend n Don't forget he is Brother of Jo... He show him Path n told him to Listen his Heart if he want His Lady Love bcz Love is Heart work so u shuld Listen him 😃 ... Ja too understand but he was nt sure tht he could Follow him Silently... Thn Ajay too told him tht if he want sure in tht Thn he is too nt sure tht he will let him hv her bcz he will nt let Anyone hurt Jo again ... It was a Open threat... Woah I lik it😛😆
I love this Open Talk it's the frst Tim thy both saying everything openly Rather saying in mind 😉 🤣 But tell u truth.. Tht mind talk is always fun to read 🤣 think something else n say something else 🤣
Aww... JO she still Feared so much tht she cnt slept alone so she went Where she felt safe... The only one who save him n will always... With Ajay... Bro sis relation lik tht only Sis always feel safe with his Bro... Always 😊
I really love the part wher Ajay caressing her n covering her so tht she cn sleep peacefully... Beautyful rashmi 😊
Ajay talk Jo n md her understand tht now it's Enough n now she should tk Stand fr herself n Fight for Herself with tht Jo gt Confidence n Now she determined n all prepare to Face anything n the way she said I feel she going to Giv hell to Ja😉
😆 Oh my god This Ajay... He is so Naughty... He is preparing himself lik he soon going to Watch a Super duper Movie wher boy going to do anything to mk her Fall fr him N ther Girl will b determined tht she will never fall n giv him Hell... 😆 isne Aag laga diya abb ye mazze se baith kr Dekhega bas... Such a devil I didn't know tht 😲😆 But tell u truth Now m too excited to see tht Movie n eagerly waiting 😉 🤣
Ajay Jo com fr breakfast wher all wer already but Jo completely ignore Ja n his Family... Lik it 😊 Gud she started
Is gud to see tht ther is No effect of him on her No fear no worry nothing... Great improvement in just hour 😃 bravo girl👏proud of u boy... 😊
Ajay Jo Ritu priya veer part always Fun... The most entertaining part... Love ther banter... Bechara Ajay he is the only one who in last always gt Stuck 😆 n last hv to do what they want... But no this Tim he didn't listen anyone nt even Jo he only listen Ritu 😳 acha Jo abhi se Joru Ka Ghulam 😉 it nt m saying it Ko n priya said 😳 😆
By the way rashmi did Ja n his Family stay in Ajay house?? Thy hv ther own house naa n now it set up too... Then
So Finally Ja took decision... N tht is tht He will listen to his Heart no matter wht... Seeing Jo so carefree so smiling n happy he took this decision... These things Give so much happiness to him tht he finally understand tht He want her happy n smiling n her Happiness is his state Happiness 😊 he understands tht... What Ajay want him to understand he got it... His frst lesson... He HD many things to know n understand but the Frst step always Hard but Ja has taken his... Gud 😊
I love when Ja said he will try to get his Love but if nt he will sure md her Friend... My God so much improvement...👏
Now both r Determined... N it will fun to watch lik Ajay said... 😉 😆
Waiting for nxt 😊

more then my chapter size your comments was big and I love that and I promise I will give big chapter next time and About your question Jalal and his family have there house but like I said they spend there free time with each other so they often stay with Ajay' house okay and yes there is going to be very much fun from now on and I am sure you all will love that and I will update tomorrow.

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Rashmi Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: roseraja1915

The story is
getting more and more exciting.

Finally, after all
the days of battling with his mind and heart, Jalal is set on making his own decision
to win Jodha's love.

But it is definitely
not going to be a walk in the park since Jodha ,too, has made up her mind to
stand up to him.

The path of true
love never did run smooth, so it will be so for the couple.

Waiting eagerly to
read what the future holds for them.

Thank you Rashmi
for this immensely interesting story .👏

thanks for comments dear and yes it will be not easy for Jalal to get her but he is daring and he will do everything to get her and you will know he is going to make her fell in love with him or not in upcoming Chapters dear till then enjoy reading it.

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Rashmi Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: dellaakdha
Nice update Dear..
The fight between heart and mind is well written..
Apart from that I like Jalal's confession regarding his acting and how he asked help from Ajay...
Ajay gave the best solution to him..
He is selfish regarding his angel over his friend...
AJAY gave hope to Jodha to be strong to fight...
I hope Ajay's advice to jalal and jodha will help them...
A cute banter in the gang as usual...
Will wait to know what Jalal's heart will do to gain her love...

it's good that you all like and it's feel good that you all are excited to read about Jalal reaction now and i change my story now I wanted to take it another way but seeing many people are not liking Jalal nature i change it now so you all will see his positive side now and maybe funny to and I will update tomorrow good night.

