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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello buddies!

Finally the next part is here!
Hope you all like it!

Link for the previous part: Part 19 : Welcome home!

Happy reading!

*****

Part 20 : New mother! New starting!

"Di!"
"Hmmm" Chakor turned towards her sister as they were lying side by side on the king size bed.
"Thank you is nothing compared to whatever you did and you are still doing for me but it's all I can say with my love for you!" and hugged her "Lub you Di!"
"Keep few of your love for Vivaan too!" and she laughed a little carefree laugh.
"Diii!" and she hide her face in her sister's embrace.

"Maa and Papa will be happy seeing you happy like this!"
"They will be more happy when they see you married and happily leading your life."
"My sister has grown up but still talking like child!" freeing herself from the embrace.
"Stubborness is a children thing, am I right?"
"Yeah!"
"So you are a child yourself Di!" and she giggled "Why don't you see what's waiting for your lovely life, outside these brick walls you have contructed around you?"
"No bricks! No walls! I forgot my past but not wanting to build a future for now."
"Then when?"
"When the right time comes!"
"And when will it come!"
"I feel sleepy! Good night!" and she turned the other side, facing the wall.
"Diii! It's not fair! You didn't reply to my question." Imli wailed as a kid but nothing worked in front of Chakor's stubborness.

"Sleep Imli!"
"Hmmm" with a heavy breath "Good night Di!"
"Good night!" she smiled in the darkness of the room.

The morning arrived with new rays of hope, happiness and love.
Getting up earlier, Chakor made her way to the kitchen after freshening up for the day.

"Good morning!" saying this, she entered the kitchen as she found Girija mausi there.
In return she got a smile from her as she was busy in preparing the dough.
"It's really calm here!" she remarked.
"It was dark and calm before all of your arrival." with still smile on her face as she covered the dough before she made her way towards the vegetables present on the kitchen table.
"Hmmm" she hummed understanding what she meant by those words "Can I do something?"
Turning towards her still cutting the carrote "You go and take rest dear! I will do the necessary." and turned back to the veggies.

But Chakor stayed there observing all the movements of Girija.
"Why that look?" she asked as she went to get masala powder in the upper cupboards.
"I learnt to cook myself, so seeing others cooking helps me to improve." smile not leaving her.
Hearing her, Girija turned towards her with a questionning look and getting the queue, Chakor told her long lost story in short making Girija feel sad for the girls.

"If you need anything! Don't hesitate, come and ask me." putting her hand on Chakor's shoulder "I will behave as a responsible mother of 2 daughters!" with smile lingering on her lips.
Seeing her new daughter getting emotional, she added "Go and take rest! I will call you when everything is ready." trying to change the topic.
"No mausi! I will stay here!"
"Hmm" as she again went back to get the masala powder.

"Where did it go?" she turned off the gaz "Need to check all the groceries this afternoon!" and started to move towards the door.
"What do you need mausi? Tell me, I will get it!" Chakor proposed as she saw Girija mausi move.
"I will get it child!"
"Tell me mausi!"

And the stubborness of Chakor won.
She got all the information about where to fing the garam masala and all in the storeroom.

"Just check in the place I told you. Don't close the door. The lock has to be changed."
"Yes Mausi!" as she got out of the kitchen.

At the same time, Suraj got down from stairs, looking here and there as he entered the kitchen.
"Love! Where is my helmet?"
"How many times I have told you to not call me like that?"
"Each time I call you!" as he got near her "What is special for today Love?" as he saw the prepartion for breakfast.
"You didn't change at all!"
"Do you want me to change love? I will just change for you!" as he put his hand around her shoulder.
"Call me mausi then!"
"That's the only thing I can't do for you Love! That word is just old fashioned and you know that you are my first Love forever." and winked at her.
"Drama king!" as she hit him affectionnetly on his hand before getting away from him towards the fridge.

"You will not even call me mausi when the love of your life comes!" she smiled as she took needed items from the fridge.
"You will be always my Love, my darling!"
Shaking her head "You still behave like a child!"
"And it's only beacuse of you, Love!"
"Luckily no one is here to hear you!"
"That's why I talk to you only when alone!"
"I see!"
"Yeah!"
"Why did you come to kitchen in first place?" she asked the question and turned back to the fridge.
"Oh! It's for my helmet!"
"It's inside a white bag in storeroom."
"Thanks Love!" and exited the kitchen.
"The door of" and she stopped in her track as she got to know she is alone there.
Shaking her head, Girija continued her work.

