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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: pershial

Amaxing di

and very interesting
pls post the next part as soon as possible .
i am waiting for the next part eagerly .
conversation between suraj and his love was little funny it made me smile .thanks to u .


Will he call girja like that even in front of chakor ?
i know he calls her like that privately but what if suddenly he calls girjs like that .i so want to see chakors reaction in future when he calls her like that .


Anyways di
this part was amazing ,
enjoyed it .

Thanks a lot dear!
Happy that you find it interesting!
Finally going to update the next part soon!
Hope you enjoy it too.

Glad that the last part made you smile.
Let's see how he calls when Chakor is there!
May be your wish of seeing Chakor reaction will get fulfilled.
Let's seee ;-)

Thanks once again dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Amazing!

Imli is right, Chakor has built a wall around herself.
Chakor-Girja talk was emotional, I'm happy the girl have found a mother figure.
Love this carefree naughty Suraj. The first time I see this side of him in this story, he must be close to Girja.
Even in this brief scene, Sukor found time to bicker and Suraj's heart dared to dream.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for finding time to write this part after your computer crashed.

Thank you! :-)
I too feel so! Hope the wall falls down soon! ;-)

Glad you liked this Suraj and you all accepted that this Suraj has several shades.
Sukor find time whenever they want, so no issue LOL
Will be updating soon!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Eatifi

good one,i really want to know Chakor's pov,whats actually is in her mind...

she really hides something🤔

Girja mausi is so sweet.😊


so the moment has arrived,
hey Maithili,please make the next part a long one😃



I don't think she hides anything here.
It's just she is not open with her feelings and not ready for a change.

Girija mausi is always sweet LOL

I had made the next part a bit longer, I mean 200 words more LOL! And just needed Sukor scenes. It's all I can do for now else the story will loose it's line!
Hope you understand! ;-)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj

Superb sis..

Sorry for a late rply..as i went for outing i can't post a rply..
Chakor and girija mausi motherly talk was so touching..
Suraj calling girija mausi a love was so cute..
Eagerly waiting for storeroom scene..sis


Thanks a lot dear!
No need to say dear! How many times I should say this ;-)
Hope the storeroom scenes reach at least 10% of your expectations dear!
Let's me know!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Fantastic Chapter

Girija and Chakor's talking was awesome and heartfelt too
Chakor has a past okay thats cool

Thank you buddy!
Glad you enjoyed reading it!
Hope you like the next part too!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello!

Posting this after one week!
How are you all?
Sorry for taking time, just got a bit busy and I was a bit not in mood to write.
So finally here is the closed room scene!
Just before you read, I want to say that limit your expectation as for now Sukor are not lovers, so I just wrote with the flow.
Hope you all enjoy it!

Link to the previous part: Part 20 : New mother! New starting!

Happy reading!

*****

Part 21 : Storeroom chat!


"How are we going to get out of here now?" he blabbered as she tried to get down all she sees is white under her feet.
"Looking good in this white costume!" he commented as he approached her in order to help her get down. 'This man needs a tuition for lovely chat!' his heart screamed while his mind rested calmly.
'Why not saying anything?' his heart questioned.
'What is there to ask? I knew it, so kept quiet!' his mind.
'You selfish creature! You should see how beautiful love his and start to train him to speak in a good way!'
'Oh really? I will think about it!' with attitude.

"I must be looking like a clown and you are saying good!" she threw the rice flour on him which she collected near her feet and put her hands around her chest.
"Ouch Hmmm" rubbing his eyes "watch where you are throwing it Jungli(Wildy)!"
"I'm not Jungli! You are" as she turned towards him with her index finger raised "I... I didn't know" as she sat on the table in Indian style "Stop rubbing! You are causing infection to your eyes!"
"Noooww it'sss entierrly mmyyy fauult" massaging his eyes.
"Wait!" as she caught his moving hands "Don't move!" as she pulled his hands down.
"Now all I needed to hear is you ordering me!" 'This man is going to stay virgin and unmarried for all his life!' his hear face palmed while his mind shrugged as if it didn't hear anything.

"Yes!" and pulled back his hands again as he was going to put them in work for his eyes "Relax!" and she held his cheek in one hand and lifted his eye lids a bit with the other one as she blew air making him quiet of anything.
After few seconds of this treatment to his left eye, she repeated the same to his right one too.
'I feel this situation to be romantic!'
'I feel it normal dude!' his mind.
'Useless you!'
'Who is talking here?' his mind mocked.

"Is it okay now?" she asked with still his cheek in her hand and her face close to his as he opened his eyes to be emerged in to the pool of innocence in her eyes.
The eye lock they shared for few seconds got broken by Chakor as she felt uncomfortable to be like this.
Clearing her throat, she faced him again in her habitual manner "Help me get down!"
"Why are you ordering?" 'Again he is starting! Oh god! Please kill me!' his heart prayed.
"I asked!"
"Oh! Is this the way to ask?" as she put her legs down from the table and he held her by her shoulder.
"Suraj! Why are you like this?"
'Good question dear! I too wanted to know the answer for this question since the day he saw you!' his heart said elated.
'Don't overreact!'