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Rashmi Singh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Chapter 35

(after few minutes they were done with there breakfast when ajay Looked at Jalal and saw him smiling so he ask in calm voice).

Ajay said : what decision you taken for your mission I mean in your way I am going to help you or stop you.

(listening him everyone get confuse but then they thought it's business related so no one said anything but Jalal understand the hidden meaning of his words).

His mind said : he don't leave any chance to irritate me idiot can't he ask alone no why because this idiot love to embarrass me front of Everyone I thought after becoming officer and businessmen he will change now but no he is still like before who love to play prank on me like I was his personal toy uff how I just wanted to wiped that smirk from his face look how he is smirking at me idiot.

(but then in calm voice).

Jalal said : I don't need your help Dude I made my decision and I am going to do that on my own now because it's I who want so I will be the only one who have to do everything right.

(listening him Ajay get happy as he saw honesty determination and truth in his eyes and get that he is going to listen his heart from now on).

His mind said : not bad Jalal but poor you you don't know that My little devil is going to give you hell now and for getting her you have to take my help but for now let's see what are you going to do.

(but then in soft voice).

Ajay said : good very good and it's great to know that you understood my words but if you need help then I am her for you okay after all it's related to me right.

(listening him Jalal get shocked and looked at him and saw naughtiness in his eyes and the mischievous smirk on his face and seeing that he get nervous).

His mind said : oh my god he is looking like devil to me now is he plan something for me so I have to do more hard work to get my Baby girl oh no why I didn't notice that today she didn't get uncomfortable in my presence and didn't get scared to it means he did something for sure oh god how much it's taking me to control myself not to punch him now.

(but controlling his anger he in calm voice).

Jalal said : I will ask if I will need help don't worry Dude.

(listening him very hardly tried to control so that he didn't started laughing front of everyone so he compose himself and looked at Jalal again).

His mind said : oh my my Jalal I didn't even did anything and you started loosing your mind then how will you face my devil Sister now I seriously pity you now Jalal but it's really fun to see your facial expression it's hilarious.

(then in calm voice).

Ajay said : as your wish Buddy.

Jodha said : if you are done with talk so let's go now.

(listening her words Ajay intentionally in loving voice).

Ajay said : as your wish Angel your wish is my command.

(Jalal glare at him but he in exchange smirk at him and enjoy his jealous look).

Ritu said : will you all like to come with us.

Humayu said : no we want to go back to our house now.

Ajay said : fine then come with us we will drop you to your house then.

Abdul said : no need Dude we have our care now You all may go now.

Ajay said : as your wish then now come everyone.

Jalal said : but I think we should enjoy to what say Mirza.

Mirza said : why not we have holiday to.

Bakshi said : yes in that way we will become friends to.

Salima said yes it will be more fun.

(listening this everyone get upset except Ajay and Jodha but no one let there emotion show on there face but then they all get shocked to listen Jodha words and Ajay smiled but more then Ritu Priya Kabir and Veer Jalal get shocked and thought so I was right he really did something look how is he smiling now I swear if you trouble Me you idiot then you will pay for that. other side Ajay was enjoying Jalal face expression and thought it is just trailer Buddy the picture is still not started there is more shock for you just wait and watch).

Jodha said : yes why not after all you all are Bhai business partner and college friends to we should enjoy with you all what say guys.

Ajay said : good idea Angel and in this way you all will get to know me more and my friends.

(listening Ajay words Ritu Kabir Priya Veer understood that now they are going to see devil jodha and they all agree happily and nodded there head in yes).

Ritu said : so let's go now what are we waiting for.

(after few minutes Ajay Ritu Veer Priya Kabir and Jodha goes to there car and left for Movie theater and Mirza Salima Abdul Bakshi and Jalal goes to there car and follow them and humayu Hamida goes to another car because they are going to there home so they left with driver for there house after one hour they all each Movie theater and watch with full fun and in all that Jodha talk to everyone accept Jalal it's look like he didn't exit there for her and that is making him frustrated and more then her ignorance Ajay teasing is making him angry but he was controlling it and tried to enjoy with them and seeing him Like this Ajay is enjoying it more and intentionally making him angry).

Jodha said : Movie was so good.

Jalal said : yes you are right.

(but she ignore him like he didn't said anything and again in calm voice).

Jodha said : what you all like in the movie.

Priya said : yes it was awesome and the action scene was brilliant.

Ajay said : now I got to know how you become Hitler after seeing lot's of action movie anyone can become Hitler and you are no Different.

Ritu said : oh really then why you didn't become Hitler after all you are raw officer.

Veer said : because he is smart.