KN in his room, with his phone stuck to his ear:
"Send the carpenter as soon as possible!"
"Yeah! This afternoon is ok!"
"Ask him to bring everything needed to repair the door."
"Ok!"
"Hmm" and he disconnected the call.

"Got garam masala, coriender powder and" and she started to check box by box and bottles

CLAK

"Door!" she screamed as she stabilised herselef on the table as she turned leaving the rice powder bottle hanging "How will I go out now?"
"Who is there?" a known voice echoed in the room as her hand hit the bottle and fell on her, making her a white couching angel.
And next thing she heard is the laughing sound of the man she is calling friend, present infront of her.
"You!" dusting herself "Why did you close the door? Who will open it now?"
"I will! Now!"
She glared at him "Mausi said it's blocked!"
"Love" he murmured and saw her with a haunting expression while his heart said 'Nice opportunity!' and his mind reminded 'This is going to turn in the same way as the last time!'

*****

Thanks a lot buddies!
I don't know what you all think as I stopped here!
Let me know if I receive eggs and tomatoes or pizzas as gifts LOL

See you soon!
Next update in few days as I will be updating PIAOTW before Wednesday!

Next part: Part 21 : Storeroom Chat!

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Interesting update👏
Chakor always avoids topic of marriage
The conversation of girja & chakor was emotional😭
Loved the way suraj talks with girja😊
he is different with her😊
Sukor are locked in store room
Sad that you lost your writings
Still you managed to write
Waiting for next
Edited by katheriene - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update maithu
Like the way the sisters are... Chakor has a past??

Loved just loved suraj girija bonding cho chweet..

Ahhahan you stopped at the right time not fair... My antennas are raising

Waiting for the next update..

Sad you lost your writing... Have a external hard drive to save your work
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amaxing di
and very interesting
pls post the next part as soon as possible .
i am waiting for the next part eagerly .
conversation between suraj and his love was little funny it made me smile .thanks to u .


Will he call girja like that even in front of chakor ?
i know he calls her like that privately but what if suddenly he calls girjs like that .i so want to see chakors reaction in future when he calls her like that .


Anyways di
this part was amazing ,
enjoyed it .
Edited by pershial - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing!
Imli is right, Chakor has built a wall around herself.
Chakor-Girja talk was emotional, I'm happy the girl have found a mother figure.
Love this carefree naughty Suraj. The first time I see this side of him in this story, he must be close to Girja.
Even in this brief scene, Sukor found time to bicker and Suraj's heart dared to dream.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Thanks for finding time to write this part after your computer crashed.
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Posted: 7 years ago
good one,i really want to know Chakor's pov,whats actually is in her mind...
she really hides something🤔

Girja mausi is so sweet.😊


so the moment has arrived,
hey Maithili,please make the next part a long one😃



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update👏

Chakor always avoids topic of marriage
The conversation of girja & chakor was emotional😭
Loved the way suraj talks with girja😊
he is different with her😊
Sukor are locked in store room
Sad that you lost your writings
Still you managed to write
Waiting for next

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you loved this part and especially Suraj's interaction with Girija!
Yup dear, I was sad but by rewriting it, I got to add few more things! ;-)
And I'm super duper happy that you all liked it!
Hope it continues!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Nice update maithu

Like the way the sisters are... Chakor has a past??

Loved just loved suraj girija bonding cho chweet..

Ahhahan you stopped at the right time not fair... My antennas are raising

Waiting for the next update..

Sad you lost your writing... Have a external hard drive to save your work

Thanks a lot dear!
Glad you liked it!
Chakor & past? I think she discussed about it with Imli few parts before! :-|

Happy that you loved Giriraj combo!
What to do dear? When I start the storeroom scene, I need to continue it until it ends, that's y stopped!
Keep the antenna raised, let's hope for the best there!

Yup dear!
That's what I do mostly but as it's my work machine, I thought to leave it as it is but it just crashed on the wrong day!
But luckily my work was not damaged!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb sis..
Sorry for a late rply..as i went for outing i can't post a rply..
Chakor and girija mausi motherly talk was so touching..
Suraj calling girija mausi a love was so cute..
Eagerly waiting for storeroom scene..sis


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Posted: 7 years ago
Fantastic Chapter

Girija and Chakor's talking was awesome and heartfelt too
Chakor has a past okay thats cool

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