"Like what?" he questioned as she moved to the corner of the table.
"Sometimes I feel like I'm talking to my friend and" as she put her hand on his to get down "sometimes I feel like I'm talking to the Suraj Rajvanshi I met on the road and" she came on her feet but slipped due to the powder on the marble ans was going to hit the table when he held her by her waist and pulled her to a standing positing, making their bodies to be close enough to each other, with her both hands on her shoulder while his one hand around her and the other one rested on his side and few strands of hair covering her face with their eyes locked and heart beating fast with the sudden events.

Getting his hand near her face, he removed those strands and tucked them behind her ear "And sometimes?" his voice came huskily without his knowledge.
'Wow! Lovely!'
'You find everything lovely!' his mind sais sarcastically.
"I don't know!" words came as whispered as she pronounced them.

At the same time, in the kitchen.
"Why is she taking all this time when I said where she can find those products!" Girija exclaimed as she turned off the gaz and started to exit from there.

"Mausi!" Vivaan called as he got down from stairs "Can I get you special coffee?" as he put his hand over her shoulder.
"Chotu! Wait"
"How many times I told you to not call me like this Mausi?" interrupting her.
"I need to get Chakor and few things from storeroom, them I will make your special coffee Chotu!" she said as she precipitated towards her destination as Vivaan trailed behind her.
"You are not at all listening to me Mausi!"
"What do you want Chotu?" she stopped in her track and asked him.
"Stop calling me like that! What if Imli hear that? She will be mocking me for my life time when she comes to know about my nickname Chotuuu!" his expression going in all direction as if he saw a ghost.

Back to the storeroom.
Eyes locked since 10 seconds and his hands resting on her back and her cheek while hers on his shoulders, heat radiating between both the bodies, the atmosphere turning in to something new for both.
'This is the beginning! Get hold of it and go far!' his heart encouraged.
'Get back to earth soon buddy else it will be awkward if you continue to listen to your heart!' his mind advised.
"Beautiful eyes you have!" words flow from him.
"Hmmm" she hummed as she didn't know what they are doing and how she is being this close with him using her blocked mind.

Outside!
"Chotu? Who is that Mausi!" Imli questioned as she made her appearance.
"No one!" Vivaan came first with the reply and turned towards Girija "Mausi! You wanted to go somewhere if I'm not wrong!"
"Yeah Yeah" and she precipitated again in her direction.
"Want something dear?" he questioned at her lovingly.
"Nooo" she trailed "But now I want to know who is this Chotu! cute baby name!"
"It's me that baby!" he muttered as he passed his hand over his hair "Mausi was talking about someone she knew! Nothing else!"
"Ohhh" went into a thinking mode.

Back to the spot.
"Suraj!"
"Hmmm" he breathed hearing his name from her in the confined space they are sharing.

TOK TOK TOK

"Chakor! Are you there?"
"Girija Mausi!" she spelt as she widened her eyes as Suraj had the same expression as her with their proximity.
She distanced herself from him as he removed immediately his hands.
"Chakor!" again she was called from outside.
"Ahaan(Yes) Maussi!"
"Why did you close the door dear? How will I get you out now?" as both Suraj and Chakor neared the door.
"Lo" he cleared his throat "Where is the spare key of the side door?" he asked as he eyed the hidden door on the side and his eyes were followed by Chakor as she sighed.
"Suraj! You are inside!"
"Haan! Where is that key!"
"It's lost since months!" she exclaimed as if she did a big blunder.
"Lost!" both exclaimed as they heard Girija and faced each other with the same look.

*****

Thanks you so much for reading!
How was it?
Whatever you want to throw is welcomed!
So even LIKES and COMMENTS

Okay buddies!
Next part will be mostly in the end of this week or starting of the next one as I will be busy in my training!

Next part: Part 22 : Awkwardness

- Maithili

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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi maithu di..
It was so cute update...
Loved the sukor talks as well as their eyelocks..
Suraj mind and heart fight was so funny..
I just loved tis part alot..
Eagerly waiting for the next update...

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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Loved sukor moment & their eyelock😊
The battle of suraj heart & mind was funny😆
Vivan & girja talk funny loved the way vivan was hiding his pet name from imli😆
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update.
Vivaan-Girja talk was funny.
Loved Sukor eyelock.
Can't believe Suraj told Chakor that she has beautiful eyes. They'll feel awkward the next time they meet.
Sukor's expression when they heard Girja's voice was hilarious.
Will they still be locked inside in the next part?
Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you!
Will sure try to continue soon!

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