Bakshi said : what do you men she is not.

Mirza said : what is there to say everyone know Girls are fool like you.

Ajay said : no I don't agree with you girls are smart like My Angel and My love Ritu and Salima Bakshi.

Abdul said true very true and don't you dare to say anything against Girls Mirza.

Salima said : you didn't take Priya name.

Ajay said : because I was talking about girls not Hitler.

Priya said : I will kill you now you idiot Monkey.

Jodha said : I am hungry now.

Jalal said : let me get something for you all.

(but she ignore him and again in soft voice).

Jodha said : I am hungry guys let's eat something.

Kabir said : so let's go to eat something.

Ajay said : there is one hotel let's go there.

Priya said : but I want to eat on road side food stall.

Salima said : yes I want to enjoy street food i never had because of my profession.

Ritu said : yes it's long time I didn't eaten street food let's have it now.

Jodha said : good idea I wanna have that to.

Bakshi said : me to I was missing this from so much time.

Abdul said : but it will not good for your health guys.

Mirza said : yes it will be unhygienic.

Jalal said : and we can't take risk of your health guys.

Kabir said : they are right you all need to be healthy food.

Ajay said : yes now let's go to hotel we will have same thing as you all want okay.

Jodha said : no no no I wanna eat from there only.

Salima said : and if we will have that for once it will not make us sick Please let us have that.

Priya said : yes in fact we are doctors if anything happen then we will take care of that don't worry.

Veer said : but why are you all hell bent to eat that only.

Ritu said : because it's tasty.

Bakshi Said : and spicy.

Jodha said : just talking about that my mouth is watering now please let us have that.

Ajay said : no means no come with me now.

(seeing no effect on boys for there pleadings girls looked at each other and nodded there head and run to one stall and it was so sudden that boys didn't get time to caught them and after few minutes they all run behind them and saw they already started eating Ritu is eating Bada Pav Bakshi and Salima is eating Pani Puri and Priya Jodha was eating Momo 's and boys looked at them with open mouth seeing the way they all were enjoying these items and the way they all were Moaning in pleasure having one bite).

Ajay in Mind : uff how lucky this Bada Pav is at least.

Jalal in mind : I wish I was on that Momo place.

Abdul in Mind : I never get kissed by her and look how these Pani Puri is on her mouth if I will have power I will destroyed whole stall of Pani Puri now.

Veer in mind : what the hell how could they all eat this don't they know it's unhealthy for them.

Mirza in mind : what the hell happen to them how could they eat this it is so healthy but the way they are enjoying it's look like really tasty.

Kabir in Mind : why girls are so crazy for those street food I never understand.

(they all were thinking in Mind and other side girls were done eating after few minutes Ajay grab Ritu to one corner and in husky voice).

Ajay said : you enjoy those Bada Pav so much right and what About me I to wanna eat that now.

Ritu said : but you never like that but if you want to eat go and eat there is more.

Ajay said : i want to eat from you.

Ritu said : what do you Mean...

(but before she could say more he kissed her with so much love and passion she to responded in same way other side Salima saw Abdul she ma him eat by her hands forcefully and kissed him on his cheek to Veer and Mirza to started having Momo and they love that to and Kabir saw some street kids begging for money so he take some Bada Pav for them and make them eat Bakshi to Join him for that after few minutes Jodha started eating Pani puri and saw Jalal she thought to do something so she in calm voice).

Jodha said : it is not spicy please put some more chilly on it.

(the shop keeper did that so she ask for more and as her wish he put more chilly on it after done with that she take it and goes to Jalal and in soft voice).

Jodha said : you did't eat anything have it it's so much tasty.

(seeing her talking to him that to without fear Jalal is on cloud nine now so he nodded his head in yes and eat one and after eating one his whole tongue started burning that he get teary and looked at her and seeing his teary eyes she get satisfied and in cold voice).

Jodha said : this pain is nothing in front of the pain you given to me you really think I will forgive for what you did with me your pain will heal by water or some sweets but what about me after doing so much you still have guts to come in front of me you are really a jerk.

(saying this she looked at him but get shocked when he eat all the five Pni Puri to and because of that tears fell from his eyes his tongue was red now but he looked at her and in guilty voice).

Jalal said : I know what I did with you was wrong and you are right my pain is nothing in front of the pain I given you but now I regret that and I am sorry for that to Please forgive me and not because I am saying you forgive me when you want and I will earn that forgiveness from you and I am not a coward I will not run from my punishment I will accept everything you wanna do with me and once again I am sorry I am sorry to torture you I am sorry to hurt Ajay and Veer I am sorry for everything I done to you I am sorry.

Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago